Oh no! I've run out of chapters to read :/ Can't wait for the next chapter!! ;)Author's Response: Haha, thanks once again! It was nice to discover I had not one, but THREE reviews on this :) I haven't updated it in a while, but chapter 4 is in the works and WILL appear at some point, I promise.
-Giola Report Review
I love the dueling scene. It was really fun to read. It's cool to read a McGonagall/Tom...even if they aren't really together.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that scene, I hardly ever write 'action' type scenes, it was very difficult to write. Haha, yes they aren't together...yet...there's a vibe. Tom/Minerva is one of my favourite ships, yet you can't really write them as a couple. It's definitely almost always a one-sided relationship, but I won't say anymore at the risk of spoiling things.
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I love this first chapter!! Can't wait to read more!! :DAuthor's Response: Hey Levana!
Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. Report Review
Elsie isn't the only one thinking about the riddle and min ship! It's one of my favourites hence why I'm here! Your writing is excellent is just screams "hey I'm awesome why don't you come and give me a read!" It really is truly amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter of course!
-LpF123 xAuthor's Response: Oh wow, thanks! Does my writing really say that?
I love writing Elsie's lines, having a character comment on a ship like Tom/Min in a story doesn't happen much, she's basically shipping a ship that hasn't even started sailing yet :) It's awesome and basically echoes my fangirly thoughts!
Thank you for yet another review!
-Julia Report Review
Another intriguing chapter! So it wasn't the longest but it was packed with enough to make it a brilliant in depth chapter. That last sentence is just awesome and it's really built up the suspense for the next chapter, I'm dying to know what happens next. The scene was set perfectly and I loved the thoughts that were going through Minerva's mind about how if they duelled again and things like that!
-LpF123 xAuthor's Response: Hahaha yes, I loved writing the duel scene, my favourite so far. They have so much chemistry...and history that has not yet happened...things that I know that you don't yet :)
Did that even make sense? Probably not.anyway...
Thank you so much (I built up suspense! Yay! I was trying to do that :P) for the review!!
-Julia Report Review
Ooh this is getting interesting and it's only chapter one! I love how you've kept it in date, because sometimes people forget about the time period and make mistakes. This one was flawless! The characterisation of everyone was amazing and I generally love this story already because it's too good to be true, it's a novel! I must add it to my favourites like right now!
-LpF123 xAuthor's Response: Thank you! :)
I'm glad you liked the characterisation, I was really trying to work on that in this chapter :) So, it worked. Phew.
And that it pretty much the biggest complement any author on here can get, so OHMYGOSHTHANKYOUSOMUCH!
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
-Julia Report Review
Love it! What girl doesn't fall for the bad boy one time or another :P I love how intrigued McGonagall is the more mysterious he becomes. Can't wait to read what happens with them next.
~AngieAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review!
I'm loving writing this story, I agree, who doesn't fall for the bad boy at least once? Minerva is hilarious to write, she doesn't really have any idea what's going on with Tom, but she can't help but be intrigued. Not the smartest reaction to the future Dark Lord, but, you know :P
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Hi! Here for your review.
I must say that I do like Minvera/Tom stories. Minerva is such an interesting character. You do a good job in this story showing her strong personality and character. She definitely admires Tom, even if she doesn't love him yet.
I also like your cast of secondary characters. The girls seem pretty typical of girls their age and have pretty distinct personalities.
Overall, not a bad job, I'm interested to see what happens next.Author's Response: eee thanks dear :)
I'm glad you like Min/Tom. I wasn't really a fan till I joined the forums...and this is my first attempt. I also tried to get my characterisation up to scratch since it has previously been lacking.
Thank you ever so much for getting to this so quickly! Report Review
this story seems really interesting! I've always wanted to read a tom/minerva story!!!
I can't wait to read more and see what happens!Author's Response: haha thanks :P i've always been fascinated by tom/min, and the vague idea for this has been floating around in my head for a while, so I decided to write it.
It's incredibly fun to write, actually. Glad you liked it and thanks for yet another review :P Report Review
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