I know I have already written about how I would like to see you continue the story, but I'm writing to tell you that every time I read it I will write to ask you to finish. It is a great story and I really want to see how it ends. Please write some more chapter and get the ending up. I would appreciate it so much. Thanks Report Review
Its been over a year since you have written anything for this story. And I would hate to see this be abandoned or forgotten just when it was getting good and at a cliff hanger. So please write some more. I know I have written you before because this is not my first time reading this but I really want to know what happens and see where everything goes. I just love stories like this one, especially veela stories since there arent to many of them out there. Please continue this story for all of us readers out there dieing to know what happens. Thank you! Report Review
Very good so far. I love the story. I have not laughed like that in so long. Pretty much every chapter had me giggling like a school girl at the stuff they said and did. Its fantastic. I cant wait until you finish it and I get to find out what happens to everyone. Great job and continue the good work. I am also glad that Blaise is a Veela as well. Its just so interesting you made him one too. Thank you and continue the good work. Report Review
I love your story! Please update more chapters soon I want to know what happens Report Review
This is one of the most interesting stories I have read so far. I can't say that I've ever heard much about Veelas. Did you make most of it up or is some of it borrowed? Thanks for a great story!Author's Response: It comes from the lovely recesses of my beautiful mind! It can get scary in there, but sometimes it produces works of art! lol xxoo Tregan Report Review
OMR! :O i don't think i have ever laugh so much in my life!! ;P i can't stop laugin!!! and i love that you have made the boy's be a girl for a day! ^.^ that can teach them to be nicer!! ;D i hope you will update soon! i have read the story at least 5 times this day xD :iI some of the thing i have laugh at : -" I'm so excited I could pee!" -" Alright, alright, I surrender. Let's go make sure the princess is on time." -" I wouldn't think so, but then again, I'm a Gryffindor. Kindness and affection aren't lost on me unlike certain cold blooded Slytherins." -" One male, one female," the class sighed and began making new partners. -" From different houses!" the class groaned. -" If I could trade you spots right now, I would in a heartbeat. Just be happy you don't have to work with Malfoy." -He defiantly has earned himself an extended stay on the funny farm, thats for sure!' -" I did Granger, or didn't you notice the fire? And you should be excited Granger, you get to spend an entire day in the body of a handsome pureblood male, it's me who should be worried. I'm going to be wearing makeup, skirts, and I'm going to have to pee sitting down! Peeing sitting down and skirts. It's just not natural!" >.< i love this part! -" It's not so bad Malfoy, you might enjoy it!" -" Ever the know-it-all," -Madame Pomfrey jolted up from her desk where she was sitting reading her steamy romance novel and wishing she could meet a man like the leading man Magnus someday. -" Well it would appear so Mr. Weasley, I have yet to hear of students ending up in excruiating pain from nothing, so if you and Mr.Potter don't mind, I have to tend to my students!" -' What is that amazing smell? Where is it coming from?' -He suddenly needed to be close to her, beside her, inside her! -With one last smell, he closed his eyes and said a silent goodbye to his sanity and fell asleep next to Hermione Granger! -' How did I end up in bed with Malfoy, and in the hospital of all places?' -' But how did Malfoy get in bed with me?' >.< dirty mind :iii -" So, how do you guys like being female for a day?" -" Merlin Hermione, how do you girls wear these blasted things?" -" Skirts?" -" Yeah skirts, I keep forgetting that when wearing them, I have to keep my legs crossed all the time, and you girls get breezes in places you shouldn't be, and I nearly broke my ankle walking in these heels." -" And I cried three times, Herms, three times! For no apparent reason, well Lavender did say something that hurt my feelings, but it shouldn't have. She just said my hair was messy, and I just started bawling in the middle of the Great Hall." -" well guys,er girls, I should be going to bed. I've had a long day and I'm tired. I'll see you later." -She turned back around and was engulfed in a bone crunching hug. She pulled away and stared at Harry, a weird expression on her face. -" Sorry Mione, we've just been craving hugs all day. Is that a girl thing?" he asked, his face burning with embarrassment. -" Umm, do you think I could have a hug Mate? She didn't hug me when she left." asked Ron, sniffling and holding back more tears. -Harry sighed and wished unnatural death upon Snape. and btw you got a 10/10 from me :*Author's Response: I'm glad my story has you laughing so much, I'm really aiming for a good comedy. I hope the other chapters have you lauhing as well. Another chapter coming up soon! xxoo Tregan Report Review
Great job so far!!! i cant wait to read more!!! -A devoted fan 11/10 :DAuthor's Response: Yay, I love devoted fans, lol! New chapter coming soon, I promise xxoo Tregan Report Review
Hehe thanks for updating! Its cool how the plot is Soo unique and I can never guess what happens next! I like how you've written the vampires! Can't wait to read more soon!Author's Response: Thanks love, I didn't want the Vampires to follow Twilight, or any other thing like that, they are dead and do feed off humans, but they still are human, with human emotions still inside with other emotions. But I'm glad you're liking the story, more to come, I promise xxoo Tregan Report Review
