I'm sure you're probably bored of getting reviews from me by now, but I couldn't resist leaving another one on this story. I've read both Animal Magnetism and Human Nature, then after I left a review for Facing Tomorrow, I realised that you had written all three! (Dumb moment, sorry!) So I had to try reading Matters of the Hart as well, because I've loved everything else I've read by you.
This story was amazing. I read it all in one go yesterday and the only reason I didn't leave a review when I'd finished was because the time was socially unacceptable and I needed sleep! I seriously love your writing so much!
Tabitha is a great character. The way you write her and all the other characters makes them realistic and believable - they have flaws, like normal people do. And I love James! The pair of them are so adorable together and I think you developed their relationship really well, because nothing seemed out of character for the two of them, like how Tabby didn't suddenly love James as soon as she kissed him, and that they still fight even though they're going out. I can't tell you how glad I was when Peter broke up with her! I've got to say, I agreed with some of the boys' nicknames for him!
Also I love the mystery surrounding Tabitha's mother and the danger that she now feels. The diary was really interesting and you wrote the emotion Tabby felt reading it really well. I would never have guessed when she first got it that it was going to be such a big part of the plot. Her mother sounds like an amazing witch and I'm so curious to know who it is that is trying to kill Tabby now - although I'm really glad she has James who she trusts and who makes her feel safe!
I really can't tell you how much I loved reading this story (I've already used a ridiculous amount of exclamation marks!) and you are one of my favourite authors on this site. I hope you update soon and I can't wait for the next chapter!
nott theodore :)Author's Response: Get bored of reviews? NEVER! And you write such lovely, thoughtful, constructive reviews too :) Thanks so much for checking this story out, I'm really glad you liked it.
This story has been on the backburner for some time and to be honest I'm not entirely sure when I'll get back to it, but I definitely intend to finish it. I know exactly where the story is going and how it's going to end, but I just haven't had much luck with writing it of late.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing, and I'll try to update soon. Report Review
I'm actually kind of glad they broke up. It didn't happen in the way I hoped for but oh well.
Ps. Is Tabitha really so blind that she doesn't realize James fancies her?Author's Response: Well Tabby hates James and hatred can be rather blinding :) Thanks for reading! Report Review
Why do I get the feeling that Peter is the traitor?Author's Response: you'll just have to wait and see :) Report Review
Of course no one likes him- HE'S THE BAD GUY! Like duh!! Lolll I love ur story and Tabby:) Keppwriting!Author's Response: Hm well you'll have to wait and see, won't you? :) Than ks for the review. Report Review
Ok so I know it's been quite awhile since I've reviewed but here it is:
great chapter- loving tabitha and James banter . But not the biggest fan of rheydyn though .
Yet another cliffie! You must really love writing them!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) Report Review
Took you long enough!! Just kidding! I love this story but I kinda forgot what it was about. I think I may have to re-read some of it... OH WELL! Anyways! Yay! Good job you got another chapter done! (*insert more encouraging word vomit here* Sorry! I'm not sure what else to say so excuse me while i go yell at my brain for not thinking properly!)
Keep it up!
~JatoriAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
"Poor Peter...nobody seems to like him (Except Tabby!)" - I swear I thought the same thing while reading it! :)
And I'm slightly suspicious because my gut tells me Peter's up to no good.. but we'll see I guess :D
Awesome story so far!
Just like your other stories *___*
Keep it up!
PS: *insert whine* WHY DIDN'T SHE KISS JAMES? *sobb* :DAuthor's Response: Oh dear, poor peter, everyone does seem suspicious of him. And as far as kissing James goes...well I need to up the tension and drama somehow! LOL :D
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Report Review
Okay, so I fell out of my chair when I saw that this story was updated. No, I'm not joking. Although that might have something to do with the fact that I was leaning backwards in my chair anyways. Well, whatever.
This chapter was really cute! It was freaking adorable when James got all nervous in front of Tabby's dad! :D And I'm glad that the Potter's are helping keep her protected, too. That should make her feel better!
Great chapter!Author's Response: Hahaha... yeah I guess it's been a while! This story is still giving me trouble but I'm trying, I promise I am! I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks for the review :) Report Review
i love this story :P i cant wait for the next chapter, it is just such an interesting plot lineAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
OMG! I finished reading the 29 chapters in about 2 days! My friend suggested it, I read it and its just EPIC!!
