Yes it was a bit dramatic, BUT I LOVED IT. I can hardly wait to see what you have planned for your next chapter. 10/10 and I have added you to favs so please update soon.Author's Response: Thanks for the 10/10! I've got a surprise at the beginning of my next installment... Report Review
A good chapter. This is going to be interesting. Well I have to read your second chapter, so I give you 9/10 and move on.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased you like it. Report Review
Are you going to write some more? This would be really interesting if you did finish it, please doAuthor's Response: Yeah, I'm planning to write a bit more. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've been 'locked out' of my account due to some password problems for a few days but I'm writing again and I hope to keep you updated! Report Review
Hi, you asked if I could give your story a read so here I am.
This is a really good start and enjoyed it. I liked the details about her 'family' and the mirror images that you could see in Harry's life. It also ended at a good point which left the reader wanting more. So well done on a good start, the story has lots of promise.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you reviewed. There's more coming about Emma and her link with Harry. There might even be a sequel story...
Anyhow, I'm really pleased that you like it. Look out for more stories about Emma...
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Great start! I hope you plan on updating this, its very good.
Keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm getting the next chapter validated now. Report Review
I love the whole idea, update? xAuthor's Response: Oh, yes! There will be an update, definitely! Thanks for the review!
Nice! It's a lovely start!Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it! Thanks again. Report Review
Great start. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
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