That was such a sad and beautiful one shot. It gave me goosebumps and gave me teary eyes :-(
I loved how you wrote this, how Tonks was confused about where she was, and what had happened. And her pain at hearing Harry and Ginny being called mum and dad. I'm glad that Tonk's got to see that he was being well looked after and that Teddy knew who she and Remus were.
That was seriously so sad and I felt like crying, you wrote that wonderfully and brilliantly. You're so talented! Report Review
Sam... Do you want to make me cry!
This is one of the more different pieces i've read of yours as I tend to read your darker things however this suits you just as well! I really like the way you introduce this piece with her being all disorientated.
Teddy is just the cutest thing ever and I felt so sorry for Tonks when she saw Teddy calling Harry daddy and Ginny mummy because i can just imagine how I would feel if I ever saw Lily do this to anyone.
Also the story that Harry told Teddy was super cute because it just showed how much he hadnt forgotten everyone and was just trying to do the right thing by Teddy. I love it Sam!Author's Response: Summer... Yes, I do. Everyone must cry. :P
Teddy is just adorable and I love him. I know, that would just be terrible to hear. So sad. I loved writing Harry's story. It just felt like something he would do, he would never forget.
Thank you and I can't wait to listen to the podcast. :) Report Review
This was a brilliant story. It was truley touching, and I still have tears in my eyes :) Great job!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm gald you liked it. :)
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Okay, I'm seriously bawling right now. This is such a sweet and wonderful idea. I like how you ended it with "the light faded." It gives it some sort of touch. And what Dora said to Teddy while he was sleeping hit the spot, it just made the tears start. Teddy is so much like Harry in the fact he never really knew his parents. I think that's why he was destined to be Teddy's Godfather.Author's Response: Aww! Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. :) Report Review
Aww... I love this!! It's so sweet. I wrote one like this, it's called No More Black Roses. You should read it. From this, I think you would enjoy it. But you story was great!!Author's Response: Thank you!
I will! :) Report Review
You succeeded in making me tear up :)
Truly beautiful storyAuthor's Response: Aww! :)
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What a sad and sweet story!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
You have me all teary-eyed...
So good... so sad... and you know I just love reading/writing sad stories... such emotion packed into a one shot... A mum watching over her child... boo hoo.
So good, Heir... I loved it. And I especially love Harry's story about his brilliant friends.
Great job! So wonderfully touching and heart-tugging. Thanks so much for writing it!
And of course... the wonderful quote from Eminem... so awesome how you used it with Tonks and Teddy... Just beautiful!
Take a bow! 10/10.
Dark WhisperAuthor's Response: Dark Whisper!
I wrote this story while I had a song called Lux Aeterna from Two Steps from Hell on - I cried while writing it. The song is so beautifully sad.
Thank you so much! I love your reviews!
*Bows* Thank you for the 10/10.
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