Its not very often I come across a draco/hermione fanfic that is so fun and light-hearted as this one. This was so pleasant to read and I felt myself blushing and giggling along with Hermione! You're such a good writer, and if you come across any dramione fanfics laced with humor, wit and such an exquisite writing style such as your own, i'd very much appreciate it if you pointed it my direction.
Keep writing!

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Brilliant writing, a definite favorite of mine. Please keep writing, this is the second time i've read this. Pure genius.

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Hehehe, this was a fun read...is there another part coming? Lol, I wasn't sure, since there are no messages about this being the end or if there is more to come.
But regardless, I like it. Fun read.
Thanks for sharing!

-KC

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Mind blowing.. Please please continue writing! This story actually made my day!! :) I'd say, continue with this story too.. and Draco is tempting as usual.. And Hermione is at her best.. :)

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Just read this for the second time, can't believe I didn't put in a review the last time as this is one of my favourites, I absolutely love Draco in this story, his characterisation is just perfect expecially his cockiness ;) I love the whole story too, the idea that there seems to be a history developing between Draco, Hermione and Halloween!! I'd love to read a sequel, I also really enjoy your other stories too especially the captives dream, I can't wait to read more from that one!! ;)

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wow! That was perfect!
Are you going to continue?

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That was so cute. I loved how well you stuck to all of their characters. Loved the ending. :)

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Wow! You can certainly write a good short story! Have you thought of writing a sequel to this??? I would be delighted to help you if you wanted. :)

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Thoroughly amusing. I really liked it (:
Great job.

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This is really a grand story. I'm really immersed in it.
On to the next part!

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A second part to a fly in his web would be awesome. I want to see what their next adventure holds for the two love bugs.

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Very lovely.

Another wonderful chapter. I very much enjoyed this story. Your writing style was fantastic and the plot satisfying. Great work on this! (:

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very lovely.

this story has so far been very entertaining. also believable, i must add. your plot is well set up and is flowing very nicely. i can't wait to read on and see what the next chapter has in store. great work! (:

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Ooh, can't wait for more!!!

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I really enjoyed reading this story ^^
Love your writing style !

Nina x

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely feedback Nina! :D

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This is extremely well written, wonderfully good, and I loved it. Draco and Hermione are in character, adorable, and hilarious.

Author's Response: Haha i'm so glad you think so. It was a lot of fun to write.

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Hi there, it's JaneTwilight here from the forums with your review. What can I say? This story was brilliant - I couldn't stop laughing, my sides are literally aching. The Draco/Hermione ship seems to be a poular choice for humor from what I've read of my challenge entries so far. Goodluck, you should hear the results some time later today.
Katie.

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review Katie :D It was a fun challenge.

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Loved this story! :)

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I laughed out loud so many times, my kids were wondering what the heck I was reading and came running to read it themselves. I had to disappoint them of course, because they are way under seventeen! LOL!

I loved Draco's remark about worrying what she might do in a closet at work! LOL!

This was so much fun!

"...someone with the strength of his delusions regarding his power of attraction..."

ROFLOLOLOLOL!

Ha ha ha ha ha ha!

I know REAL men with that problem!

Ha ha ha ha ha ha!

I enjoyed this immensely.

Thanks for the laughter. It's a gift to make people laugh.

Thank you so much...

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i love the story soo far!!!
the electricity between them is soo obvious..
how can hermione deny that?
heh
this is defo one of my fav stories up till now!
bravo
cant wait to read part three :):)
100/10
~marlita

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wow...
the descriptions are amazing!!!
i can honestly see the place...
fantastic job so far!
i'm off to read the next part :)
~marlita

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Awesome job! Please update soon!
~Bella

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Wow :D I adore this story so far. Your attention to detail is absolutely ... refreshing. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story :). Can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing great!

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I loved this, one of the best Draco/Hermione stories I've read in awhile. It was very funny and I really enjoy your style of writing:)

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This was the most awesome, funniest story I have read in a long time. Loved it!!! 10/10

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