I love the way that Lucy from AM and Tabitha both like a subject that has something to do with nature... Care of magical creatures and Herbology...
This is so awesome!!! Update fast, pleasseee!Author's Response: Oh wow, this review made me smile so much! Firstly, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story...that you like both stories! But it's so cool that someone recommended my story to you! Wow...that just blows my mind :D
I love the idea of giving my characters a little talent that's a bit quirky, there are just so many stories out there where the main character is an amazing Quidditch player or is super smart or incredibly funny etc. I like my character's strong points to be things that aren't so popular, like gardening or looking after animals. I think it makes the characters more realistic so I'm glad you like it.
I'm about to update Animal Magnetism (like literally as soon as I post this review response) but my next goal is to write the next chapter of Matters of the Hart so I hope to update really, really soon.
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
This story is so addicting. I am hooked. I love the storyline with Tabitha's mom and the Death Eaters! It's so intriguing! Also in love with James/Tabitha. They are so cute!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) Report Review
good chapter- i liked how you mentioned Peeves
lol for lily and james :)Author's Response: Ah I do love Peeves, I have to involve him every story somewhere :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
MYSTERY! hehe cant wait to see where this goes!
naw... james is such a cutie!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying the story. Report Review
AH CLIFFIE!!! you enjoy writing them dont you?
haha great job soo far!Author's Response: Hehehe I do love cliff hangers but I don't go out of my way to write them, they just sort of...happen. Thanks for the review :) Report Review
creepy mysterious person lurking in the shadows... thats slightly concerning
story is flowing really well and im interested to learn more about the "mystery person"Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for all the reviews :) Report Review
good chapter and i love all the chapter images soo far!
haha lily is plotting to go to the ball :) just like her mother
great story soo far- so glad i started reading this!Author's Response: Yeah, I thought I had to throw some Ginny in there, after all she is her only daughter and with Ginny being so much like Mrs Weasley, I figured the tradition should continue. Report Review
its nice how she can relate to her mother
but i feel bad for james though... :(Author's Response: Yeah, I like the idea of the diary meaning she can still sort of connect with her mum in a way even though she's dead. Thanks for the review. Report Review
naw soo sweet... her mother seems great! and its funny how she called her diary sabino
i wonder why rowan and natalie are acting so strangely...rowan and natalie sitting in a tree...hehe :PAuthor's Response: :) Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story Report Review
naw... so cute! she got her mothers diary!
annie is set on the idea of a ball isnt she? i dont think shes going to give up on the idea...
loving the story soo far!Author's Response: Heheheh Annie is certainly strong willed, she knows what she wants and she's determined to get it! Report Review
Alexander the not-so-great is funny! i actually really think hes a great addition to the story!
this chapter made me smile a lot! i was laughing because i could imagine the great hall when Alexander waslked in after being pranked!
this chapter was really well written! and james was cute as well- in his own way !Author's Response: Thanks, I like this chapter too, it was one that I found really easy to write, it just sort of flowed out of me. Thanks for all the reviews! Report Review
Rheydyn is a bit annoying though...like how shes constantly crying ... but i guess shes not too bad.
haha im guessing natalie likes rowan?
good job!Author's Response: Ah, you'll just have to read on to see what happens between natalie and rowan. Thanks for the review :) Report Review
YES! shes prefect! TAKE THAT JAMES!
loved the chapter and i loved how Prof. Sprout mentioned the Whomping Willow in her speech!
haha so the Reeds moved to Wollongong! (im happy cuz i actually know where that is- cuz im an Aussie- because in fanfics they always say that they've moved to some place that i have no idea where it is)
Good job on such a good chapter!Author's Response: Yes! I'm an Aussie too, which is why I had them move to Australia...I thought it could be my little Aussie tribute :) Thanks for the review. Report Review
i liked how you did this chapter! it introduces her friends and her past better! i enjoyed reading this chapter and i like the rivalry between Tabitha and James!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the chapter Report Review
This was good. Update soon. 9/10 : )Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Report Review
ok so i've started reading this story like i promised and i've got to say: i already love it!
im keen to see where this goes and i just love the title!
i'll start reading the next chapter as soon as i send this review- so you'll be hearing from me soon!Author's Response: Omigosh, so many new reviews! How exciting! I'm glad you decided to read this, I hope you like it :) Report Review
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