Please update! I love your story so much!! Report Review
UPDATE COME ON HURRY I LOVE THI SHGJFSKDFKLSFVJHSVBGJHBFSVJSJFHVBSJHDFBNSDJKDALFAS
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I officially love this story! I love Ronnie and Remus and I can't wait until you update again! You are amazing! Report Review
THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK TO EARTH :D This is one of my favorite Remus stories (and I'm a very picky reader ;D) So please update soon! Report Review
holy ***k how can you leave us hanging like this i need more ! please ! i love this story and its going great and i cant wait for more:D Report Review
My heart literally stopped when Greyback came into the picture.
Just wanted to let you know.
I'm a little too anxious to express how I like the story, but believe me, I'm loving it :)
love, brianne Report Review
I KNEW IT!
I KNEW IT!
from the part in the boys locker room when it said that he had something like hurt and longing in his eyes.
I KNEW IT.
okay rant over. Report Review
Yay! It's back!! I've missed this story so much! Seriously, I did a little happy dance when I saw it updated. Wowzers, this chapter was great, so worth the wait in my opinion. Ronnie's father is jerk face, and I think she should have punched him. I wonder if he's actually gonna buy that house? That would be awesome! Loving Ronnie/Remus, they are too cute! Please update as soon as you can, no pressure, I just really want to read more! Amazing job! :D Report Review
I like this, update soon! :P lol
but seriously good story! I wanna find out what happens next with Remus/Ronnie!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I just queued the next chapter. Sorry about the wait! Report Review
I loved it! :)
You are a super good writer.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
PLEASE please please write more i'm dieing to know what happensAuthor's Response: I'm trying my hardest, I promise! Report Review
Loved it! Please update!Author's Response: Thanks! Will do! Report Review
I absolutly love your story! Haven't gotten the chance to review yet, but it's awesome! I just can't wait to read more! Hurray for Ronnie :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Remus and Ronnie afe so cute!
please write more soon!xAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it! Report Review
AHHH! I am so excited! I'm so happy for Remus and Ronnie, but now I want them to experience more drama (because I like them to suffer, mwahaha). I can't wait to see what happens with Garrahan. I feel like she's going to go Friday and punch him, except not really.
You really put the pressure on me for this review to not be "I liked this. Update soon!" because I really liked this chapter and I really do want you to update soon. 10/10!!Author's Response: Hahaha. I realized after I submitted that I had probably stepped on a few people's toes with the "I liked this. Update soon!" thing. But oh, well. And don't worry, drama is coming. ;) Report Review
Aldkfshakdldkajdk, they kissed! Heh I love that James hid away in a broom closet, the image in my head is hilarious! I can't wait to see more with her dad, it shall be interesting :) well I can't wait for the next chappo! :DAuthor's Response: I think the James hiding away in a broom closet thing may be my favorite bit of the chapter. XD Thank you! Report Review
YOU ARE TORTURING ME. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I BEG OF YOU.Author's Response: I'm sorry! D: I will try my absolute hardest! Report Review
AHHH Words can not describe how awesome that was! :D The whole James in a closet writing depressing poetry image was awesome! I laughed so hard, and then the end is like "D'AWWW" :3Author's Response: Thank you! James' depressing poetry just sort of struck me on a whim, and I loved the idea so much. It just fits him so well! Thank you so much! Report Review
Remus is sooo cute! I love the brother-sister dynamic between Ronnie and the other Marauders. Nice update!Author's Response: Remus is amazing. Thank you! Report Review
OM FREAKIN G!!! I've waited for this moment for SO long, and it finally came and I'm SO happy! Not only did Ronnie and Remus stop playing with their lives, but James and Lily did too! I'm super happy with this chapter, and I'm just so thrilled with how this story is turning out, and I REALLY can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazingness! :DAuthor's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it that much! I will certainly try my hardest! Report Review
I loved the James/lily and Remus/Ronnieparts they were adorable and i can't wait to read more especially with the whole situation with her Dad. Update soon!!Author's Response: Thank you! I will do my absolute best! Report Review
I have a question. When you finish this story (Or possibly now, if you want) could I possibly write Remus' side of the story? I would give you all the credit for the plot and characters and whatever. And I'll try not to change it at all, or if I changed anything,only extremely small things that wouldn't change the plot. May I?Author's Response: You want to write fanfic of my fanfic? That's pretty cool. But I'm going to have to say no. One, because I tend to be a jealous person and although most of the characters are in Rowling's cannon, the way I've developed them makes them my babies. Ronnie, especially, is my baby because she's completely mine. I guard them jealously. Two, if I had thought this story better told in Remus' point of view, I would have written it that way (and I've thought of doing so myself a few times). But as it stands, I'd rather not have the story told by Remus just yet, even if I'm not the one writing it. Thirdly, this story will most likely have a sequel, and there's no telling what I'll have to tweak to make it work. I don't think it'll be much, but I don't want that to eventually cause problems with plagiarism (even though you plan to give me credit). So while I'm flattered that you like this story enough to want to tackle it yourself, (and I'm super, super appreciative that you asked me) I just wouldn't be comfortable with it. Report Review
I totally called the baby daddy drama bit. Boo-yah (I couldn't control myself, I apologize)!
Despite the long wait I really liked it! I had to go back and reread the entire thing, which wasn't bad because it made me realize how much I really like this story.
I want more Ronnie and Remus (Ronus? Rennie?). Please and thank you. (Note that I do not expect you to change your story plans to fulfill my wishes.)
And I'd like a Meet The Author page but quite frankly I'm too lazy to get involved on another website. Sorry. It's not that I wouldn't like to get to know you.
And I apologize that this review is so random. I'm crazy. Anyway, 10/10! Please try to update sooner this time. (Please, for the children?)Author's Response: Haha, it's fine. I foreshadowed that bit like nobody's business. More...Ronus/Rennie comin' up soon, I promise! The MTA bit is totally cool, I'm just happy that you've reviewed. And I love this review. Mucho. As I'm no longer deprived of internet service, there should be an update sometime in the next week at the latest! Report Review
Hahaha I love that she branded her father as a creepy paedophilic guy!! Haha well i loved the chap and I can't wait for your next one! :DAuthor's Response: Hahaha. I know, right? Thank you so much! :) Report Review
I have a couple things to say.
1. I think a meet the author page would be a great idea and I would definetley use it.
2. I'm slightly creeped out that the pedophile-y guy is Ronnie's father
And C. I can't wait to find out and Ronnie and Remus's relationship!Author's Response: 1. Awesome! I shall make one shortly!
2. Me too. I can't (or, well, I guess I probably can) imagine how Ronnie feels about it.
C. *twirls mustache maniacally* Report Review
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