I can't believe that dare! That is such a funny yet terrible dare.
It's great to see Rose acting like Hermione and ignoring James and Albus because of the dare.
Poor Scorpius being dragged into it though.
I really liket that security got them though and both Harry and Draco agreed that they should be arrested.
James is so meant in this with the idea for the dare. What could he have done that scared them more then what the Ministry and that would have done?
Hehe a very good one shot :D Did you win the challenge? Report Review
I love it. I laughed my butt off when i read it!Author's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
Hahaha...That's hilarious. Team Voldy shirts, oh my Godric. I couldn't stop laughing. That would have been awesome as a short story too. You have some mistakes in there, you might want to get a beta; you were changing from first person to third person, but that's okay, haha, it was funny xDAuthor's Response: Haha. It's supposed to go from first to third and back; the beginning and end is Albus telling you the story and the middle is the story. I tried first for that and hated it, I kept deleting it. >.<
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
Hilarious! Great job! :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I really love the dialogue of this story, you've written their personalities really well with their speech, it's great how they're all different, with James being cocky, Rose being full of common sense, Albus being stubborn, and Scorpious being a loyal best friend. I'm trying to get into Next-gen more, so this was really nice to read, for giving personality traits away :D
I really like both James' and Albus' relationship, it is just how brothers act, haha! ;)
So, really nice story, sweet, and it's great how you gave the charactors such clear personalities, in such a short piece of writing :D
10/10Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Report Review
ummm...did james get arrested too? or just punishment from harry?Author's Response: James wasn't seen selling the t-shirts so no he's not getting arrested. Report Review
That was stupid of them.Author's Response: Haha. Best review ever!
Thank you! Report Review
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