I wonder what's making Hermione go to the tower all the time and be so sad? Although I like that Draco comes up to make sure she's okay, I like that he's on their side now and calling them all by their first names.
That was really sad and sweet with Hermione and Draco where she was asking him to show her what love is. I felt really sorry for her that she didn't believe in it all, and that she was worried about what the next day would bring.
I loved that ending, with the war starting and the shadows coming towards them, and then you ending it. I like to imagine that everyone survived and they won the war. With Hermione and Draco living happily ever after :D Report Review
This was really cool. I loved the characterization of everyone, especially Hermione and Draco. It was just incredibly interesting, watching them interact the way they did, especially on the tower. And this line: "I did. At three o'clock in the morning.' Had me giggling a bit, because it was really funny to picture the look on Draco's face as he said that. I almost want more of this, but at the same time, I respect where you stopped it, because if you had written a battle of sorts, it would have taken away from the whole love thing. Really excellent! :)
-Katherine045 (Slytherin)Author's Response: Yeah, lots of people have talked about wanting me t ocontinue. And, though I thought about it, I just can't see any reason too.
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing! :) Report Review
i love the Ginny part and it seems oh so trueAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Your beginning was quite strong with Hermione being shut off from the world and her own feelings. The reason of Draco and the rest of the Trio being on good terms was enjoyable, specifically the desisting of name calling.
I liked that Draco was still sarcastic though he did come off as being too soft for an 18-year-old (in my own opinion). I really liked this line thought, "I don't have it, but I feel it and I want it and I see it everyday." It certainly describes where Draco could stand at this point in his life. And Draco's explanation to Hermione of checking on her when she goes to the Astronomy Tower is sweet :)
The overall message is heartening and something we should all remember!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
i like ur story, and id like to continue reading it :)Author's Response: This is just a one-shot for now but I've been asked to continue it before and you never know ;)
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This is my FAVORITE story of yours... hands down... bar none... It is my FAVORITE!
I love it! LOVE IT! And I've Favorited it so that I can re-visit it every now and then and get INSPIRED!
That he SEES love EVERYWHERE and WANTS it... is AMAZING! Ah!
This is EXACTLY how I see Draco... You hit it... in an awesome conversation with Hermione in the Astronomy Tower... just a gorgeous, beautiful conversation.
I LOVE IT! You did an EXCELLENT job here, my author friend.
11/10 in getting his feelings of love out... and TEACHING HER something about love... yes... LOVE IS REAL!
Bravo! I'm giving you my special award. I'm throwing long-stemmed fragrant, romantic, red roses at your feet!
Can you hear the applause of the standing ovation you are receiving? Yeah!
Take a bow, honey... you deserve credit for this... my favorite fanfic of yours!
P.S. One of the most beautiful banners I've ever seen... wow from TDA!Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much, Dark Whisper!
11/10? I gotten 10/10 before but NEVER an 11! Did you really think it was that good?
If you like this banner just wait until you see the ones for my other stories, they're amazing!
Thank you again :) Report Review
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