Oh I want to cry! It's beautiful!(: perfection.

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This is quite possibly the best fanfic i have ever read and i am really sad about sirius but it was an amzing ending

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it! Keep your eyes peeled: there's a possible sequel-type thing in the works :) xx-mrsteddylupin

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Hi there!

I really like the start of this story. I thought you did a great job of describing the scene that you created. It painted a perfect picture in my mind even if the chapter was short.

I also really liked how you characterized James and Sirius. I thought you hold true to there troublemaking attitudes. Sirius is reflection on not being able to have Lily is intriguing. You did a great jon holding my attention from start to finish and I am curious as to what will be happening next.

Keep up the awesome work! =)

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

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i cried :'( i wanted Sirius and Lily together :'(

Author's Response: Aww! I'm sorry! Keep your eyes peeled for a sequel in the future: there are some things left untouched that i want to write about :) xx-mrsteddylupin

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I Actually Love How You Put It The Thing About The Barrels...I'm A Beta User On Pottermore And You Don't Understand The Excitement I Felt When I Saw Someone Else Had Written About The Proper Way; I Was Getting A Bit Frustrated With Other Stories Writing About There Being A Password To Hufflepuff Even Though They Obvious Didn't Know About It Lol x

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you!! I think that might be the coolest common room entrance at Hogwarts, and I really wanted to use it. :)

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that was amazingg! i would of reviewed earlier but i just couldn't stop reading:D you are a fantastic write and i hope you keep writing because your stuff is brilliant :)

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Oh my God. Words can't express how amazing this was to read. (ALL of the chapters) I fell in love with this as soon as I started reading it and I was so amazed at how you put it together. It was very emotional too. So realistic. I cried quite a few times, out of amazement, out of sadness, out of pure happiness. And when Mary died, it made me feel so awful because I felt like I was losing a friend, also.
But, all in all, this was absolutely fantastically wonderful. The concept of this story was genius and, and I don't think I would have thought of Lily and Sirius like this in a million years to come. I think this could make a perfect movie someday. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! I truly appreciate your feedback :) also, just so you know, there may or may not be a sequel in the works ;) xx-mrsteddylupin

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Awww! That is so sweet! I love this so much, going in my favorites for sure! (: This is so special. I think the only name suitable for you would be. Mini Jo. Yeah, that works. Thanks for adding to the magic, the magic that is always.

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Aww, I have to admit, that is really sweet! amazing speech, by the way.

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Aww! Poor Lily! I can't believe Mary died! No! D':

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Wow, that was a speedy chapter. I read it in like, seconds. Lol. Love...d? D? Why the d, James? why? you make Lily so sad!

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Aww! I hate James, but I never wanted their friendship to end! How terrible. maybe he will cool down. see that he just isn't awesome enough for Lily, and Sirius is past awesome. Urghhh! Why you do this to me? :P but siriusly, this is sad):

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Aww, I love the way you described the kiss. Now just another reason for me to hate James. Urgh. Lol, I did really enjoy this chapter(:

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Aww, poor Sirius. Everything has to be so difficult. ): He sounds extremely sexy in that mask, though. :D haha

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Wow, the mask sounds so pretty! This will be fun. haha:P

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Awh, poor Lily. choose Sirius! Not James! He sucks! Lol, sorry. This is a really nice chapter(:

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Haha, I love how she just runs away. The pink hair! Zomgg! I laughed. So. Hard. I like this chapter, too. I loved "Sirius said devilishly" for some reason, lol.

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Woahh. That was...a very...detailed day-dream. I liked it, don't get me wrong. Lol. Can't wait until homework. ;P

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Oohh! haha, I sound like such a dork. This is really cute, but I think it's kind of sad. Them not being together. I really like it, though(:

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Aww! I love this so much! be back tomorrow! (:

Author's Response: Thank you for all of your sweet reviews!! I really appreciate your feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! xx-mrsteddylupin

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Aww, I love the ending of this chapter! He is so sweet, I can't get over it! haha, this is really nice.

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Woah, I like the ending. Alot. and I love: “It became a problem when I realized that you mean it… and that I want you to mean it.” “Whoa.” brilliance:D Love this chapter, and that prank was amazing! Can-can girls... Lol. :P

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Ooooh, revenge! I loove it! haha, I am excited now. I think this is one of my favorite chapters! (:

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Aww! The eneding is so sweet of James! I still don't like him. But it's sweet! This is really cute.

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This chapter was really cute, I really enjoyed it. (:

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