They're so cute! I love that they both fancy each other. The moments between the two of them are lovely! Report Review
This has to be my favourite fanfic so far. Not kidding. Report Review
Hi! Me again!!
I just wanted to say that i learned today from a friend that apparently all this vocabulary anomaly was an april fool's joke that the site did. It was apparently on every story, but it has stopped now, so don't worry. The story kind of makes more sense now haha:P. But i was really surprised.
Ok, well, just wanted to let you know. Can't wait for the new update!!
'Talk' to you soon :D,
slightlyobsessedwithfanfictionAuthor's Response: Haha, yeah I came to that conclusion yesterday when I checked again and the words were gone. I'd forgotten about April fools! Anyway, thanks for letting me know :) Report Review
hi! i just LOVE your story! I read it so quickly, prioritising it over homework (probably not a good idea :S ) but your style of writing and the plot are so engaging. I love everything about it.
I have to say though that i've been quite taken aback by the strange vocabulary at times. I don't know if these are mistakes or purposeful, but seeing as they are repeated, i guess you intended this. But may i just ask, why? For instance, replacing what i guess would be "kiss" with "hamster", or "face" with "purse", or even "arms" with "garden shed" (???). And there are many other things like that. It's interesting, don't get me wrong, but personnally i feel that it kind of takes the romance out of it, like in the part in the room (... need i say more? :P)
But overall, it's a great story. I love the characters and their evolving relationship. And i like how its progressing, not too rushed but quite exciting :P. Oh, and overall, this story is really funny! i find myself laughing aloud, so thanks :)
Please update quickly :) When do you think the next chapter will be up?
A new fan of your writing,
slightlyobssessedwithfanfictionAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks for all the kind words (:
But as for the strange vocabulary... I never put that in! I went and checked after reading your review, and you're right. But that definitely wasn't there when I submitted. I don't know what happened... do you know when it started? It's not through the whole story is it!?
Glad you pointed it out though. And I hope to update soon, not sure exactly when though. Thanks xx Report Review
Please update!!! Yay! They're sort if in togetherness!!!Author's Response: They are ;) Thanks for the review xx Report Review
Desperado for more!!!Author's Response: Hopefully soon!! Report Review
Ooh I'm really excited to see what Rose wants to do when she gets back!! That's exciting! And I'm glad she figured out the mystery. She really is brilliant. Though it sucks she wasn't given proper credit, I guess that sort of thing is kind of expected, and I'm glad she did get some recognition. Scorpius is adorable.
How can anyone forget the name WEASLEY? First if all, it's rather unusual. It's also a famous pureblood family. And they saved the whole freaking wizarding world with Harry Potter and Albus Dumbledore and all. Jared didn't really forget her name. He's just a pompous twit.
Update soon :)Author's Response: You know, I didn't think of that until you pointed it out. He is supposed to be a pompous twit though, so it works out anyway.
Thanks for the review xx
You mean you denied us more chapters?! Your forgiven. I like the way you mixed pleasure with business and a fast trip home :) Though he lives with a Wendy, I'm hopeing it's platonic. Rose will go nuts after spending so much time finding out she liked him to begin with. lolAuthor's Response: Phew. It is very platonic, not to worry. And yes, she really, really will.
Thanks for your reviews xx Report Review
I was really, really hoping they'd actually move on faster, but oh well. There was enough fluff in this chapter to make me happy!
Wouargh, here goes: Rose has a rival! (I don't want them to face more obstacles. No more, please, make them end up together properly!)
But there's the train ride before, so hopefully they'll finally settle for an agreement that makes the reader happy, yes?
I can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: I know, they'll be happy soon, without too many obstacles on the way because I've become a little tired of overcoming them all!
And hopefully that kind of agreement does in fact get settled (:
Thank you for your review xx Report Review
UPDATE PLEASE FAST this story is so amazing dearAuthor's Response: Thank you!! xx Report Review
Yes. Was that too brief? hmm, I'm never sure what to say. I loved this chapter- Rose is getting brave, my is she getting brave! And a whole 24 hour train ride- I think its safe to say that i'll enjoy the next chapter very much. I'm so glad you updated so soon, I've been dying waiting (it always seems longer than it is!)
