found your story and was pleasantly surprised! I love Tatum's voice, just her personality is just so funny. I totally thought at the beginning, when James showed up magically (ha) back into her life it'd be her and James...which now would be totally horrible. Well not horrible, just not as good as her and Al.
And Emma? BACK?! WHA???
i really hope its not the end of the Tatum-Albus Era. They need a proper kiss, at least.Author's Response: Thank you. :) Yeah, Tatum is like a very hyper and significantly more driven version of myself. I think that every character I write has a part of my personality, to some degree.
Yes, there's a reason James and Tatum never worked out, never even came to be a couple, really. They just aren't right for each other.
Emma is indeed back! :D I sometimes surprise my own self with these chpaters, because at the beginning I wasn't thinking about bringing Emma back. But now she's here and ready to stir things up a bit. :)
As for Al and Tatum... everything in this story is happening for a reason, one way or another. You just have to be a little patient. ;) Report Review
Oh. My.God. I am in love with this chapter. The ending was so intense. I'll be literally checking for an update for this in about every five minutes.
Keep the magic coming :)Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I will try my best to be fast with the update. :) Report Review
This is just plain cruel...just cruel...
Great work though I hope to see more!!!Author's Response: It is a little cruel of me, sorry. :D
More shall come soon. :) Report Review
I love this! I hope to see more soon!!!Author's Response: There will be more soon. :) Report Review
I cant believe james would cheat on her at the ball!! team al :P
please write more :DAuthor's Response: Well, he didn't exactly cheat, because they weren't even a couple, but he did abandon her as her date for the night and, to me, that is quite rude, as well.
I have written almost three new chapter at this point, I'm just waiting for my last chapter image to be updated, so I can continue to post again. That should be soon. :) Report Review
why didn't you write more! this is amazing! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks. :) I will write more, actually I already have chapters lined up to be posted. I just wanted to change the images in them first, to refresh the story a bit. As soon as the next one is switched, I'll continue posting new chapters. :) Report Review
I love the story so far, and the characters are very fun! Huzzah Al and Tatum! James seems like a very self-centered yet somewhat clueless person.
The only thing I'm confused about is why, for the last several chapters, the beginning quotation marks are showing up as being on the bottom (,,like this) rather than on top ("like this"). It is a bit distracting while reading, and I don't think it's just my computer being funky.Author's Response: Thank you. :) Your observation about James is quite spot on, I'd say. :)
As for the quotation, it's because I have one really old and one new computer, so when I type on the old one, the quotation shifts. It's weird, I know. I'll probably fix it sometime in the future, when I find more time. Report Review
YES YES YES! I'm on Team Al here. Can't help it. He's amazing. I like James and all, but I prefer Al for her, especially after he treated her at Hogwarts, anyway, I approve of this turn of events, keep going!
;) 1000/1000 xxAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) Yes, James isn't so bad himself, he had a lot on his mind back then, and Al and him are similar in a lot of ways, because, after all, they are brothers. But it's simple, really. James isn't suited for Tatum. But maybe Al is. ;) Report Review
tatum and albus forevs!Author's Response: I agree. :D Report Review
Love this story! You have no ifra how manu time I've sought out this story, signing when there isn't a NEW chapter! ;) And finally!!! And I love Albus, such an amazing personality!
And now I get why she's called Jill. You might want to make that a bit clearer in the beginning, because It's sommerhalvåret confusing.
Please keep writing!!Author's Response: Aww, thank you for sticking around anyway. :) One other person was also confused about the Jill nickname, so maybe I will go back at some point and make it more clearer. :)
Btw, a new chapter should follow very soon. :) Report Review
I'm .. kinda scared for her ... So both Potter boys are evil ? .. and Albus seemed so nice .. this really makes me curious to wgat he is hiding ... Update soon plzz... Loved it :DAuthor's Response: :D No, don't be scared. Tatum is just a little bit dramatic. But, yes, Albus is still hiding something. And you'll learn what it is in the next chapter. ;) Report Review
Albus + Tatum forever. Love this story! James doesn't deserve her.. I thk al can treat her the way she's supposed too, besides al 's hotter ;)Author's Response: Al and Tatum. It does have a nice ring to it, doesn't it? ;) But Albus has some issues, as well, which you will learn about in the next chapter. But yeah, all in all, he treats he better. :) Report Review
Who the FUCK is Jill?Author's Response: Haha, this made me laugh. :D Jill is Tatum's, aka the main character's, middle name and how she prefers to be called. :) Report Review
Fun story! I'm really enjoying so far.Author's Response: Thanks, read on. I plan to finish it this time around, don't worry. :) Report Review
I really like this chapter. this story is really rounding out. I can't wait to see what happens yet. Can we see some boy interaction with Scorp. and Al though, that is if they are in fact friends ?, I would love to read that.Author's Response: Yup, they're friends and you shall see some interaction soon. ;) Report Review
oh!! i love it so far!! i would stop and sing your praises but i really want to read on! but keep up the AWESOMENESS!Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D I'll try my best to update fast. ;) Stay tuned. :) Report Review
I really like the way that you have laid out the story and the way that it is flowing. You have written this well but one thing I kind of got loss on is when you are talking about Mr and Mrs Weasley at the end of this chapter, I dont understand who you mean? But other than that cant wait for the next Chapter and we saw Albus yay! I still dont know who I am rotting for out of James and Al but have to say more Al at this stage...
