Oh no! What happened to Lily? Did Snape hurt her, or is it something else?Author's Response: Poor Lily had a head injury. Snape pushed her down when James came out, and she hit her head on the concrete. She'll be OK, though! thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
I always enjoy reading stories about James and Lily when they stopped hating each other and got together. I like your ability to get inside Lily's head, and including the future Alice Longbottom in your story was a great idea!Author's Response: I always imagined Lily and Alice being friends, which is why it was ironic when both of their children were singled out by Voldemort. thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
Great ,, Great ,, Great :D
Loved it :)
More chapters soon please :)Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it! and there are more chapters on the way! thanks for reviewing! =) ~harrypotterroxs Report Review
yippy yi yippy yo yippy YAY!!! i am the first i am the first!! ok. so first off- THAT WAS GREAT!*insert girly sqeal here-ugg and shudder(I HATE girly stuff so... yep)* anyways, that was EPIC... ok im over doing it but that was a great chapter. if you have more keep them coming. your train of thought is very good :D hehe smilies are the BOMB dont you think?? anyways, i shall leave you now with these...erm...thoughts...in mind. hehe??
-ride an ostrich (i WILL own one one day)
-lick peanut butter off a hobo's foot
-shampoo a squirrel and...
-eat a stick of butter. good job and update some more :) ok...BI!!Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the story! thanks for reviewing and more on the way! :) Report Review
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