Banner is beautiful. Severus' point of view made me cry so much. The pain, confusion and other emotions he felt when he saw those eyes were really expressed here. And it seems like we've seen a whole new Petunia! It's lovely, very lovely. Oh and if you have time, kindly check out my one shot. It's called Answers and it's a dramione haha.Author's Response: thanks, i love the banner too. I really wanted to get to see the other sides of both of the characters. They seem so one dimensional at some points when that is far from true. Report Review
This was really beautiful! Both of the chapters :) I love it! I'm adding this to my favorites! ekroman
10/10Author's Response: thanks for your review :D Report Review
Very good, I liked it a lot. Keep up writing :DAuthor's Response: Oh I will, it keeps my imagination flowing and improves my spelling etc. Report Review
Gosh! I just love this. There is so much about Petunia that was left unexplored and unexplained and I find her fascinating. I have always wondered how the darker side of someone's emotions could cause them to be so cruel to a baby as she was to Harry. Great job!Author's Response: this isnt over yet, there will be more, one about Snape and one about someone else but i'm not sure yet... possibly james or Albus depends on my mood. Anyway thanks for reviewing :D Report Review
I liked this! I think Petunia is such a deep and unexplored character; it's great to get a closer look. Just two things:
1. It is spelled "Dursley."
2. You switched from first person to third person, was that intentional?
But overall, great job!Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it.
1) I will correct that
2) Yes that was intentional Report Review
I love it! As soon as I read the review that you had left for me, I went to find this. It's amazing how much was unsaid in such a short amount of time (if that makes sense). It's also kind of ironic how we both posted them at almost the same time, and they kind of connect. Weird, but cool.
Great story! I love it.Author's Response: thanks, its really strange. I wrote mine a few weeks ago, but only got a chance to post it today. Yeah they do fit. Is Dumbledore influencing us from beyond the grave ;D
Anyway, I'm glad that you liked mine thanks for the review back Report Review
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