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Review #1, by EeshaPotter Friendship

29th May 2015:
This is really good! It has a really good plot line, as well. Just a question, is there going to be any romance???

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Review #2, by (anon) Friendship

23rd May 2015:
pls update soon ;w;

(P.S. is james depressed (like, clinically)??)

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Review #3, by Kim Friendship

9th April 2015:
Please finish the story you cant do this to us please

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Review #4, by Yosnap Friendship

24th February 2015:

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Review #5, by RebekahPotter Friendship

5th November 2014:
This needs to be updated like yesterday... Please update!! This story is one of the best ones I've read!

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Review #6, by The_Crookshanks_Saga Friendship

17th October 2014:
Nenenenene I cannot speak coherently UPDATE AC UPDATE

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Review #7, by Forever_More Hypnosis.

1st October 2014:
Seriously great story , I started yesterday and read almost 15 chapters. I was most definitely hooked! Great job and I'm seriously just love the story. I really enjoy when James shows off his vulnerable and emotional side. I'm also dying for him and Cassie to get into a fight or something and just discover their hidden feelings for each other haha! My hopes to high?

Great job, keep it up.

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Review #8, by kyra Friendship

11th August 2014:
okay seriously is this ever going to be updated can you just let us know please, thanks.

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Review #9, by kyra Friendship

17th May 2014:
hey there, are you ever going to update this story just so i know if i should keep checking it

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Review #10, by kyra Friendship

20th March 2014:
okay it has been months, i love your story but please update i am begging you!

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Review #11, by Ali Friendship

14th January 2014:
Uh, hello? Update? Seriously. This is a good story. Either update or change the status to Abandoned. Cheers.

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Review #12, by Kyra Friendship

30th December 2013:
hey, im in love with your story just wondering when your next updating? its been months haha
okay thanks byee

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Review #13, by kayleefrank Walking pace.

28th December 2013:
I like it so far. James was a total jerk, but he seems better.

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Review #14, by SnatchtheSnitch3 Friendship

20th December 2013:
You should probably update before I go bonkers, lol.

PS-I love this story:D

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Review #15, by bananas_for_raspberries Friendship

14th November 2013:
Update soon please :)
I just want them to be best friends and find out what happened to her and then of corse fall in love

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Review #16, by Kyra Friendship

28th October 2013:
hello, i am loving your story so far it has an amazing plot to it. Do you have any idea when your next chapter is going to be updated? thanks x

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Review #17, by RJ Friendship

27th September 2013:
Hey there :) Usually I prefer completed fanfics, because I've had authors leaving the story in between for good, and it was really upsetting because WE NEVER GET TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! And when I stumbled upon yours story, I was just looking for good next gen fics and gosh yours is so amazing

Author's Response: Hey RJ! I'm really glad you decided to give this story a chance and I SWEAR I do not abandon stories lightly, especially ones I've been writing for such a long time. And I'm so glad you like it :)

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #18, by anon Friendship

21st September 2013: I was just readin curiosity once agn (readin fat textbuks=forgettin plots of awesome WIPs) & I just wanted to say tht d story is fantastic..m always checkin it constantly..I dnt care if u tk years to finish it..just pl dnt abandon it..I knw real life is a lot more...well, real :P
I hope this review helps u (altho I haven't really written anything helpful)..just wanted to let u knw tht thr is a definite hard core curiosity fan out thr who can't wait for d next chapter (altho I'm sure that thr r many others just like me)

Lots of luv!!

Author's Response: Hey there lovely Anon!

Yeah, that's actually my problem! All the fat text books make me forget exactly where I am plot wise, so I wind up rereading this a lot... but, well, thanks very much for the words of encouragement! I'm so glad you liked it and I'll be sure to start work on the next chapter soon :)

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #19, by Lily__Potter Friendship

18th September 2013:
Please write more. I love this.


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Review #20, by Holly_Mist Friendship

1st September 2013:
James and Cassie are friends! Yay! :D

I'm really glad Cassie stood up to her dad (sort of), he really needed to hear that!

