Cute! I can't believe I've only just discovered your stories! Looking forward to more :)Author's Response: Well, thank you! Truthfully, I'm not the best updater; it's not hard to believe you hadn't found me sooner. I'm really, really excited you enjoy my writing. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
Awww! Precious! I'm ready to read more! Update soon please!!Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll try to be quick, but I'm not so speedy these days. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Love it :) love it. Love it. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so, so glad you do. Report Review
Ah (hx10)update please! I love this story! :) 10/10!!!Author's Response: I am working on it, I promise. Thank you so much for reviewng, I truly do appreciate it! Report Review
love. this. so. much! Continue! Please!
:)Author's Response: When I get home tonight, I plan on putting up the next chapter. I really am glad you like it; that means so much. Thank you for reviewing, I really do appreciate it. Report Review
mesa liking this story! It is funny and awesome!Author's Response: Mesa glad you like this story! Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
This is so good! You have like eight Lily/James fanfics and they are all amazing! :)Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I do have a lot. They are my addiction. But then there's you! You've read and reviewed so many of them! Thank you so much, and I'm really glad you like this one. I'm getting the next chapter ready for the queue. Gee-wiz, thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
This is so cute! I can't wait to read more x]Author's Response: It'll be a couple of weeks; the queue is long right now and I've got three chapters to post before ten of this. But I think you'll like the next chapter, too... Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
So ready for James and lily to become a couple! Anyway! Great Chapter!! Update soon please!!Author's Response: I promise there will come a time when they are together, but I couldn't say if that's yet. Thanks ever so much! Report Review
I wanted them to hook up
Help me out hereAuthor's Response: We've still got some obstacles to overcome, haha; it's a story, after all. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I love how you don portray Lily as a damsel in distress who's totally incapable of looking after herself like some other lily/james stories, and still have James rescuing her in a sweet way:) I love the idea of the patronus-discovery thingAuthor's Response: Oh, thank goodness. I was really worried she came off weakly; she's really a strong woman, but this is a fearsome enemy she doesn't know how to confront seeing as she grew up as a Muggle. I've been trying to find a good place to put Patronuses, and I think I'll stick it in when things get emotionally messy.
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I loved this and it is soo short
I wanted to see her run after James
But anyway, loved the explanation for Lily's feelings towards JamesAuthor's Response: I didn't want Lily to come off as a bitch; she's just confused and hurt. So I'm glad the explanation worked.
She's a little too proud for that, and besides, we wouldn't have a story then, would we?
Thanks for reviewing; I'm so glad you do! Report Review
Well that was a bit unexpected. Good chapter, though. Update soon!!!Author's Response: Yeah, I know. Constant vigilence!
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I can't believe it
How could she!
OMG, There must be a very good reason for this
Don't keep me waiting
Anyway, great chappieAuthor's Response: She could very easily. There is a good reason, although the "very" part is subjective. I'll try not to keep you waiting. Chapter 8 is going in soon.
Thanks for reviewing, I love yours. Report Review
This is a really amazing story!! It's so well-written that it sometimes surprises me :)
Update soon!Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm really trying. That means a lot to me.
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You know I love this chapter and I want to kind of fill this review with a bit of an authors aopinion.
In mind it is OBVIOUS that Sirius disliked Lily, first I think from shoving James away all these years and then because she kind of stole his best friend, but then after things got a lot darker and Sirius saw the love between them he softened up and became close friends with themAuthor's Response: I have the same feelings. A Sirius and Lily friendship is going to bloom in this story, and there will be times when they talk about the past--and Sirius definitely didn't like Lily in the earlier years. I'd elaborate more, but then I'd give part of the story away, and that's no fun!
Thanks so much for reviewing; you know they mean more to me. Report Review
This is a really amazing story. I wish there were more writers like you on HPFF and I can't wait to read more.
Update soon!Author's Response: I'm flabbergasted. I'm utterly flattered, because I've never felt that way about my own writing. So I am truly thankful for that, really truly.
I will! I hope to get it into the queue tonight!
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Okay I have to say before I keep reading that this is exceedingly good dialogue. You have Lily's sense of humor down exactly as I imagined it.Author's Response: Why thank you! I've always thought of her as really witty, and I wanted to write a story where she got to be really witty.
Dialogue is also my weak point, so that really made me feel awesome. Thanks a ton! Report Review
I really liked it, especially the bit about how James has sort of become Lily's rock after the attack :) Happy writing!Author's Response: Well thank you, for all of it!
I'm really glad you like it. It's going to get hard soon, but I hope you stick with me. Report Review
You've promised more
snifs snifsAuthor's Response: It's coming, it's coming. This is going to be a long story, there's plenty of time.
Thanks for reviewing, and I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
Ohhh noo it ended so prematurely, I wanted MORE!lol
Soory for that
It's just that I love Lily and James soo much
But great chapterAuthor's Response: More is on it's way, especially with the short wait time for the queue! I dearly love them, too. And thank you, I really appreciate it. Report Review
It really like this story, please keep up the good work. I hope we get to see some of Lily in action, though. I like the way you've characterized her, but I wouldn't mind seeing her stand up for herself or have a bit more temper in later chapters. Not to critisize the way you've written her, which I think is brilliant, but just a suggestion. Great first few chapters!Author's Response: Don't worry, things really happen. Mostly I was foreshadowing the Death Eaters, not Lily.
No, please, criticize away. I do enjoy this Lily, personally, and she does stand up for herself a lot. A lot. This story is going to the death, so she's got a lot of fiery passion on its way.
Thank you for reviewing. I truly appreciate it. Report Review
First to review, yay!
I loved this chapter, you really have a knack for comedy and there was a moment there I thought Lily and Sirius were getting along so well he was going to fall in love with her two, yet I loved this and I want to definetly see more of the storyAuthor's Response: Sirius is not going to fall in love with Lily; I'm not a Sirius/Lily shipper. I'd never thought I was very funny, so thank you for that. You're absolutely going to see some more as soon as the queue opens back up. Thanks so much for reviewing. Report Review
so want to se more of the storyAuthor's Response: What a coincidence! I want to see more of it, too!
I'm working on it very hard. This story is going to blow all my other ones out of the freaking water.
Thank you so very much, especially for the favorite! Report Review
I like the tone you've set for your story. I think you did a good job of introducing your characters although I would like to see a little more of Lily, but I understand this is the first chapter and because of it theres sure to be more of the other characters in your story. :DAuthor's Response: Well, thank you very much.
Lily's the main focus of the next chapter; I'm writing the whole story in third person limited, but I switch between Lily and James every few chapters.
Thank you again, and I've got another chapter coming. Report Review
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