my gosh, Jane's got to stop fainting all the time!
Love this, btdubs
-Jilly

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You know those days when you really don't want to talk to anybody? Well Jane has one of those days everyday, and I love it. She's very different from other OCs who seem so loud, witty and confident, and it will be interesting to read a story from the perspective of a wallflower like her. Can't wait to keep reading!
Jilly

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Wow, okay, so I just read all 19 chapters of this and I love it! I really want to know what's going to happen, and I have some suspicions about things. Jane's a really interesting character, and I love the way she develops and changes throughout the story. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the amazing work :)

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I fucking LOVE this story. Oh goodness, it's brilliant! You are such a good writer! This is probably the best fanfic I've read, and I have read tons! Thank you so much for writing this!!!

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Great chapter. I'd love to know what Snape said at the ball. Octavius seems jealous of Sirius, which actually surprised me.

Did she seriously just faint?

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Ooh a kiss. Poor Jane, she must have been terrified!

Why would Sirius' parents have disowned him on that day? Like, was there a breaking point kinda thing?

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Ooh Jane has special powers!

Just a heads up, during the scene when they're walking to the quiddich pitch, there's a bit of botched repeated conversation. Like the text has been copied and pasted too many times.

Why did the slytherin do that??

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Oh my, Jane is just hopeless isn't she.

So much of this chapter made me laugh out loud - the suit of armour, James with his 'sir' and 'you're welcome', Fifi tripping over. One of my favourite chapters so far!

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Lynn's point of view was unexpected but good. I thought that Jane revealing Remus as a werewolf was a bit abrupt (like, why wasnt her knowledge of it revealed earlier in the story) but it worked out okay. Lily's reaction was really nice.

What stopped Jane from getting hit by the spells? Methinks she might make a good Order member if its a special skill of hers.

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The contrast between Jane's internal character and what she actually says out loud is so well done. I often forget that she's super quiet until she actually talks to someone.

Another brilliant chapter! You're very talented

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I really like that I'm still guessing about who she'll end up with. Remus.. Sirius.. Octavius.. (So many 'us's!) or no one at all?!

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She passed out?!

Also, how is Octavius suddenly good friends with the Marauders? The impression that I got in the first few chapters was that Jane and him were kind of on their own. Not criticizing, just curious!

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Ahh I love the friendship between Jane and Octavius.

Brilliant prank by the way. Fits in nicely with Snape needing a bath!

Still brilliant so far.

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Hi there!

I really loved this first chapter. You're a great writer, and I love the voice you've given Jane. Maybe I'm biased - one of my closest friends is called Jane, and she's anything but plain!

I love that all of your grammar and spelling is perfect. There isn't anything more frustrating than poor spelling etc

Off to read more!

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I enjoy your story very much!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Ooh, suspense! Hi, I found your story today, and I just spent my Thursday night reading chapters 1 to 17. Please update quickly! And can there be another Jane/Regulus encounter soon? Please? Anyways, 10/10!

Author's Response: Haha, I'll do my best to get a new chapter posted, but first, the holidays!

Thanks for reading, and reviewing! I'll see what I can do about that Regulus encounter for ya ;)

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I really enjoyed this chapter. Sirius must really care about Jane if he paused to let her refuse him. He was really going to allow her to mend or break his heart. Hopefully next chapter will be Jane's perspective. I hope she explains herself for her behavior, even though it's most likely because she was too afraid. It could also be her uncertainty of how she felt and she never kissed anyone before.

Author's Response: You are the best reviewer ever!

I'm sorry I took such a long hiatus from working on this. I'm attempting a real book, and it's sucking up all my time!

I hope you'll read some of the new stuff, and thank you so, so much for all the great reviews! Us Ravenclaws must stick together!

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Ok, it's either Jane with wandless magic or someone else.I'm getting very suspicious. First Jane getting unharmed by the spells and now this. What is going on? Is it really wandless magic?

Author's Response: I dunno! (Yes, I do...) But you have to wait and see!

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Seriously Jane, think.

Anyways. Sirius totally made James distract Alexander by "telling him off." That made me laugh. That is something Sirius would so do. The only thing is, is Jane really his type?

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Ok two things.

1) About what happened earlier...what is up with Jane? Checking up on Remus?? Could this be her curiousity taking over being a Ravenclaw? Or is this her...having a slight crush on him? I'm more sure about the Ravenclaw thing, need more details!

2) Jane somehow protecting herself? Can she do wandless magic?

Hopefully my intelligence and your clues will help me out...

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It's fine because this is where the plot seems to change. If you named it after Slughorn's party, it would focuse on the wrong point. Yes, the whole chapter was about the party, but the end was the most important thing.

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I couldn't agree more. The list?

1) Family
2) Friends)
3) Beach/Pool
4) BOOKS

Sometimes it's the other way around, depending on the mood for number three and four.

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Ssrius Black and Remus Lupin. So Padfoot is generally interested while Moony is being his normal, caring self...or is he really? Hmm...

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Ha ha no wonder why James did that! I can't believe I didn't think of that before. Jane was certainly put in Ravenclaw for her wit, FOR SURE.

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I like this. I'm reading this because I'm a Ravenclaw and all, so expect a review from me on every chapter. If no one else leaves any good comments, write for me please! I really am enjoying this story. Ravenclaws united, never be divided! Wits beyond measure is man's greatest treasure!!!

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