This was insanely filled with hilarity, aweomeness, and adorableness. I swear, Albus was by far my favorite. I don't know why, but whenever he kept popping up, I pictured Bob Marley with a mellow toned voice. Or a hippy in baggy tie-dyed clothes. And this is a rather unusual shipment. But I LOVES it!
Teddy + James = ERMEGERD! :3
And purple. That seems like a decent color, I mean, according to my friends purple is the "gay pride" color. But even so, purple is my FAVORITE color, so that smothered everything with awesome sauce.
Love Love LOVE it.Author's Response: Bob Marley? Bahahah! XD Somehow I can picture that too. . .
And I didn't choose purple because of its significance to gay pride. To me purple is just a very soothing and fun color and I felt it unified the story :)
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So, so funny XD Had me laughing for ages!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it made you laugh! :D Report Review
This made me laugh :) It was a nice little story that could even sit on its own as a one-shot, but I'm interested to see where you're planning on going with this.
Even though what was going on was a bit vauge, the banter, especially with Albert, was incredibly amusing, and the end! Brilliant. I liked it muchly. :)Author's Response: Oh, I'm an idiot! *slaps head* This is supposed to be a one-shot, I just forgot to move it to 'Completed' *goes and does it* Thank you so much for the kind words, I'm very happy that you liked this! :D Report Review
Hahah, this was great. I'm so exhausted, but this managed to make me laugh out loud. Especially the Albus parts. I never seen him characterized like that, and I've got to say I'm inspired! haha really great job! And a interesting pairing to boot. I've never seen a james/teddy, but I like it.
-ronsgirl29Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you got the chance to read something new :) Report Review
AW!! This was SO cute(: I loved this. ADORABLE. You captured their personalities PERFECTLY, and I loved how Al was all gangsta. 10/10.Author's Response: Thank you so much! (Haha, gangsta Al!!) Report Review
Hey RandomRed here from the forums. 10 years later I know...
Oh by the way I don't have any rules on my review thread anymore. I decided it was a bit stupid and that I should broaden my scope.
You have a way with humor in this story, I can tell you that. I was on the floor. My favorite part, weirdly, has to be your summary. Well it is also in the story but the last sentence of it is pure gold.
I think this is a really sweet one shot, that is what it is. I don't mean that in a bad way which it may have come out as. You haven't tried to over complicate it with underlying themes etc, etc.
It is a feel good piece and it cheered me up when I read it.
Ginny45/RandomRed xxxAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you dropped by! :)
Hahaha, thanks! I just love writing humor stories...And how is saying that this one-shot is 'sweet' a bad thing?! I'm ecstatic that you liked it! :D
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Heeheeheeheeeheeeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehehhehehee!! I FREAKING LOVE IT! YOU WERE RIGHT! IT IS AWESOME! YOU ROCK!Author's Response: Lol, thanks! Didn't I say you'd love it??? ;-) Report Review
here to review!
I have NO idea what to make of this only that it was very, very amusing!!!
the best part: ALBUS!
seriously dude...reminded me of bill and ted's excellent adventure, or a outtake of cheech and chong or something...
this was ...i dont know. I have nothing constructive to say. it was random and weird and i like random and weird. and through all the random and weird, it worked.
Maji xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!
(Al is EPICNESS xD)
I'm so glad you liked it hahaha :D
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. .. .um.. . . .. .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . . .. . ..idk what to say. .. .. . .. . .. .
-Your AmigoAuthor's Response: Well, did you LIKE it? lol Oh, forget it. Just tell me tomorrow, okay?
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OH MY GOD! I say chillens too! I liked this story very much. I also like all of the pet names. =)Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you so much! :) Report Review
Hello! Here with your review.
I'll admit right now, that I've read this 4 times. The first time, I kept giggling throughout and couldn't really form any comprehinsible words for a review. I had to keep reading until I was burnt out so that I could critique rather than giggle. :D
Just my general opinion, it was quite amusing. I just...I really can't think of a real review. It was sweet and cute and funny. --JennaAuthor's Response: 4 TIMES? O.O
Haha, thank you so much! Personally, I consider you one of the most epicest slash-writers on HPFF, so I'm so happy that you took the time to read this :D I'm glad you liked it, too! :)
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OHMIGOD OHMIGOD OH MY SWEET HEAVEMLY FATHER ZEUSS! Urmes i luved it ...so funny GENDER SWITCHING! hmmm i wonder if oshkay is genderswitching but that's besides the point i loved it loved it loved sooo no constructive criticisim from yours truly wait... i take that back here it is. WRITE MORE! ps. i GAVE U A 10/10 BUT IT'S REALLY AN 11/10 BUT THAT WASN'T AN OPTION PFFT PEOPLE AND THERE RATIONAL FRACTIONS!Author's Response: Oh my Zeus, girl, WHAT ARE YOU ON? :P
Thanks for dropping in! A little enthusiastic there...lol. Anyway, sorry, but I can't really write more to this.It's a oneshot, after all.
AND WHAT THE @$*(@^!$)!^ RATIONAL NUMBERS? WHERE IN SWEET MOTHER OF GOD DID THAT COME FROM?
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