YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!
I couldn't stop reading the story!! I loved every chapter and every word! Can't wait to read the next part!

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Id be so pissed if a guy slept with me and ignored me the next day or week-especially if it was only the second time we did it.

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So good so far! Love it

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I love love love the story, it so awesome but I don't understand the thing with Hermione's name. Could you explain?

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I love this chapter so much. Your writing style astounds me. Usually when I read fan fiction I know it's just fan fiction but, in all honesty, when I read your writing I have to remind myself that this isn't an actual Harry Potter book. Btw Ton is such a git!

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good, but i expected hermione to fight back and yell at ron after he said he was finishing off his relationship with her, after all she's hermione and a strong enough to fight with ron didn't expect her to disolve into tears. :/

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Cliffhanger endings don't work for me!! But I'll give you a 1010 anyways! Loved it. I just hope Dramione get back together *pleading face*

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I would love a sequal

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I loved this chapter, and how you ended it! I was totally saying "Aw" (: Awesome job! x

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Amazing story! I'm hooked!

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hello, i'm here from confrontationally challenged :D
I really liked this first chapter. It moved along quickly even though there was some backstory to tell.
the bit about Fred was sad, but seemed like it could be developed a little bit more.
The story looks like it's off to a great start!

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I love the idea in this chapter, it was great but there are things I do not understand because of your horrible grammar and spelling errors. I would like clarification on what you meant by "he said they were dulling to practise for class but his spell was too powerful". Also, what did Ginny mean when she said she was "so strange" in her recount of Malfoy attacking Ron. Thanks.
*practice is spelt with a c, not an s. Your words, not mine.

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I hate u for making it end like this feel these pitch forks I'm throwing at u thats my hate 4 the end u give me an amazing beginning a breath taking middle and then you make a cliffhanger end jeez

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Only thing that would make it better...
Remember in Goblet of Fire when Rita Skeeter wrote that Hermione was in a love triangle with Harry and Viktor Krum and all Harry's fans sent her an abundance of hate mail? I was expecting that for Ron, rather than just one howler.
But halfway there with Hermione getting lots of support :)

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I couldn't understand why you were so keen for Ron and Hermione to break up, coz I thought she would've been the one that broke up with Ron for Malfoy. Never did I imagine Ron would do the cheating!! I loved the chapter, felt actual anger toward Ron, a gooey feeling toward Malfoy and felt very sorry for Hermione.

You are a very good writer

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I'm not sure if you're aware but it's Parvati Patil, not the way you've been spelling it, and Draco has steel grey eyes, not steal.

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Wow you really scared me at the end! I thought Draco lost all of his memory like in some other Dramione's. But u kept it original so I'm really happy. The only thing that concerns me is one of the chapters names... Rons death.any way cant wait 2 read more! 10/10

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This was such a great chapter I wanted to hit Ron and hug Draco.

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Platform 9 1/3? no no no!
Other than that its good

Author's Response: haha sorry, i meant to change that!! =/ im revising it so i'll get to it then!

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wonderful! especially the ending:)

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Oohh this story is great!!! I love how you called the ketchup 'tomato sauce 'I do hope that Ron never ever never gets back with Hermione. In fact I think it would be great if Ginny Harry Hermione and Draco were a team and leave Ron out of it! Any ways.. I give this chapter 10/10=)

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great story!! 1 thing thats been bothering me a bit throughout the story, you've been spelling gryffindor, parvati, and patil wrong.. i believe there were a few more i just can't think of them at the moment. But other than that, I absolutely love this story so far! its one of the most interesting dramiones i've read and I like how they don't get together right off the bat and i like how she didn't go straight to draco after she broke up with ron! i look forward to finding out what else happens in this story :)

Author's Response: the story is under revision atm so those mistakes will be corrected =)

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you have to upload the next chapter as fast as you can. what happened to draco and lavenders baby?

Author's Response: this is the end of the story but the first two chapters of the sequel are up! =)

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The whole set up is imcredible so far! the only thing i have to say is that after hermione woke up and was listening to the others talk, it got a little confusing. but otherwise, it was perfect. :)

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how can they sit together in broad daylight... kind ah going against the storyline... or maybe they can because they all get along now?

Author's Response: they are friends to the outside world but no one knows about their relationship. So they can sit together as they are friends

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