so hey I lurved your story!
I love how you write, I mean how it all fits and everything, every word every sentence is well written I just love it.
I was actually taking some advice of your writing because you're quite good and captivating at that.
I loved that this story made me feel like if I was Lily you know, it was soo real and mysterious and I love that.
I can safely say that this story is my favourite james/lily
although you had some wrong facts I ignored them (Ido NOT easily do though) because the plot was just that good
I luuurved it! keep on writing you're great!

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I loved it so much! Usually, Lily is in sopping wet tears and all humor is gone by the end of James/lily stories. I'm impressed that that scene was so funny, lots of lily fire. 10/10

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Dang! I read the entire story in one sitting. I feel like I should get an award for that but YOU should too because that was freaking awesome. AWESOME!!! You should write another story…maybe about 7th year…?
But great job! Keep writing!

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Dang! I read the entire story in one sitting. I feel like I should get an award for that but YOU should too because that was freaking awesome. AWESOME!!! You should write another story…maybe about 7th year…?
But great job! Keep writing!

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I've read this story before - this is my second time through, and I just noticed how you described getting into the hufflepuff rooms. I got int o hufflepuff on pottermore and the way they say you get in is by tapping a rhythm on a barrel, like a password

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You do not know how many times your story made me adhfyedusjfd. Like literally, I sat at my computer and did that like a million times. I really loved it, and you did a great job

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This is now officially one of my favorite stories! It's so sweet!

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Hey :)
Your Story is so amazing!!! I can't belive that I didn't noticed it until now. Wow I'm speechless. You really did a great Job. And by the way... Even if I haven't finished reading the whole story up to now, I'm totally fascinated by. And I would love to translate it into german and upload it on "MyFanfiction.de". But of course, I need your Permission. Hope it's okay for you that I write my request in this Review? Greetings from Germany :) I'm looking forward to hear from you :)

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LOVED THIS. WELL DONE, FRIEND.

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I loved your entire story from start to finish. Seriously it was brilliant.
Scarlet and Sirius = cute.
Finally Lily and James got together.
This is one of the best Marauders stories I've read. Really imaginative and unique.

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Hi!! Long time no read! But you FINALLY finished this story, so OBVIOUSLY i had to read it...

ASDFGHJKL:" I LOVE IT!!! I love the fact that it's not just a flat love story, but it has another plot line, that always makes me happy (:

I also love the fact that it'd JILY!!! Jily, Jily, Jily!! One of my OTPs and it's written so well! I love it, i love it, i love it!!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

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Amazing stuff! Really! Jily has always been a genre that has fasinated me because they could be anything. J.K. Never really showed them interacting on a daily basis and each other can do whatever they want with them. Of course some are better than others and yours is excellent. Keep up your writing i want to read more of your stories soon and I really hope you write a sequel of them dating because so mich cpuld happen. Keep it up!

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Oh please! Snape isn't half as good looking as you made him out to me. LOL

Nevertheless, greater chapter, I can't wait to read more!

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I am CRYING right now :'( its over NOOO!!! i really wanted more this story is just so amazing and 100% the best that i have and and will read! :) you are a BRILLIANT author and you have some AMAZING talent that i am EXTREMELY jealous of! you are amazing like JKR even though your writing style is different you could actually publish this as a book book and like sell it! arrrgg lost for words now!! way to amazing for words and i really don't know if i'm making any sense noe but YOUR RE AN AMAZING WRITER AND THIS IS A FAB STORY! ok im just going to lock my self in my room, scream like a fangirl and cry! xx

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aosdifjosdij this was amazing. This story was so believable, and incredibly romantic. x Thanks for writing it- it's absolutely amazing!

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I really liked it! not the usual James mooning after LIly.. keep it up!

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Please write more soon!

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Normally I hate stories with lily & James because lily always acts like a whiny brat and James behaves like an arrogant prick... But this one was nice. Good read

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Are you a fan of friends (the tv show) because in some chapters I'm getting that vibe.

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All I can say is...WOW!!
I just finished reading this incredible story and you are a super talented writer-you had me hooked to the last sentence.
Whatever you do, don't you dare stop writing! I just want to read more of your stuff...I would also really love it if you wrote some sort of sequel to this. I'm not sure how you'd manage it, but it would be awesome!

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. . . no . . . no . . . . NO . . . . . NO! how - what - how did this happen? Laura . . I . . I . . .I actually have to go do my HOMEWORK now . . . why does this keep on - NO! Wait - what is the name of the Sirius/Scarlet one-shot? MY LIFE MUST CONTINUE!
NOOO . . . ..

IT'S ALL OVEERRR! "''""''""''""''"D"3)

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NN.N.NNN.NNN.O.OOO.OOO.O!!! you-you don't understand. YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND! My life - my life is - is ending! The next chapter - that's it! That's it! And then - and then - I'll finally have to do my HOMEWORK! NN.N.N.OOO.OOO.O!
D,3

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NO . . . . The second last chapter . . . . . . . .

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Lahps. THIS STORY IS MY LIFE.

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O.M.R. can we PLLEAAASE BE BEST FRIENDS?! (I honestly don't mean to sound like a creeper, I'm sorry, but O.M.R)

lahps! Anyway, I love how it's like all intense, and then she says it, and then EK!!! And then you're just like all casual

"Hey guyyys, how were your holidays?"
LAHPS!

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