Try to not capitalize dialogue tags and Radios are electronic and therefore do not work in Hogwarts.

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That was great, adorable! I loved it heehee will there be a sequel?

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Awww your book was so sweet please write a sequel or another book.

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Great story i loved it

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I love this! I've always been a HarryxHermione but I love this! I like how you explained things and I love how you made Ron and Hermione tear apart. I don't think their good for each other, and if anyone called me what Ron called Hermione, they'd be eating teeth. But I love this story, and I hope to see much much more from you! :D!

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Amazing story :D Love it and I'll be checking out the sequel :D x

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quite honestly the best fanfic i have ever read!
keep writing!!

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Nooo everything is destroyed :'(
Love
MH

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that was quite lovely, a little quick and a bit short but lovely none the less :) off to the sequel i go!

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this chapter is lovely (besides the confession from Draco). the last chapter made me cry. *sob*. i can visualise everything you write, which is good, it means it's great writing and accurate description :)

Author's Response: Awe! That makes me feel amazing :) Thank you so much darling!

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Here's what you need to do.you need to WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

Author's Response: I wrote a whole seventeen more! Read the sequel! Thanks for your reviews :)

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I LOVE it! "what humans do when they share an emotional moment"!! lol!

Author's Response: Awe! Thank you lovie :)

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Can't wait to get started on the sequel! I loved this story, it was so sweet, and heartfelt. Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for ALL your amazing reviews! Hope you enjoy Above it All :)

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Oh! That almost kiss was so mean. :) I was like... "Ohhh Ron you bastard!!!" Yes I yelled at my laptop! lol It's a good chapter.

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you so much! That was one of my favorite scenes to write :)

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This is my fav chapter now! I loved it! So sweet, it made me want to cry. Great job!

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Aww, it was kinda like a date! Yay! Sorry I'm a total Dramione-head! lol It's so good so far. I'm reading on...

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I liked it. It hasn't moved too fast for me. They're crushing on each other...so cute! I love their bantering.

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Aw! hugs! A very sweet way to end that chapter!

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Draco is great, he's groucy, and a little mean, but not too mean. I like him that way. Hermione is a helpful person, so yeah, it very believeable that she'd try to help him. They could so be a couple! :)

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Very good! Can't wait to read on!

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You're right gott lay that groundwork. I'm bad for rushing things in my stories sometimes. :) It's still good so far.

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Pretty good so far. I didn't get to read it before, but I'm reading now. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoy :)

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very nice! very believable! i love it 10/10 please read mine "A Familiar Face" and review, i need moral support to keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'll try to read when I have some spare time!

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I was literally like talking to myself this whole chapter. I loved it. I love this. Oh my god. You are amazing.

Author's Response: I love YOU. Thank you for this review darling :)

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It's like that whole Head Boy/Girl scenario, but better!

Author's Response: Well thank you! Hope you enjoy reading :)

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