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Review #1, by maraudertimes A Dare's a Dare

14th March 2014:
Hello! Once more! How are you by the way? :)

Oh goodness. This one-shot is just filled with face-palm moments.

First, James, what were you thinking? That's the worst dare in the history of dares. At least you've got a spot on characterization of someone whose name is James Sirius though. I still want to smack him on the head, however.

Then you have Albus. Goodness Albus, *anything* James would have done would have been better then actually going through with that! And to drag Scorpius along? And Scorpius, provoking him into doing it in the first place? My goodness, at least it's good to k now teenage boys will be teenage boys, no matter what era, and no matter what family.

The one shining beacon in this one-shot was Rose. Obviously it's the Weasley women who know what to do in ANY situation. I loved the little quip at the end about how if you want to survive you always listen to Rose. Goodness, if Albus wants to survive, he should listen to anyone other than James! But Rose was awesome. I loved how she's got the Hermione morals/intelligence, but enough Ron in her that she's good enough friends with Al, James, and Scorpius that she knew about the dare beforehand.

Spectacular job, you handled the topic of selling pro-Voldemort t-shirts amazingly, in a humorous and witty way. Your writing style never ceases to disappoint and I honestly adore everything about this!

Superb job!
Lo:)

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Author's Response: Hello!

You know, I didn't think people were still reading this one-shot. It's just so... random. :P

Haha! James obviously wasn't thinking; he lacks the ability to be serious. It's like a sickness really. It's so much fun to write. :P

I know, what was Albus thinking? I wrote it and yet I still can't believe they would actually do something like this. Although, I kinda think Scorpius deserves being roped in for egging them both on and thinking he wouldn't be. Karma. :P

Rose is the one to go to, she knows what to do and she knows what to say and, if it was anything else, there's enough Ron in her that she might have helped in some way. But this was too much and Albus really should have listened to her.

Thank you so much for leaving the most amazing reviews!

Sam.


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Review #2, by alicia and anne A Dare's a Dare

17th March 2013:
I can't believe that dare! That is such a funny yet terrible dare.
It's great to see Rose acting like Hermione and ignoring James and Albus because of the dare.
Poor Scorpius being dragged into it though.
I really liket that security got them though and both Harry and Draco agreed that they should be arrested.
James is so meant in this with the idea for the dare. What could he have done that scared them more then what the Ministry and that would have done?
Hehe a very good one shot :D Did you win the challenge?

Author's Response: It's a horribly amusing dare. And it feels even worse because it was James, Harry Potter's son, who suggested it. Don't you think?

Haha yeah, they had to be punished. :P

I don't know, it was never posted that I remember.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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Review #3, by james girl A Dare's a Dare

27th April 2012:
I love it. I laughed my butt off when i read it!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Review #4, by SeverusSnape15 A Dare's a Dare

7th September 2011:
Hahaha...That's hilarious. Team Voldy shirts, oh my Godric. I couldn't stop laughing. That would have been awesome as a short story too. You have some mistakes in there, you might want to get a beta; you were changing from first person to third person, but that's okay, haha, it was funny xD

Author's Response: Haha. It's supposed to go from first to third and back; the beginning and end is Albus telling you the story and the middle is the story. I tried first for that and hated it, I kept deleting it. >.<

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing! :)


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Review #5, by xXmoonshoespotterXx A Dare's a Dare

23rd May 2011:
Hilarious! Great job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #6, by Nynfadora A Dare's a Dare

27th April 2011:
I really love the dialogue of this story, you've written their personalities really well with their speech, it's great how they're all different, with James being cocky, Rose being full of common sense, Albus being stubborn, and Scorpious being a loyal best friend. I'm trying to get into Next-gen more, so this was really nice to read, for giving personality traits away :D

I really like both James' and Albus' relationship, it is just how brothers act, haha! ;)

So, really nice story, sweet, and it's great how you gave the charactors such clear personalities, in such a short piece of writing :D

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^

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Review #7, by Michelle A Dare's a Dare

23rd April 2011:
ummm...did james get arrested too? or just punishment from harry?

Author's Response: James wasn't seen selling the t-shirts so no he's not getting arrested.

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Review #8, by gryffindoralltheway A Dare's a Dare

23rd April 2011:
That was stupid of them.

Author's Response: Haha. Best review ever!

Thank you!


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