Operation: Green with Envy =]Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! :)
Lol, I didn't want to write who the Mr and Mrs Weasley are as I wanted to make it obvious. But also, at the same time, to show that actually any pair of Weasleys can fill in the spots ( Aren't they all a little hot-headed? ;) ). :) But, personally, I was thinking of Hermione and Ron when I wrote that part. :) So, there you go, mystery solved! ;)
I love those boys, both of them. :D Of course neither one is perfect. But that's the fun part!
Thank you again and keep reading. ;) Report Review
Nice chapter! I have to say... I think I may get a crush on Al in the near future. I mean... he's good looking , he's funny... and he's a Healer! I mean, that's just a plus right there! Also, I've gotta comment on the fact that cherry is the strangest thing to be allergic to. It's funny though! Caught some grammar mistakes again, but I'm sure you'll catch those later :) Update soon! I'm looking forward to some more!Author's Response: Thank you. Hehe, well Al is pretty cool, I think. :) Of course, not perfect, but who is? :)
Lol, I have a friend who's allergic to strawberry and that's where I found my inspiration. It's not fair to be allegic to something so delicious, at all. :(
I'll try to work harder on the grammar. I posted the chapter in late hours so that may be another reason why there any, lol.
Thanks again! Keep reading. ;) Report Review
Fabulous job!! Yay for Al! He seems like one cool guy :P
~SAuthor's Response: Thanks! And, yes, he is. :) You'll find out more about him as time goes by. Keep reading. ;) Report Review
I really like this chapter, specially james and albus flashback's because it makes them seem really real and wanting to be normal, which the main character takes notice of even though she is in love with James. Also, Rose is great, I hope that the main character does an exclusive on the wedding party, Rose's bidesmaids and the groomsmen point of view on the whole Rose/Scorp. marriage bit, what they think of the whole thing. You can defently play around with the main character due to her being a journalist, its a great set up really. (I know the main character's name is Tatum by the way, its just easier to write main character,lol)
I love this story, I was so glad to find an updated chapter !Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much. :) I love writing the flashbacks, it's fun and I hope insightful.
Oh, some sort of an exclusive will surely be done. ;)
Haha, it's fun reading it. "The main character." :)
Thank you again! And another update is coming pronto! Report Review
Ahhh, e-mail me at ramitaarora23 @ gmail. com (without the spaces :P), I'll help you get a banner :)Author's Response: Oh, thanks. :) I'm sorry I didn't respond sooner, I was really busy. I'll e-mail you for sure. :) Report Review
Poor Tatum is really lovesick, isn't she? I love Rose.. she's perfect. And the slo-mo part with her hair swinging and stuff... that was so funny! I did catch a few spelling problems, but other than that, great work! I really enjoyed it!Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Yeah, Tatum is still a little stuck in her past. She needs to move forward. Tehe, I'm glad you found it funny.
I'll make sure to revisit all the chapters to correct the errors. ;) Report Review
I like this story so much! Rose's career choice wasn't too unexpected for me, however, I think there would probably been more female Aurors in the twenty-some years between Rose and Tonks. Great work... I'm looking forward to some more!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot. :) I love Rose. She's so fun to write. I admit that there should be more female Aurors but people were still a bit afraid because of everything that happened in the war. So, she broke the barrier and now more women will follow her. :)
Thanks again! Report Review
I want to know what happens next. This is such a good story.Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I admit I haven't spent any time on this story recently as I want to update my other one more frequently. But I'll do my best to change that! ;) Report Review
I love Willow but am a little afraid of Tatum's long term obsession with Ginny and James 'cause it reminds me of Romilda Vane. It's more than a little creepy but it'll surely make things interesting between her and the Potters & Weasleys.
Just a quick question for you, is this a Tatum/Albus or Tatum/James fic? Or neither?Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! And for reading, of course! :)
I'm glad that you like Willow. I do too. I wrote her like this so that she could make Tatum see that it's not healthy being obsessed like that. So, it's good that you're a little afraid of her relationship with James and Ginny. But it's not as bad as Tatum thinks herself. She was admiring Ginny and then, because of that, she found it suitable to fall in love with James. She's just an overacting type. She's confused. But soon things will start to be more clear to her.
As for the pairing, you'll need to read more to find out. ;) Report Review
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