Hello again! I liked this chapter. Your writing of the vampires was good. Over all this was quite nice. Looking forward to the next chapter (and hoping for some nice steamy romance scene as well :P)! cheers! ADAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed my chapter love, it's hard to post sex scenes on this site, as it is a family site, but for further sexy scenes, go to AdultFanFiction. net to see the full story! Plus other amazing stories. Next chapter will be up soon! Promise xxoo Tregan Report Review
I love your book!I'd been reading this for like a year and then I completely forgot(because you never updated!lol no accusation though, life gets busy haha)and I just rediscovered it WITH 4 NEW CHAPTERS!I was sooo excited...please don't leave me hanging for another year XDAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much love, and I apologise for the delay in chapters. You were right, life got busy, hectic, but now that it's all calm and peaceful once again, I'm updating as often as this site allow me too! Chapter 19 is awaiting validation, and the other chapters are finished, the story is complete! You will be able to read the ending! xxoo Tregan Report Review
Keep writing!!! I can't wait until you finish the story. I have read so many stories on this website. Most stories are very similar. They share the same ideas and the idea that Hermione and Draco are heads. However, when I read this, I was so glad that i found such a good story. The story was so original. I never came across a story like this. I can't wait until I know the ending! Thank you for contributing a great story like this to Harry Potter Fan Fiction.Author's Response: You flatter me with your kind words. I'm glad that I've come up with a story that's both new and different. I find alot of stories tend to be the same plot line, I tried not to follow those steps. Next chapter is waiting validation, and the next is being written as we speak, sorry for the delay! xxoo Tregan Report Review
yay! a new chapter!! finally. i have been waiting soo long. i just looove your story. please ohh pretty please update more soon!! :)Author's Response: Hey love, I apologize for taking so long with my chapters, but I refuse to post a chapter I think is less then adequate for my readers. But the next one should be up pretty soon! xxoo Report Review
I love ur story plz keep going it's so good I really like the story plotAuthor's Response: Thanks love, glad your enjoying it! It will keep going, have no fear :) Report Review
What happens next? :-3Author's Response: LOL, You'll just have to wait! ;) Report Review
I liked this. haha nice one. waiting for the next 10/10 cheers ADAuthor's Response: Thanks love Cheers, Tregan Report Review
This chapter was just as great as all the others and I especially appreciate your correct grammar. This really is the best Dramione I've read yet (and I've read a bunch) and I'm eagerly awaiting the upcoming chapters :)Author's Response: If your going to write a story, grammar is a definite MUST! How else are your readers going to able to follow along with your story, let alone stay interested enough to read more then a paragraph or two? I'm glad your liking my story, hope I'm doing Dramione justice. Also, I hope to keep your satisfied! hugs and cookies! Report Review
update soon please loved pansy's remark at the endAuthor's Response: It was the only thing I could see her saying at a time like that! Updating ASAP love, don't fear! Report Review
Haha that was good draco is soo funny when he told everyone about the marking haha good job worth the wait :)Author's Response: I wrote him in that sense like I really am, straight to the point and brutally honest. However, I can be compassionate when it's needed. Glad your enjoying my story, hope it stays that way! Report Review
I'm reading this for, like, the third time, and am I the only one who realizes that by the end of the chapter, Ginny looks like an Oompa-Loompa? Good job, Tregan, good job. 10/10 again! ~LeslieAuthor's Response: LOL, that was my intention, and I'm glad someone caught it! Thanks for the vote love, and I'm glad your enjoying my story. I hope to keep you satisfied, Tregan Report Review
Yay! Yay! Yay! Yay! YAAAY!!! So my computer broke a while back so I wasn't able to read, but now, I'm back, and super happy with two whole chapters that totally made my week! totally fabulous! I kept getting chills! eeep! yay! (if you can't tell, I am extremely happy right now) thank you for posting! yay! :D XOXO, SaviAuthor's Response: I'm so addticed to your reviews, you have no idea! You always make me smile and laugh, and I'm happy I made your week hun, I'm in the process of re-writing te next three chapters, just wasn't happy with them, and I refuse to give m readers half-assed chapters. So You'll be getting them soon, I promise Report Review
i loove your story soo much. it sucked me in right from the beninging and i couldnt ever stop reading it. i love the draco hermione thing. its different. please please add more chapters soon.Author's Response: Thanks love, glad your enjoying my story. I will be adding more chatpers soon, I promise! Report Review
This was AMAZING:D Please please write some more(: xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks love, next chapter is on its way soon, I promise Report Review
well, they got away this time. and Blaise finally marked Ginny! took him long enough.Author's Response: Wanted it to be the right time Report Review
and the trap has been sprung. . . thanks to Luna being observant :/Author's Response: Luna's always observant, just not many realize it Report Review
soOoOoOoO. . . IT'S A TRAP!Author's Response: Good call hun Report Review
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