Anyway loved the chapter, can't wait for the next :)Author's Response: I doesn't matter what you say, it's the fact that you're saying anything that makes me smile (:
And thank you! You're the best! Report Review
I've missed you :D And this story and Rose and Scorpius and all the awkwardness! I can't wait to see Rose try and teach him a lesson! Scorpius kind of has this arrogance about him, which I wouldn't like usually, but you make it work! And I like how he hasn't lost that now Rose has started liking him, and become some sort of Romeo reincarnated! He is still the same as ever! And I love him (and you!) for it!
I wait in anticipation for the next chappie :)Author's Response: I AM!
Aww, thanks!! Yeah I know, I don't want him to change haha. I'm glad it works (:
I love YOU. Thanks for the great review xx Report Review
Yayyy! Thanks for updating, loved this chapter! I hope you have the next one up soon :DAuthor's Response: I hope so too! And thanks xx Report Review
I'd really kind of like to see Rose crack the fireplace mystery. I don't know if you were planning that or not, but I think it would be great. She's a really smart girl stuck in a stupid job. Sure everyone has to start somewhere, but it seems like sort of a waste. Like she should be in training for something bigger. And if she were to solve the mystery, it might give her more confidence and make other people put more confidence in her as a witch. Plus it would just be awesome, a random secretary figuring it out and showing up all the ministry people there.
Scorpius is so cute ❤❤ I love him. It was funny and endearing when he wanted to snuggle with her. He's a sweetheart. And a bit of a prat.
I love all their flirting, though.
Update soon!Author's Response: I was going to but then I rethought it and then rethought it again. So you'll see. And yes I agree, it would be awesome (:
He is all of that haha. I love writing it!
I will, thanks for reviewing xx Report Review
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS
UPDATE NOW. PLEASE.Author's Response: I'M SORRY! I WILL!! Report Review
Oh-hahahaha, I love it, I love it, I love it! Rose and Scorpius and the tension and all that sexy stuff. I would love for them to figure out the floo mystery, but I dunno if that would be too good to be true.
You're amazing at writing. I can see it all in my head - the Muggles and magical folk, the paperwork, boredom, Scorpius about to knock on her door,... I'm just-. Wonderful. This is absolutely fantastic and I enjoy reading it immensely and it doesn't matter if it takes you some time to update, as long as you do ;)
I've really taken to your characters (introduce me to them?) - Rose's flat-mates and Dom too. I'm looking forward to their reactions.Author's Response: Yeah, I dunno about the floo probleme yet either.
Thank you so much, you have no idea how much it makes me happy to hear that haha.
I love them all too!
Thank you so much for such a lovely review xx Report Review
ah! I've been waiting for this for what seems like AGES! Rose could totally solve the fireplace problem. I was squealing most of the way through, especially when Scorpius came in :)
Please don't keep me hanging too long next time though okay? I really like this story! xxAuthor's Response: It has been AGES. And I know she could, because I know what the solution is. But I'm not sure if I'll make them solve it or not...
I'll try not to make you wait so long this time xx Report Review
Don't know about anyone else, but I missed you. I also loved the new chapter. So, how much trouble can you get them into next chapter? See you then :)Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
I can get them into a LOT of trouble. And I hope to ;)
xx Report Review
AWW scorpius and rose are so meant for eachother! They are so cute together!! I love how scorpius is a cuddler :) Im a cuddler scorpius! COME TO ME!
...LOVE YOUR STORY!!!Author's Response: Hahahah, I know, I feel the same. Thanks a lot :) xx Report Review
You havent lost me! I just wish you updated more :( but no worries, you always get to it eventually! Im hoping for some "things" (if you get what i mean by that) to happen between dear scorp and rosie. Sexual tension plus alcohol equals "things" XD
Update quick this time!
-GraceAuthor's Response: I think there will be "things" ;)
I'm still writing, but I hope to update soon! Thanks for not being lost xx Report Review
Okay you have totally left us hanging for over a month. Update please!Author's Response: This is inexcusable, but I hope to make it up to you guys with a long and detailed chapter 18 xx Report Review
Omg update already!!!Author's Response: I know! I'm so sorry, word is open right now and I plan to type until chapter 18 is done and dusted (: Report Review
I really like this story. I'm glad someone finally made a move and don't think it was too sudden. It could've happened sooner even haha I hope they keep progressing!! Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm hoping to update very soon xx Report Review
Ah! I really enjoyed this chapter. :) Great job! I so didn't want it to be over. Looking forward to your next update :)Author's Response: Thank you, I hope to get back onto this story now. Hope you haven't given up on it (: Report Review
I think I am in love with this story :D
Update sooon!!!Author's Response: It's been so long and I apologize! Don't give up on me xx Report Review
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