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Review #1, by Meena The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

22nd April 2015:
Please update...
If you're still alive and on here, that is...

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Review #2, by PCB The One Where Pippa Can't Sleep

22nd February 2015:

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Review #3, by NarglesAreReal11 The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

20th February 2015:
I read to this chapter months ago and really needed more. UPDATE! Your story just broke me and I kind of burned while reading it and it made me cry in the middle of the night and its just so GOOD! That I'm overwhelmed. Your even better than all the people in top ten. Please update. Please.

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Review #4, by Natalie The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

7th August 2014:
Please please please update soon or let us know if you are alive. I need to know what is going to happen. =)

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Review #5, by insertofafanboy The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

27th June 2014:
WoW. Okay, okay.
So, to start off I wanted to point out why I haven't commented on every chapter; it's because Holy crap I just had to finish the damn book! All chapters have been incredible!
Second of all:
You my friend are an absolutely talented reader! You really have a way with words, and just you build up an incredible image in my mind of Pippa and Albus.
I have read a lot of fan fictions, the next gen being all I read; and every book I've read with Al in it, he's not perfect, but he's a really lovely character. And then I stumble upon your book, and Al's not the nicest person; it just totally changed my mind about everything to do with Al. I love you version of him, and I have to say he's probably one of my favourites, he's the most...human. (Ironic huh?!)
And I know something has happened to him for him to be so bitter and I'm busting to know what! I really ship Al and Pippa.
And Pippa, wow what a character! She is defiantly the most original, and easy to relate. Her comments though! There fantastic! She and everyone else in the book make me laugh so much! You just are really original author.
As the story has progressed like it has, Pippa is really ready to crumble. And I need to know if she's going to be okay.
I'm guessing though that you've still got a lot to go on from.
We still need to find out about;
1. What happens with Cassie and the guy everyone hates, and what he did for everyone to hate him.
2. We need to find out who 'he' is.
3. We need to know what happened to Al
4. What happened to Lily
5. We need to get to the wedding as well!
And a lot more there just the main things that stick out.

I really want to know if Al and Pippa get together! I just, I need to know!

Anyway a terrific chapter, and update soon!!

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Review #6, by Kaitlin The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

26th April 2014:
Please update, I need Pippa to be ok! Or slightly more ok! Please :) Your story is amazing and the characters are so much better than any other OCs!

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Review #7, by BelieveInYourself The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

7th April 2014:
Please update! I got to know what happens next!

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Review #8, by Rosie The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

7th April 2014:
Please please please update soon!
Two years on and i'm still addicted to this story!
Hope you're still alive :)

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Review #9, by An avid fan The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

13th March 2014:
Firstly I must adress the absense of an update. There it is done the solution is obviouse.

Now please!She's starting to slip, to heal so please continue this. Its exceptionally different to any other story on here that I can can to mind at the moment and its refreshing. And sorely missed.

I reiterate my original point, bluntly: UPDATE!

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Review #10, by Strawberries202 The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

29th December 2013:
Update soon, If you're still alive that is. :)

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Review #11, by Miss Cissy The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

3rd December 2013:
This fanfic is one of awesome-est fanfics here :D When are you updating the story?

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Review #12, by Maria The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

7th October 2013:
please please please tell me this story wont finish please !!

Author's Response: It won't finish anytime soon:) Still a long way to go. Thanks for the review, I hope you have a great day :) xx

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Review #13, by J The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

19th September 2013:
So, is this story done? I mean, its been a while since you updated...I just wondered if I need not get my hopes up? I really like Pippa and Albus though. So please update again.

Author's Response: Nope, it's not done, I have written the next chapter, it's a biggie! I'm just waiting for my beta to send it back to me and then I'll post it. And I'm already started working on the next chapter already :) Thanks for the review and I hope you have a great day :)

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Review #14, by harryfreakinpotter The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

3rd July 2013:
please update soon!! i love your story

Author's Response: Hullo! I'm working on the next chapter! It's going to be a long one I think, but I've started it and I'm hoping to finish it soon! Thank you so much for the review and I hope you have a great day. Xxx

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Review #15, by navyfail The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

24th May 2013:
Hi, I felt like rereading this chapter since I'm so cool and all(jk :P) and wanted to leave a review.

First off, I really enjoyed how Lily was described in the beginning. It seemed so natural. Pippa is a great narrator that gave an inside on a different side of Lily. The conversation between them was sweet and open. It felt like there was a bond growing even though Pippa wouldn't ever admit it.

I like that you mentioned the cycle of hurt(that is what I call, don't ask why :P), how Al and her brother hurt her and she hurt Scorpius.

