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Review #1, by MissMoneypenny And then I am reminded why people confuse me...

7th December 2014:
YES YOU GO AUTUMN
(dom is confusing me but blimey, james - she should totally tap that)
(i hope this review is allowed)

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Review #2, by MissMoneypenny And then I accidently became a thief...

20th November 2014:
this is hILARIOUS extreme kudos to you love

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Review #3, by QkStephen And then I have a merry Christmas...

11th May 2014:
Loved the story. lol muggle studies brought me here

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Review #4, by Lex1999 And then I accidently became a thief...

13th March 2014:
Ahhh! James Potter! what would we do without him?
good story!

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Review #5, by moony4ever And then I have a merry Christmas...

24th December 2013:
Hey!! You are such a wonderful writer and I love all the stories you post here. I love how your characters always have huge problems instead of being perfect and happy. It makes them more real and relate able. This story was just as great as all the others I've read. I laughed at Autumn's silly impulses and rash decisions and felt her insecurity and troubles. James was so amazingly sweet and I just loved how much he cared. Dom seemed manipulative and evil but I actually pitied her because she was truthfully just desperate and scared. I thought the ending was so perfect and satisfying. Thanks for the great read :) Keep writing
-Moony

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Review #6, by kayleefrank And then there is a deviation into toilet humour...

1st December 2013:
Dude, this was hilarious. My family thinks I'm crazy cuz I was laughing so bad. Thanks!

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Review #7, by HermioneeeGrangerrr And then I have a merry Christmas...

28th October 2013:
Well first off I'm suprised that others know about the game of cheat. Secondly I like how you ended it and thirdly I'm glad that everything turned out okay.

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Review #8, by HermioneeeGrangerrr And then there is quidditch (and quidditch related activities)...

28th October 2013:
Amazing writing! This is one of my favorite stories.

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Review #9, by maya And then there are shifts...

20th August 2013:
oh god no is he with another girl?! no no no no no no you cannot do this to me!

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Review #10, by ilovegeorgeweasly101 And then I am reminded why people confuse me...

11th August 2013:
Love this story! In fact I should be writing an essay right now but who cares! I love autumn and think she deserves way better than Dom. Dom is mean and selfish. Have her meet up with Rose or someone nice!

10/10

Clea :)

Author's Response: YEAH WHO CARES ABOUT ESSAYS. DOm is kind of messed up... but she's not a bad person. It's... complicated and stuffs. Good luck with your essay!
Thanks for reviewing!

Helen


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Review #11, by cathilde And then I have a merry Christmas...

15th July 2013:
I read this about a year ago and I've just finished rereading now. I really enjoyed the story and humor and I think Autumn character is really well developed. I absolutely loved the dialogue, especially between Autumn and James, though the bit between Dom and Autumn in the broom closet is awesome! The only negative thing I found with this fic is there's quite a lot of spelling mistakes, especially in the earlier chapters, though they might seem like more than they are to me 'cause I read them all in practically one go (yay for the substenance of hot chocolate!!). Anyway, I think it's a fantastic fic and I'm probably going to read all your other stuff pretty soon!

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Review #12, by harrietm And then I have a merry Christmas...

5th July 2013:
Thank you so much for writing such a brilliant story!! You had me hooked right from the very beginning, and reading like crazy to the end. A real cyber page-turner! Loved the characters, the pranks, the humour, and of course the romance :) :)
The only thing I would say is that occasionally there would be slip ups with words that sound the same but are different...like there, their and they're; your and you're; and heal and heel. Oh and mixing up anecdote and antidote! But none of these stopped the whole thing from reading very well and overall having very few mistakes :) So thanks again and I look forward to seeing anymore stories you write!

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Review #13, by ilovegeorgeweasly101 And then I accidently became a thief...

30th June 2013:
I like it. Sorry I'm not very good at reviews haha. I Justine that for once the heroine is thought of as not funny. It seems like they're always funny, and it's because she's not that I find her amusing. I can't wait to keep reading!

Clea

10/10

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Review #14, by Jenna And then I accidently became a thief...

31st May 2013:
One chapter down and I am hooked. I love the protagonist, hilarious inner monologue (I suppose you'd call it). Can't wait to continue reading :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Jenna! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)

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Review #15, by Deedaltz And then I accidently became a thief...

