I was a little apprehensive about this story at first, but then the breakfast scene had me. Great job! Great idea!Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you kept reading this story, I wrote this one quickly for a challenge and was a bit unsure of it. Thank you so much for the review and for reading xxx Report Review
I really liked this! It caught my eye, for some reason! Anyway, it was very refreshing to read something like this. Most people write the Marauders as being the coolest people in school, so it was interesting to see otherwise- I mean, people looking back would have rose-tinted glasses wouldnt they? And in all honesty- One is really shabby and dissapears every full moon and constantly looks ill, one of them, people think is going to end up a Death-Eater because his entire family are, and the other is Peter Pettigrew! So I totally understand where you're coming from in this fic.
I thought it was really cute, but found it strange because my dad is called Dale! I liked how James swaggered at the beginning, and how when he smiled at the girls they ran away! I'd like to think that they became a little cooler as the years passed however.
Yeah, I liked this, it was refreshing to read a Marauders fic that didnt make them all Uber-cool. :)
Leanne (leannemariesnape, Hufflepuff)
Now, off to the pub! XDAuthor's Response: Yay! a review!!! Thank you so much for reviewing this story! I'm so glad that you liked it :-D I always imagined people being annoyed with the marauders after a while because of how they are, although I'm sure they become cooler over time :-D
Thank you so much for reviewing hun! I shall meet you at the pub! in our costumes to be vigilantes! :-D
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This was really good! Ugh, You just can't help but hate Dale straight away! I thought you did a great job on this and I loved how Sirius, Remus and Peter acted. I liked the bit where Dale threw the ball at James who just caught it no problem whereas Dale was probably thinking it was going to hit him.
I loved it all muchly!
9Author's Response: Haha I did hate Dale. Thank you for your kind words they mean a lot :-D I also liked the part where Dale and James were thowing the ball at each other.
I loved your review lots!
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Haha! I love that quote. Oh, I'm bamboomei, by the way, and this was my challenge =)
It was strange seeing the quote in that context. The actual scene it was in was charged with sexual tension; this is a very different side I didn't even consider! Not saying it's not a brilliant use of said quote, though. It was pretty spot on.
xEAuthor's Response: Hey (sorry for the late reply) I'm glad that you liked it. And I was thinking of using it like it's used in Skins but I suddenly got this idea into my head so used it :-D thanks for reading, your challenge was so much fun to do. x Report Review
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