I was wondering if you will ever update this story again? I've been checking on it from time to time, but there never seems to be any update...I know you several times said you would never abandon it. Though some update once in a while wouldn't be too bad. I really miss reading this story :) Report Review
awsome story. absolutely amazing, please update soon Report Review
Its been so long when are you gonna update? Report Review
Hey there! I hope everything is okay, I really love this story and I hope you're able to update soon :) Report Review
hello author r u plnning on updting any time soon.its 6 months Report Review
Arrg! So much goodness in one story. I sat and read this straight through, I finished it at 5:30am, which to me is an indication that it's a good story.
I love the comedy brought by Holly and Adam. It makes it much less morbid than it would be if they weren't in it.
Keep up the good work and update soon.
xx Loony Report Review
Update you seriously need To I'm dying to know what happens Report Review
so do you think that new chapter may be coming soon? Report Review
Please update NOW! :) Report Review
HEY!! This has to be one of the BEST stories i hav ever read! Really enjoying it..! :)
Please post the next chapter soon!! :D Report Review
Juliette Amelia Potter
Xavier Jamison Potter
I sorta played off Amy and James and turned them into other names. And I just love those other names. Report Review
I read over my comment and I just realized how ridicoulous I sound. Basically what I was TRYING to say it that I don't think any of the charecters ACTUAL names should be there because its quite obvious Holly would be the godmother and it would be kinda weird to have the same name but you know how Holly has helped so much in this whole thing, I think she deserves something. Holly is all christmasy sorta like holly um cant explain but hopefully you get it...? well christie is also sorta christmasy. if you dont get it i must look like such a big idiot right now... well so I think her first or middle name should be christie. And how jack has accepted the pregnancy and even though not shown much care to the baby, has cared most about Amy. I mean giving up his best friend! He wanted the best for Amy, he was worried for Amy's future. And also he is probably gonna be the godfather :P maybe! he deserves it too. So Jacqueline. Jack and Jacqueline. see the similarities... well these names have more meaning in them... but you might want to go with the other, short and sweet. :P well havent gone a review without saying this so love ya! and UPDATE SOON!
love, dite (die-tee) Report Review
I love this story. Please update soon. Report Review
Pleaase update! I've been checking everyday! I love this story so much because it is amazing! But you haven't updated in over a month and I really wish you would! Report Review
I haven't read this story in so long and I come back to find an amazing development in the plot! I cannot wait for the next update. I would also like to say that Holly is one of the best characters that I've ever read. I absolutely adore her wackiness. She's the perfect comic relief to this story and everything she does makes me laugh. Report Review
SHE'S WAKING UP! YES! AND JACK AND JAMES ARE GOOD AGAIN. FINALLY!. Loved it. Report Review
Alright, I'm back again to review! Just thought you deserved another one so you'd update a bit faster! Okay, first of all, I just read all 55 chapters of this story from the beginning and have been doing that the past few days. Ahhh, even reading the entire story a second time, I feel the same emotions I felt reading it the first time. Hey, only good stories can make you feel suspense and anticipation the second time you read it, right? Well, that's what I felt. I realize your year finally finishes soon, seeing as it's almost August! Hopefully, you'll have more chapters up and faster since it'll officially be your summer. And as for names, I was thinking along the lines of Astoria or Bridget (any spelling, which means strong which I think fits well considering the situation the baby is in right now), for the middle name, the name could be a combination of two significant names like Amy's mom and James' mom. Of course, I don't think Amy's mom's name was mentioned in the story so far so I wouldn't know if it worked well with Ginny but hey, you never know, right? Also, for middle names, you could consider the names Maia (which is what the month May is named after, and considering the baby's due date is in May, I think it fits!), Scarlett, Erica, or Madison since they all mean fighter or warrior and I also think it fits the situation well. Oh, and if you were thinking of choosing a name from the Potter-Weasley-Swann clan, then you could also try Charlie as the middle name, considering the fact that Charlie was the first one to tell James that he would be a great father one day and it really stuck on him.
All in all, it's your decision and I know you'll choose great names! Btw, I really like the full name of Astoria Scarlett Potter. LOL I just think it flows well! :') BUT IT'S YOUR CHOICE! (:
By the way, just out of curiosity, where on Earth are you? Quite literally? Like, what country because I'm in Canada, but all universities ended in either April or May, so I was just really curious.
