its a good start but dont do the same story just in a different veiw because by end you are tried of reading the same storyAuthor's Response: It's only for this chapter, the rest are different. Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
I love this story! I hope you write some more soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I will be updating shortly. Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
I like the idea of the story. But is it really necessary to have each character repeat the same thing? I don't mean the first line they each had, but the entire monologues. None of them said anything new. WHAT they were saying set it up as a good story, but having to read it three times is boring. I'll be honest, I skimmed the last one.
As for what they were each saying, I enjoyed it. There was not too much of telling, not showing, but overall it was good. I think each girl has a nice distinctive personality and their own unique view. I'm impressed with the way you're writing from three characters' POVs.Author's Response: Thanks so much for your constructive critisism. But to answer your question, I wrote with them saying practically the same thing, so you could see the differences in how they handle the same situations. I appreciate your honesty. Thanks. I hope you continue reading. Thank you so much for your review. :) Report Review
Amazing. Hurry up and update soon!!Author's Response: Thanks, I will! :) Report Review
update soon!!! awesum story so far!!!
i luv Mia, she's so out there and just awesum!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Mia is very fun to write, I'll update very soon, thanks for the review! :D Report Review
Yay!! New chapters! I absolutely adore this story, the story line is thought out really well. I love the idea with the triplets and how Mia takes charge, I'm alot like her! Hurry up and update soonAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you can relate to one of my characters. I'll update ASAP! :D Report Review
Yay! You finally updated! I'm really living this story, it is so good. I have ALOT in common with Mia.Author's Response: Thanks, I had alot of fun writing Mia's POV in this chapter. Next one will be up very soon. :) Report Review
you did a really good job capturing the audience in the first 2 chapter! can't wait for the next chapter. (:Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter will be up in a few days, thanks for your review. :) Report Review
Hey it's me again I'm probably getting annoying. But what can I say, I like your writing! Please write more to this story, it particularly intrests me. I have ALOT incommon with Mia.Author's Response: Haha, of course I'm not annoyed! I love your reviews! I'm glad you like my writing style, you flatter me. I'll also update this one as fast as I can. :) Report Review
this chapter was aesome! cant wait to read moreAuthor's Response: Thanks, I appreciate that! :) Next chapter currently awaiting validation. Report Review
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