Oooo, the suspense! Can't wait to read more, you're doing a great job! Report Review
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I think this is a very clever idea.
The whole "what if" angle is always intriguing.
I hope that you continue this. :D --Jenna Report Review
Wow! Harry seems to be in trouble, but the people (Muggles?) have taken him in. The writing here is really good and really draws the reader in, I hope you decide to write more because this story could be really interesting! Great job. (: Report Review
What were you talking about?!!! The beginning was NOT boring. Quite the contrary.
Ahhh, your style is so beautiful! Quotes like this: "...locking bits and pieces of himself away for safe keeping..." are what make this piece so lovely.
For some reason, Harry is reminding me of Tony in Skins (post-accident)... if you've ever heard of Skins. lol.
I love the cluelessness and the weakness. Is he staying with Muggles? I'm guessing Wizards would have recognized him. Awww, heartbreaching. :( He thought they were his parents.
I loved reading this! Hope you'll update soon!
Ta!Author's Response: Oh, thanks!
Those words are all so nice! And I AM glad it didn't turn out to be boring for you to read!
Yes, he's staying with muggles. It will be much more apparent who they are exactly in the next chapter or so. I have heard of Skins, but unfortunately I've never seen an episode. I only hear good things about it though! lol!
I will get to reviewing you, I just had to eat some dinner! Thanks so much for reviewing this, and I'm really glad you liked it! Report Review
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