But anyways, seeing as it's almost your summer, have a great one and pretty please update soon! With a cherry on top! And I can't wait to see the names you've chosen! Ahhh, and I hope the baby's okay! *fingers crossed.*
Update! Oh and 10/10, in case you wanted to know! (: Report Review
Okay okay okay, I think I'm in love with the fact that Jack and James are talking. And it's official! I've been reading this story for exactly a year now and thought it was about time to review again. I'm kind of disappointed that you didn't update since the last time I checked but you're lucky you're a good writer and I have patience! I've missed your story lots so please come back soon! By the way, how's your summer going? (: Report Review
I simply LOVE indian names, of course you wouldn’t use them but hey, what the heck! Anyways some of my favorites are Natasha (that is indian) Aisha (Pronounced as Eye-Sha but sometimes the wrong way of saying it is used too, Eye-EE-Sha) Priyanka and I like Anisha but some more suitable ones would be Sonia (So-Knee-Ah or the wrong way, Son from Song and then EE-Ah) Aaaah sometimes I wish I could be indian just for the names, they are just so beautiful! Oh ya and another few I love is Aakansha (Ah-Khan-Sha) and Sanjana (Sun-jna, jna pronounced really quickly) And apart from the names and the overload of drama in the story, is there any drama in your life? Crushes, love life's? Anyone desperately madly in love with you? You desperately madly in love with someone? You have a slight crush on someone? Someone have a slight crush on you? *wink wink* Report Review
LONG TIME NO SE!!!
No probs for u no updating but here you are now and that cant make me any happier :) So hows life, uni ect. Hope your enjoying and I still can’t say how high I think of you, updating even in uni! You might just think of me as ‘crazy fan girl’ but believe it or not, no matter how really stalker y this sounds, You are kinda my role model but back on topic, YOU ARE AWESOME BEYOND MEANS! OK BACK TO SANITY NOW! You are always free to use one of my million middle names (and first name) but my cousins name is Eliza Crystal Cox and Eliza Crystal Potter sounds awesome! (of course my name would make me feel very happy :D ) but seeing James understanding Holy (I LOVE THAT SCENE) makes me think that Christie might be a nice name because Amy would like that (you know, Holy and Christie, christmasy...) Christie Jacqueline Potter (Holy and Jack, Holy from Amy and Jack for James) Well, I’ll probably give in more sugesstions later but until then hasta luego! (I’m half spanish but I’m american in all) anyways love ya forever and cant wait for next chapter! and on that note I SIMPLY LOVE HOW OBLIVIOUS AMY IS IN YOUR PREVIEW! I was laughing like mad and I just love you! anyways gr8 to see ur back!
and yes, i know its weird having the same middle name as my cosuin but whatever! anyways LOVED THE CHAPTER LOVE YOU FOREVER AND UPDATE SOON!
and this time i didnt think its 10/10, i thought it was INFINITY!
but i still didnt like the chapter, I LOVED IT!
haha anyways cya!
Aphrodite Rosalie Violet Juliet Crystal Brown Report Review
some names are alaska, aurora , kate, renee, dayna or elise - great story by the way 10/10 Report Review
great story it is one of my favorites and was it veronica or davies who pushed her down the stairs?
some baby names - charlotte or alexis Report Review
It's okay as short as this chapter was it was good to have a look at james point of view:) And don't worry about your updating it's barely been 2 weeks since the last update!! (which i'm greatfulll of) usually the authors update after a month or two;/
i Love Jack now:D Report Review
OMG if Jack was my brother i would rip his throat out:s really fun chapter:D though it's sooo short but you have alot of chapters so thats good:) Report Review
Woah, okay. Names. Let's see. The middle name definitely (well, in my opinion) needs to be either short, one syllable long, e.g. Kate, Jane, Anne, May, or traditional and a bit old fashioned, e.g. Elizabeth, (and I know it's male, but just for the sake of Ron) Bilius. Saying that, I don't think Holly would suit as a middle name, to be honest.
As for the first name, stray away from cliches and go for something sweet, but a bit interesting. Perhaps an less used spelling, or just a more uncommon name in general (but nothing strange!). But keep in mind Amy and James' names, as well as the last name, while choosing. You want it to sound perfect when they sign their Christmas cards!
Have a browse around on baby name websites, and remember, it's up to you in the end.
P.S. Nice chapter! Your writing just improves with each and every update. Report Review
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