26th May 2013:
I have been reading hp fanfic for over a year now and this is the first time I have decided to review. I loved this chapter and couldnt' keep a smile off my face. Your characters have great personalities, I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey Deedaltz! very honoured to recieve your first review and thank you VERY much for the lovely compliments! It's been a pleasure to make you smile :)

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Review #16, by CHAS And then further complications arise...

22nd May 2013:
I READ DAILY HERE ON HPFF - YES A LOT! EVERY FEW MONTHS I FIND A STORY SO GOOD I FIND MYSELF ON THE FLOOR ITS SO FUNNY. THIS IS ONE OF THE FEW. NICE WORK.

Author's Response: THANK YOU CHAS! SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT :D :D :D

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Review #17, by bubzi And then we talked...

21st May 2013:
I love this story... it's funny and really well written!

Author's Response: Thanks, bubzi! SO gld you liked it :D

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Review #18, by The Black Lioness And then I have a merry Christmas...

17th May 2013:
This was a wonderful end to a story that I've been following for some time...thank you for writing it; Autumn's character was beautiful and multi-faceted. I also loved the way you wrote James and Dom...Good job, this story was fantastic!

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Review #19, by Carolina And then I have a merry Christmas...

25th April 2013:
This was a pretty great ending.
Not everything was perfect and magically okay, which is how things are when you're trying to forgive and forget and mend bonds. Especially with family.
Argghhh, so many feels right now.
:)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you like it. Family is one of those messy things that never quite work properly, but are still great anyway :)

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Review #20, by Ella And then there are decisions to make...

12th April 2013:
I literally cried like 5 times in this chapter

Author's Response: Wow! Honoured to have had an emotional effect :D

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Review #21, by Ginny_bbbt And then I have a merry Christmas...

12th April 2013:
No! No! No!
I knew the moment I saw that this is the last chapter that you are going to finish it with so many open threads!
I really liked the story from the first time my eyes graced it, but because my time at home is very limited (and typing from phone sucks.) I usually don't review.
Ok, so I admit that I am overly attached to characters and I can never admit that the ending was justified... But still! I feel it more in here.
The theme of the story was that 'everyone can change', and I really liked it that you didn't do it too rushed, so it didn't felt forced - and even that 'finished product' didn't turned too different from what she was before, because you understand, that there is a limit for a change in people.

Now, I am blaming YOU! And only YOU! That I came to love dramas so much.
I used to avoid them a lot, and then by coincidence I read The Art of Breathing.
I really enjoyed it.
So I read more of your work, which were all drama.
Now I will end this comment spontaneously and with a very short warning and see how you take it! Meany!

Author's Response: Awwhhaa, hey there Tom! It's been awhile and it's nice to hear from you again :D

Sorry that you feel the ending has lots of loose ends, I just didn't feel like I had all that all that much left of the story to tel. I'm really glad that you liked the idea of change here! I really wanted to have Autumn accepting herself for who she was, because that's something people struggling with a lot.

Thank you fr this lovely review, and sorry that there won't be any more! :)


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Review #22, by Shay_Gryff And then I have a merry Christmas...

11th April 2013:
yay! I love Autumn and James and Dom! and Oliver... and April... and, well you get the point! Sequel? Maybe? Even just a one-shot? PLEASE!!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: Awh, I have no ideas for sequels or one-shots. But maybe one day! :)

And you bet I will ;)

Helen


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Review #23, by Shay_Gryff And then Iím a terrible girlfriend...

10th April 2013:
CLIFFIE!! And perfect timing, as I am going to sleep now (: Still in love!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: GLAD YOU'RE STILL IN LOVE! Sleep well :)

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Review #24, by Shay_Gryff And then there are not-so lazy Sundays...

10th April 2013:
YES!!!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: OKAY! IF YOU INSIST ;)

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Review #25, by Shay_Gryff And then I turn seventeen...

10th April 2013:
I'm over a third of the way done in less than an hour! AND I love it even more!! I knew there was a reason I kinda liked Dom! OLIVER!! He just might be my favourite! HAPPY BIRTHDAY AUTUMN!!

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

Author's Response: Awhhh, thank you very much for this lovely review! I'm real glad you like Shay_gryff :)

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