it was good but not very believable at parts. . . for example, harry, ron, and ginny would never kick someone out like that, its a little too out of character. other than that, i love the plot, it's an awesome story and i can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: I know about the first part, I remember writing it like forever ago and I agree. I've learned more about characterization, so I know what I did was wrong with them kicking her out all of a sudden. And I'll try to write up a new chapter soon! :)

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phew!!
so much drama! IT'S AWESOME!!! xD

i love your story very much and i can't wait to read the next chapter! woot!

Author's Response: Haha, Thanks for the review :)! The next chapter is getting fixed by my beta and will be up as soon as she sends it over to me. I love drama and for some reason I always write fics where the character has to choose between two guys. I don't know. I like the angsty feelings! Waaay easier to write!

~Brooke

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Awesome! Just plain AWESOME!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! :)

~Brooke

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really god.. and i dont usually like trio fanfics

Author's Response: I feel the same way about trio fanfics! Thanks for the review and I hope I change your mind about them!

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Very interesting plot line. I like it though. Secretly I've always hated Ginny, glad to see she's a bitch in this. Keep on keeping on. I'll keep an eye on this story.

(This has been an Infamous K Izzle Production)

Author's Response: I've never liked Ginny either and that probably shows A LOT in the plot! Thanks for reading!

~Brooke

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This was a very interesting start to the story, seemed like a whole lot happened in this chapter for me to possibly break it down in a review so I'm just going to sum it up by saying that this chapter was excellent and I'm definitely looking forward to where you go from here with this story. I hope you can update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the complements as well! :) Finally finished writing the end of the second chapter and I hope to finally getting around to send to my beta... tomorrow-ish. Hope to be up soon!

~Brooke

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