I feel so bad for Leanne! :( She obviously didn't mean it but i guess she's going to have deal with the consequences of spilling her best friend's secret! D:

James's text was so sad! I wish Cassie had replied though! Ah, well.

I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: THEY'RE FRIENDS!!! Wait, is that... oh my gosh, did the plot actually move forward? GOSH. I need to sit down and rethink my life.

Yeaaah, Leanne messed up pretty bad... but, well, people do these things.

Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon
Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #21, by Ginny_bbbt Friendship

30th August 2013:
I've thought about it... Sadly realizing the awful updating rate (guilt guilt guilt), and wondered why I'm kept watchful for more chaps. The answer I got is that I like it too much so I'm only asking you to keep it in your prioritories for a bit longer (and then a bit more, and then a bit more. keep that up until it's done).

I really enjoyed reading this chap too!
And I know you might think I'm a bad person but I laughed so hard at James's late night message.
Now I wonder if since cassy is seventeen and legal she don't need the extra protection, and how is that connected. I'll just wait patiently until crissmass, though in your stories they never actually reach the date... Try sometimes to surprise the reader with something unsurprising!

Leanee's getting pushed away. For a good reason but... I don't like this, sure she wasn't the best friend and messed up. Sure she wasn't in the loop all along so she is far away, but even though she didn't unfreind her, the distance is more then a fight. It might be a girls thing but I know that losing a friend is much harder! (Trust me, they actually care - surprising huh?)

looking forwards for the next chap!

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Review #22, by kyra Friendship

29th August 2013:
hello, i am in love with this story. your writing is also amazing, when do you think you will be updating next?

Author's Response: Hi there Kyra! HOPEFULLY, the update should be fairly soon... but things are pretty busy over at AC HQ

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Review #23, by Loony_Scorpy Friendship

29th August 2013:
hiii i'm finally here again
god i love this story so much, still one of my favourites!
james' text :'(
so i wonder why cassie's dad has suddenly decided it's alright that everyone knows who she is...has the problem disappeared for now? actually no that'll be all my guesses for today because i always suck at that haha
i hope you get time to update soon! but i know you're very busy with all of your projects and things and all that but ahhh i need to know everything :P
loved ittt ♥

Author's Response: Hullo there my lovely!!!

Well, there's going to be more on Cassie's dad decision in the next chapter... but, well, we might not find out for another year given the rate I've been getting to this story. For which I am very guilty.

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #24, by Friendship

26th August 2013:
I really like your writing style. It is nicely paced, great character development and witty repartee dialogue. I like all your puns too.
However, I think you write so fast you get lost with grammar. Homophones like wear, ware and where. They sound alike but mean different things. Wear means to don clothing or to dull the edge of, as in wear down the knife or the witness's alibi. Ware means toward as in beware. And where is a space defining noun as in where is the dog? Wares is goods for use or sale, and wears is an action verb tense of wear. Queue is to stand in line and cue is used in theater direction or billards. Cheep is the sound of a bird. Cheap refers to cost or use of money.
There is also often a loss of noun/verb agreement. Though, I think that happens from editing and cut and paste issues. And I think auto text correction is the cause for most of these errors.
Sentence structure gives greater weight and comprehension to your plot and subplot arcs. Also your is possessive pronoun, you're is contraction for you are. I suspect you are a phonetic speller and reader.
I like how you do use multi story/sub plot arcs in your story telling. It gives greater depth to your works.

For this story - how do you complete the Ryan story arc? Mid story or finale? Can Leanne redeem herself?
Cassie needs to get her car and permission to go off campus with James and search out her old homes. Might be helpful.

Good luck and carry on. I look forward to this story being completed.

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Review #25, by Hope's Mom Friendship

15th August 2013:
This new, friendly James is a huge improvement over the old James. His answer about being sad is really, really upsetting. I'm not sure how Cassie managed to go back to sleep. Cassie's dad is now going to "talk" to her? I wonder why? Great update - thank you!

Author's Response: Yeah, poor James. Well, James is an interesting one all by himself... and I'm looking forward to really breaking down his character and doing more stuff with him. So, more on James soon!

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