I listened to the song love the way you lie whilst reading this, it felt fitting to do so :D
The story was fantastically written, I loved that they were fighting and yelling at each other. You described it all so wonderfully, I could imagine it all playing out in my head, I reckon they would have been like that if they ever got together, or if they were Head boy and Head girl together.
That was really amazing! Report Review
This was a fun little one-shot to read xD I love a random Dramione once in a while, and since I wanted to get you one step closer to 750 reviews, I decided to do it with this!
I liked this short piece - the way you showed their interactions in segments. Somehow, I could feel the chemistry and tension boiling at the surface.
Your writing style was good and I loved how you captured Draco and Hermione. The little fight snippets were awesome and I could honestly live my life just reading suck kind of scenes!
The ending was the most wicked of all, and I really chuckled when I read it. This one-shot said so much in such few words!
The over all pace, flow, structure, plot, and grammar was fine. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!! Great work, Sam =)
P.S. I love the title of the one-shot too. Again, it says so much ;) Report Review
Nice! I have a question though. Is this song to be based a LITTLE bit on the song, Love the Way You Lie, by Jennifer Lopez???
10/10 once again good job! *cLaPpInG*Author's Response: The song is I Love the Way You Lie by Eminem and Rihanna. :)
Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I usually cannot stand one shots but this was done so brilliantly. Excellent,great job. Do you think you could do one for the song hate me by blue October for Draco and Hermione? I'd love it sooo muchAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll listen to the song. Look out for it. ;) Report Review
That was really...well, not nice, because it isn't nice that they fight, but nice in a way, because they know that they like each other but just don't want to confess it...
Really nice done!Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Wow! That was intense! I really liked it... and I loved that they fight... yes! Bring out the fight in both of them!
Very good job at being intense. I only wish there were more... like the making up... Hahahahahah!
What a great read!
Great job! 10/10 for Intensity!
Dark WhisperAuthor's Response: Thank you!
This is actually going to be a series...as soon as I start writing the next part lol.
If you like intense, you should go read Takin' Back My Love. :D Report Review
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