It is so interesting! It kept me on my toes the whole time! I think I completely chewed my nails off! I am an obsessed 13 year old HP fan I started when I was 12! HP completely changed my life and this story is amazing! One of the best fan fiction books of HP, I've ever read! Keep on writing more books! You are an amazing author!Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm so glad you think so! Really? It did? That's what I'm going for, so I hope you're on your toes for the entire novel. (i don't hope that you chew your nails off :[).
hahaha, I'm obsessed with HP too, obviously. But I'm older than 13 (not by too much I'm 16.) haha. But I love all my fellow potter fans! It changed my life too! I don't know who I'd be without it!
THANK YOU! that means so much to me, seriously. It made my day!
I will keep writing, no worries! Updates may be slow, but they will come, I promise!
again, THANK YOU! Report Review
I get the impression that Draco is having second thoughts about finding Ron. And also I think that things might be hotting up with Harry and Hermione. Good chapter and 10/10 plz update with answers soon.Author's Response: we'll just have to wait and see, now won't we? ;)
I will update soon. This story is my priority at the moment as well as "Grey Clouds" so those will be updated the most.
But have no fear, for answers will arrive soon! Chapter three is where draco enters hermione's life. :)
Thank you so much for the review! Much appreciated! Report Review
I like how you did Draco's perspective, very believable and I can't wait to see where he goes! This angle on him definitely gives him some depth and its a refreshing approach to his side of the story!
Lovely job.Author's Response: thank you so much!
I'm so glad that Draco seems believable because sometimes I feel like I write him and he's OOC, you know?
I'm glad you're excited to read more.
I'm trying to write this from three different perspectives: Draco, Hermione, and Harry. Harry's hasn't come up yet, but it eventually will. There will also be a small Ron POV.
again, thank you! It means so much to me. Report Review
it's awesome. i cant't wait for a next chapter. i hope you will write it quickly , sryy for my eng, i'm from france ; )Author's Response: thank you so much!
I'm working on chapter two, so don't worry! :)
your english is fine. :)
i'm so glad you like this! It really means a lot to me. Report Review
Not a bad start to your story. Though it will be interesting to see how you work Draco into it. 9/10 and please update soon.Author's Response: thank you :)
Yes, Draco will come into the story in the next chapter, so no worries.
I'll update as soon as I can :)
thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
hello i am a member of the 26 clans of purebloods that rule england. my family crest is a lion so in sences i am my family lioness. i love the tittle and the story so far but please dont diss the lioness thank you!Author's Response: uhm. okay..? Report Review
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