Author's Response: Thank you heaps
I cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope it's up soon, you're such an amazing writer!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Loved this chapter! I could really see the pure, innocent love between James and Lily and Ruby and Sirius. Can't wait for the next chapter!:DAuthor's Response: I am so glad. They're such amazing couples and so fun to play with and write. Thanks heaps. Report Review
oh my god! please update soon, i love this story an dcant wait, please!Author's Response: Ill put he next one up as soon as i finish it :) Thank you so much! Report Review
nice chapter i almost started crying when Ruby woke up, hahaha stupid maybe? haha but i really love this storyAuthor's Response: Awww no not stupid at all. Lovely to hear my story can have that kind of effect :) Thank you so much! Report Review
i love this story please finish it!Author's Response: I will i promise, hopefully have the latest chapter up soon. Thanks heaps :) Report Review
I love this, really love it!. I also hope Serius an d Ruby get together soon;) but sure they do roght??!Author's Response: Thanks heaps! Hope to update soon Report Review
I love this, really love it!. I also hope Serius an d Ruby get together soon;) but sure they do roght??!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh just wait and see :) Report Review
nice start! I really love stories with the maradadours. cant wait to read the rest of it!Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it. Thanks heaps! Hope to hear from you soon :) Next chapter should be up soon fingers crossed Report Review
First of all i love your stories!
and I'm very sorry for your loss, hope you're doing fine.
great chapter update soon :)Author's Response: Thank you so so much! Thanks that means a lot, im getting there. Ill update as soon as i can. Thanks for staying with the story :) Report Review
I really am sorry about your loss, I know what it feels like, I just wanted to say that I absoloutly love this story and all the time while you were away I checked to see if a new chapter had been posted, I promise to stay with this story until its finished xAuthor's Response: Thanks, that means alot, it helps to know you're all still reading after such a large gap in time. Thank you heaps for sticking around. Wow thanks ill try and get it up as soon as i can :) x Report Review
I'm officially in love with this story! It's amazing and has all the good qualities! Action, adventure, drama, love! I can't wait till you update I'm excited to see what happens with snape!!!Author's Response: Wow why thank you so much! Ill update as soon as i can. Thanks heaps :) Report Review
I'm sorry for your loss :'( brilliant chaPter though update soon!!Author's Response: Thanks heaps, means a lot! It's good to know i havent lost one of my fav readers :) I'll out it up as soon as i can, i've got 2 weeks of prac to go then ill be free to write way more. Thanks again. Report Review
Hey x please update soon, i can't bear the wait any longer;)
also, i have a friend who's writing a story on this website and she was wondering how you leave an authors note?
Please update, i miss my sirius and ruby haaha xAuthor's Response: So sorry its taken so long but its now just awaiting validation so i hope you enjoy and let me know what you think. I just write mine and then bold it, thats all. Thanks for staying there. Report Review
i loved this chapter when will the next one b out?Author's Response: Thank you so much Report Review
Aww, I was so happy when I saw the chapter was up;D x Amazing as always x I've recommended this series to some of my friends and I know some of them are reading it right now(: x
Can't wait for the next update, hopefully it's soon!:D xAuthor's Response: Awww thank you so very much! Wow i cant believe you recommended it, wow im touched! You're words have made my day :) Thank yo again so very much! I hope you enjoy the next chapter but it wont be up until the validators get bcak from their holiday ahah thanks again! x Report Review
first of all i love your story..it is amazing really :)
when i read the preview i liked it but then the first chapters to did not seem to be wrttien really well but i kept reading because i liked the red line of the story and i must say that with few more chapters your writing got much better and i enjoyed reading your story and please i hate sad endings so i hope too so there will be at least one story about sirius with a happy ending :)
cant wait for you to updateAuthor's Response: Thank you heaps :) I'm so grateful for the reading and reviewing. The beginning of a story is hard to write to be honest especially because the main story was around them as older teenagers not young ones so yeah. I am very glad you enjoyed it though so thank you very much! Report Review
I loved this chapter! And I also loved the party they threw for Sirius and Ruby. Their engagement shows that even in the darkest of times, little things like engagements, marriages, birthdays, etc., can do wonders in lifting up their spirits. Like Dumbledore said in the third movie: "Happiness can be found in even the darkest of times, if one only remembers to switch on the light." I'm very happy that Thea and Remus got back together again. I love how strong Ruby, Sirius, Lily and James are. They are so brave and never hesitate when someone is in trouble. They don't wait, they immediately spring into action. They are amazing. I know that they are only fictional
characters, but I can't help but feel that they are real. I can imagine them doing all that so easily. I can't wait for more! Update soon!
RosalieHaleDiggoryAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! I am so very glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I know thats all i could picture in my head just darkness and then this light sort of surrounding the group as they danced, if that makes sense. Sirius and Ruby and Lily and James are amazing to write, they are so very clear in my mind that they come out quite easily :) I know i feel that all the time, they are so real in my mind, their voices, their spirit, their laughs, everything is so honest and true and i love writing them for people like you who can see it all so easily as well. Thank you so much for reading and i cannot wait for your nest review on the next chapter, it'll be an interesting one to write :) Thanks again! Report Review
Awe such a sweet chapter! I loved every bit of it like always! Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I am so glad that you enjoyed it, really i am! I wil update soon i promise or hope :) Thanks again Report Review
Amazing as always!:D You are my favourite author on hpff for definite:D xAuthor's Response: Aww thank you so so much! That means the world to me :) Hope you enjoy what's to come! :)xx Report Review
Awe that was such an amazingly cute chapter! I love all of them so much. Update soon!!Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much! i will be as quick as i can, i finish prac at the end of next week so then i dont have to divide my focus anymore :) The characters are so amazing to play with and im touched that you think so too and are enjoying it so much! Thanks again :) Report Review
i want to punsh the blacks and voldi in their ass.
they are so cruel and stupid!!!
ruby is a wake! Thank god!
i felt so sad for sirius but they are engaged how CUTE!
anyways great chapter!!!
and last but not least lily and james :DDD
her dream his face! great!
update soon!Author's Response: I know right! They are horrible people, can't even call them human beings! I had been planning their engagement for yonks so it was brilliant to finally write it! :) Thank you so much, i'm so glad you enjoyed it. Lily and James are fun :) The next chapter will hopefully be up soon, so thanks again for reading and reviewing and i hope to hear from you again soon :) Report Review
I love this chapter.:D Ruby's back! Sirius and Ruby are really made for each other. When I read how Sirius was when he thought he lost her, my heart broke. I can't imagine what he must have been feeling after she died. Lily and James, Sirius and Ruby, Remus and Tonks, these are some pairs that will never break. You can't say one name without the other. They would do anything and everything for each other. I wish I could have love like them. Call me crazy, but when I read this story and Hero of War, I feel as if they really happened. Sirius and Ruby, they can't live without each other.
RosalieHaleDiggoryAuthor's Response: Thank you so much i cannot believe how lovely you are, you make my day. Look forward to hearing from you next time :) Report Review
I love this chapter.:D Ruby's back! Sirius and Ruby are really made for each other. When I read how Sirius was when he thought he lost her, my heart broke. I can't imagine what he must have been feeling after she died. Call me crazy, but when I read this story and Hero of War, I feel as if they really happened. Sirius and Ruby, they can't live without each other. Lily and James, Sirius and Ruby, Remus and Tonks, these are some pairs that will never break. You can't say onus name without the other. They would do anything and everything for each other. I wish I could have love like them. You're an awesome writer.:D
RosalieHaleDiggoryAuthor's Response: I love Sirius and Ruby for that reason, they're always so very full of raw emotion and so enjoyable to write :) She's my proudest moment really, creating her and i can see her in my head so clearly. And i would never call you crazy, because i feel everything, when i'm writing i really feel like somewhere out there i would see these brilliant characters for real. Yeah come couples just fit and to be honest that makes it hard for reality...I wish i could love to love they they do as well, i'm writing these moments that i can see so easily and it kills me to know that it may never happen.
Thank you so so very much, every chaoter i read your words and it helps to push me to keep writing :) Report Review
This chapter was amazing, didn't lift my eyes from the page:D Please update really fast, it's torture waiting, when your so hooked into the story;) x
AmyAuthor's Response: Wow i am so very glad to hear that :) I'll try i promise :) Thank you so much for reading and always reviewing :) Report Review
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