Americans don't have weird terms. If anything, at least we don't talk all formal. Report Review
You forgot to write why he moved to usa, he said that it was because of hermione, but why?
Ps great story 8/10Author's Response: It's not meant to be said outright. It's implied. Just think about it and I'm sure you'll get it =]=] Thanks! Report Review
I loved it! I was expecting a little more similarity from The Proposal, but I loved it nonetheless!Author's Response: That's what I intended, but it didn't come out like that lol! Thanks!!! Report Review
omg i love your storyAuthor's Response: That's good, thanks =]=] Report Review
aww a very sweet story. liked reading it. good work!
ADAuthor's Response: thank you!! =]=] Report Review
ohmygod. I loved this. :33Author's Response: thank you!! =]=] Report Review
This has to be one of my favorite stories ever. It was well written and i simply love it.
Usually i dont go for the " and they lived happily ever after" because to me Dramione can never be that simple. This one however was believable and in its own way kind of cannon. So props to you Byebye!
Still your biggest fan, Always and Forever,Until Next time, Diana aka Muse PrincessAuthor's Response: thank you very much!!! i appreciate it =]=] Report Review
When i read this i thought Narcissa must really be delusional to be that rude. You usually never see her that mean. I'm glad Draco is a caring son and he tries to help his mother. Hermione felt so awkward there but it must be a considerable reaction. Anyway great chapter.
Always and Forever, Your Biggest Fan, DianaAuthor's Response: well, i figured that she couldnt be an absolutely wonderful person, she did marry Lucius after all, and akward is a bit of an understatement, at least for how i would feel in that situation =] thanks =]=] Report Review
I'm back! it has been forever since i reviewed. I finished reading this fic and i have to say it has been amazing. great work!
Always && Forever, DianaAuthor's Response: thank you =]=] Report Review
i really loved the ending. it was perfect. i especially thought it was cute how you included ginny's individual opinion of hermione marrying draco. that was sweet.
btw, i'm also very glad that you allowed yourself to stray from the movie. i mean, it was inevitable, as you were dealing with magical people, not just muggles, hahaha. but you allowed the story to grow into its own thing. you didn't restrict it within the confines of the original idea.
overall, really fun short read, and i'm glad i found it!Author's Response: well im glad you liked it =]=] i know some peole would have prefered me to stick to the movie line, but it just didnt work out as well as i planned =]=] thanks =]=] Report Review
well, i'm glad draco's getting narcissa the kind of care she needs, but it's always an awful feeling having to leave somebody at a hospital or care-home, no matter HOW you feel about him/her. =(
and yay! i'm so glad that hermione and draco are together, even if they're not TOGETHER together (yet). =DAuthor's Response: it always sucks like crazy when you have to do that =[ thanks =]=] Report Review
Holy...whoa. First off, why did he keep saying that narcissa was dead? And second, i MUST know what happened to lucius! This story just got even better, and i had no idea it could.Author's Response: i had a little problem with that, but im pretty sure ive fixed it... Draco claims that shes dead, because shes dead to him and he is dead to her, however, she isnt actually dead. and the lucius youll just have to wait for =]=]=] thanks =]=] Report Review
LOL. Ron is terrible at keeping secrets. And i can't believe that ginny thinks that hermione's a lesbian. HAHAHAH!Author's Response: it was only meant to be a sarcastic joke lol =]=] but im glad you enjoyed it =]=] thanks =] Report Review
Oh no! This whole ron proposing to hermione thing isn't one of his better ideas, is it? I mean, they weren't in a relationship and she hadn't even been home in a while! Geeze ron.Author's Response: no, it wasnt... but when does ron ever have a good idea? ive never been much of a ron fan, so i might, sorta, tend to make him out to be a bad guy in my stories =[=[ thanks!! Report Review
LOL. I loved the movie, and something tells me i'm going to love this fic. Could it be all the laughing i just did whilst reading the first chapter??
Movies turned into fics can be a dangerous idea (as some movies just don't translate well), and just downright disappointing when written poorly. But i don't anticipate either problem here! Can't wait to see what else you've got in store! HahahahaAuthor's Response: im glad you dont anticipate my story being terrible lol =]=] thanks =]=] Report Review
Ha ha! Loved it! At first, I thought it was a little far-fetched but the the story got better and I began to love it more and more! I only wish it was longer... but none the less! It's excellent as it is! =)Author's Response: i understand =] but im glad you still liked it, thanks =] Report Review
Well, I love the movie and I like your story up to this point, except for one thing: I get that Draco/Andrew lied to everyone about his parents being dead, but why would he lie to himself? I mean, in the beginning of this story you wrote:
"He laughed aloud as he thought about what his mother would be telling him if she had still been alive. He could almost hear her say something like, “You need to settle down soon. Find a nice wife, have a few children, I won’t be alive forever, you know.” She hadn’t been. She had died not even two weeks after his father had died. He had been killed during a raid on one of Voldemort’s camp sites that the Order had discovered. She had died because that bastard had cursed his own wife."
And now his parents are alive? The inconsistency is a bit frustrating as a reader. You may want to delete that part of Draco's inner musings in Chapter 1, or just have his parents be dead.
Anyway, looking forward to the rest of the story. :)Author's Response: i totally forgot about that part when i was writing. i thought he only said that they were dead to him! thanks for pointing that out, i will get that fix ed ASAP =]
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Interesting! I'm looking forward to read the next chapters.Author's Response: thanks! i just posted the next one this morning =]=]=] Report Review
aww so sweet...loved the whole thing.Author's Response: thank you =]=] im glad you liked it Report Review
Okay, first things first:
That was such a cute, adorable, funny story! Maybe I liked it especially because I haven't seen The Proposal yet (yes, I know, shame on me) but I just loved how you adapted the storyline of the movie to the whole HP world.
Great job! I really enjoyed reading it :)Author's Response: im glad you did!! and thanks =]=]=]=] Report Review
Rawr! I found this only when this chapter was posted.. lol.. Anyway, woohoo.. Happy endings to go around! Good job!Author's Response: thank you! im glad you liked it!!! Report Review
awww I loved this story it was sooo good! ^^ I look forward to reading future stories of yours.Author's Response: thank you! im really glad you liked it! Report Review
Awww happily every after :) I enjoyed this story very much :)Author's Response: im glad =] thanks =]
Its like a lovely fairy tale (I almost wrote table, lol) quite twee but nice all the same. :D sad to see it end, :(Author's Response: thats ok, i add in extra letters to words all the time =] i dont know what twee means, but im glad you enjoyed it =] i hope you did like the ending though, i thought that it was one of the best ways to wrap it up =]=] thanks again =]=]=] Report Review
hmmm thats interesting, please update with more soon!Author's Response: the last chapter should be veiwable soon!!! im glad you liked it, thanks! Report Review
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