I enjoyed this chapter and I wish it would've been a little longer. Though I did noticed that most sentences didn't start with capital letters and there were some commas missing (but that can be fixed by giving it another look :) )

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, It would have been longer if I knew what to write, but at the moment I seem to be having a bit of writers block with the next chapter which I can hopefully fix soon *fingers crossed* I shall make sure I go back and edit the mistakes, so thank you for pointing them out to me :-D capital letters are my biggest problem, I rely too much on word correcting everything for me hehe. Thank you for reading and reviewing x

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The fact that you started with the future pulled me in straight away! It was excellent. I'm really interested to find out the rest of the story now! It like, gave me goosebumps!

I can't wait for some more chapters of this story! It's amazing. You've got one of the most brilliant starts going on here & I really do need to find out more! Your writing style brilliant, I like your flow and your choice of language is brilliant.

10/10

- Keely/SexyDoorFrames

Author's Response: Aww Keely! Hi! thanks so much for your review! :-D I'm glad that you enjoyed the start and that it gave you goosebumps hehe.
I am so happy now that you reviewed. I am working on the next chapter at the moment.
Thanks for the 10/10.

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This is interesting I was wondering if you're going to continue it? Because if you are you already have a loyal fan :)

Author's Response: oh wow thank you so much for the review :-D yep it's going to be continued. Thank you so much I'm glad that we're going to have a loyal fan :-D xx

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