My favorite line(s) would have to be: "One day, I hoped I would not be held down by him, I would be able to untangle myself from his scolding grip. His mark will have faded. The bruises would be no more. I will stare at him and feel nothing." Your words captures the emotions so well like those words boxed the affections for us to touch. :) Your ability with words astound me.

The characterization of Pippa throughout this story is perfect. She is just like the rest of us, holding on to the abilities that make us human. I really hope she gets over her hurt and learns to live with it. Her bitter and snarky side is the best. To me, if she was always nice it would seem to fake, you know?

The last part left me craving to learn about her past and this ex you keep mentioning. I wish to learn more.

And I missed Albus in this chapter. Hope to see him in the next one.

Update soon.

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Review #16, by Hermeeone. The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

16th March 2013:
Ahhh!! Please hurry and update!! :)

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Review #17, by A The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

10th March 2013:
when do we find out who 'he' is?

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Review #18, by shadowcat2 The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

4th January 2013:
I can't believe it took me ages to notice that you updated! It's nice to have you back and I hope the college applications goes well for you.
Anyway, Pippa. I have missed her. As always, her pain blew me away. It felt so real that I could almost touch it. I really liked how you portrayed Lily. I loved the little moment that Lily and Pippa shared. She really needed. I am glad James and Fred finally managed to talk to Pippa. I really liked how Pippa finally saw her ex also had some serious flaws. I know it hurt her. But it needed to happen.
Can't wait to see more of Albus and Pippa's interactions. Their chemistry is one of a kind. I missed Scorpius in this chapter. He makes me smile and I hope we get to see more of him soon.

Thank you for the update. Don't worry, take as long as you need to update the next chapter. It's always worth the wait.

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Review #19, by MaryAnn The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

30th December 2012:
Ohh a tear in the perfect illusion she had of him; can't wait to read on! Love the descriptions, makes you feel what Pippa's feeling!

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Review #20, by ProphecyAuror4269 The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

28th December 2012:
hi . this is my first review for this story. i really like the way this story is going and i have some theories happen as to what can happen in the future . so maybe cn u hv a chapter in Al's POV so we know a bit of his opnion on Pippa or maybe you could have an Al and Pippa moment

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Review #21, by recklessly_sweet The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

24th December 2012:
wow this story is so comelliing that is just takes my breathaway
plwase update, take your time but update :)

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Review #22, by EmilySvart The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

14th December 2012:
I just read through all the chapters and I really-really like it. ^___^ I am glad that you are writing something like this.
Pippa is like me in a lot of ways, so I somewhat find support in seeing someone else who thinks the same things that I do.. eh, and I also like to clean when I am stressed out. Everything has to be in order!
Hm, I don't think I have much more to add.. other reviews already did a very good job with it. I hope you get a chance to update soon!

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Review #23, by JANZme The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

14th December 2012:
Waited such a freaking long time for this! Aaand, well, it was brilliant :)
Pippa's ex was a sick twisted creature as far as I can see. He and Pippa both seem dark and twisty inside, but Pippa is not a bad person. She actually sort of has realized her mistakes and now, I totally love her!
I missed Albus in this episode. I missed AlbusPippa moments.
The sexual tension between the two could be cut with a knife. But I adore them together :)
Cassie! We want more Cassie! :))
Pippa should forgive James and Fred. They really like her and care about her, as apparent from this chapter.
And, I like Lilly too, :)
Overall, awesome :D
Update soon

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Review #24, by Loop The One Where Lily Makes A Decision

11th December 2012:
This is absolutely amazing story! I love her Slytherninness. You are also amazing and talented writer! Please Update SOON!

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Review #25, by AC_rules The One With The Quidditch Match

11th December 2012:
I'm actually surprised and kind of relieved that I'm only three chapters behind in reviewing this story, because I really thought the situation was a lot ore dire than it currently is so that's always nice to know i'm not as far behind as I thought I was.

So, the Quidditch match was really interesting. Poor Pippa having a complete change of mind about what she was doing half way through everything. Although, this has to be one of my favourite quotes This game is really dangerous. like. it's nice for someone to acknowledge that it's a ridiculously dangerous game ahaa.

AND PROPER ALBUS/PIPPA ACTION. I really feel for Pippa though, because she reminds me of some of the darkest moments of my life and I kind of hope that in this story she begins to heal and... like Albus said, learn to fight her demons. Because aare all fightable :)

Plus, my insomnia's totally kicked up a knotch lately so I'm really feeling her wondering around semi conscious not really alive but just existing. Have you ever had insomnia problems? It just seemed pretty accurate.

Anyway, it's really nice to be caught up again! Happy the 11th of December :)


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