Please finish asap. I'm not patient, please give me the story I know you can write.you have to finish faster. Please.

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Please finish. I want a major blow out between james and sirrah. I want her jealous when he spends time with leighton. I want her to admit in her anger that she liked the attention and I want a proper kiss.

Author's Response: Aww, I don't plan on quitting, but it probably will be a while before it's finished. Haha, I like that you want her jealous. Maybe I could work that in there somewhere. Thanks for telling me that, I like hearing what the readers want, even if the story is more controlled by Sirrah than it is by me. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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best story! i really hope sirrah lets her walls down soon and lets James in!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I hope she does, too.

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its something very different, & held my attention. keep writing, i cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait to write more! But it might be a while.

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hy again. i have read all chapters & cant wait 4 ur next update. I ship Rose & Scorpius but 4 some reason in this fic Im not that bothered with them. Please Please finish this fic soon.

Author's Response: Hello. Yay! That's exciting! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside when someone actually reads the entire story! I haven't written the next chapter yet but I do hope to update soon. I was never the biggest fan of Rose & Scorp but I do like them in this story, even though they appear very little compared to everyone else. But yeah. I hope you keep reading and thanks so much for the reviews!

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PLEASE 4 THE LOVE OF GOD & MY SANITY FINISH THIS STORY! I found it a few days ago but i have been thinking about a plot exactly like this for ages now. I LOVE THE STORY & FEEL 4 JAMES. Thanks. Sharah.

Author's Response: Haha, it'll probably be a while before its finished, but I will try. There's still so much left to write. I am glad you love it though, not sure how far you've gotten though so I won't say anything else. But I hope you keep reading! It's awesome when an old story picks up new readers.

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You updated!!! Happy Dance, happy dance happy dance- ah, I'm getting stares.
But let's get back to the chapter! Sweet Circie Sirrah is cruel... I'm quite glad she felt 'abandoned' but I hope James doesn't give up!
hmmm... Well, I guess that's up for you to decide.
Now please update the next chapter quicker.
toodles!

Author's Response: First review! Squee! lol.

I know. Sirrah's cruel. I don't know what it is. She came up with that idea, not me. Of course, I don't really know what happened in this chapter either, not what I planned, but oh well. There's more too come that Sirrah will regret, just you wait.

Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon! Probably not before the queue closure as said in the author's note, but hopefully I'll muster up the strength to write it and finish it during the closure.

And I'm so glad you're still reading and I hope to see you again! Until then.

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I've only read four chapters so far but this story is so good!xox

Author's Response: Well, thank you! I hope you keep reading!

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I really like this story, but I can't help but hate Sirens at the moment. I actually think my favorite character is Rose, however little I know her.
It would be nice to see a little more of Leighton, and get to know her.

Author's Response: Sirens? Did you mean Sirrah? Because unless you're referring to something I don't understand, I don't think this story even mentions a siren. But if you meant Sirrah, I can understand why you might hate her at the moment, you might hate her during most of the story to be awesome. I am glad you like Rose though, even though there hasn't been much of her at this point. And I'm glad you like Leighton and want to see more of her. It's hard to keep up with all the characters because it's mainly about Sirrah and there's so much going on, but I try to at least keep up with the two best friends. I do hope you keep reading though and that your reading experience gets better.

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Love this story! Love the couples and the vibe you give to each of the characters!! I randomly ship the headboy and girl together, this is so random but i definitely hoping for this couple...! Anyway, can't wait for the next chaps, plz update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you love the vibe and the characters. And it's awesome that you're hoping for the couple, even though it would be impossible for them to be headboy and girl together because they aren't in the same year, and I can't see either wanting the job, to be honest. I hope I can update soon, I don't really get to write much anymore and every time I try, I immediately forget that I should be trying to write... It's a pain. But hopefully I'll be able to get the next chapter out soon.

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it was an awesome chap. When will u post the next? I'll wait 4 it

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I honestly have no idea when the next chapter will be up, I haven't even started it, but hopefully it won't take several months like before.

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OMG!!! I LOVE your Sirrah and James story! Please write the next chapter ASAP?!?!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I'll try to get the next chapter up sooner than usual.

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Well. Next chap should be interesting.
poor Talon though.
Sirrah's plan does seem a bit too cruel
though she IS a Malfoy
i like the idea of Sirrah's dress business
quite original

Author's Response: I hope the next chapter is interesting, and that I haven't been building up to it this long just to fall flat on my face and fail. Her plan does seem cruel, but it turns out pretty interestingly enough, I think. I hope. But yes, she is a Malfoy. And she hates Potter. I'm glad you like the idea of her dress business! I don't get to go into it too much, because I just like fashion and clothes and don't have a clue how to sew but it was in the original idea so I am trying to make it work.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

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When will Leighton and Sirrah be friends again? oooh I'm desperate 4 it!

Author's Response: Aw, Leighton and Sirrah will always be friends. Just keep reading.

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I don't know how I feel about Sirrah.I mean,at first,she just seems like a bitch for going this far to hurt him but James won't even tell his friends about her so my sympathy for him sort of falters at that point.Update soon though please!:)

Author's Response: Hm... why does your sympathy falter? He has a right to be cautious considering how she's treated him in the past. Unless you preferred him blindly chasing her without any doubts holding him back. Maybe this fact then doesn't seem very James of him, and in turn makes him more like Sirrah.

Okay, /end psychotherapy session.

Thanks for reading! I hope I can get the next one up sooner than I have been.

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I'm glad that there's so less thought going on and more dialogue I now understand your character alot better. Love the story.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the review and I hope you keep reading!

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I've read both the first and this chapter. Your OC is very funny however...she thinks too much. Its all I hear about. I want more dialogue and a little less thought. Just a sugggestion.

Author's Response: Thanks, I am sorry you feel that way though. The dialogue will pick up though in the next chapters.

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I really don't think I could find anything about this story to fix or change, it's perfect. I really enjoyed reading it! Looks like I know what I'm doing for the next little while, I have 27 more chapters to read! Great story!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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(Swap!)

Heey! I had to pick this one since it's James/OC, the same I'm writing (: and I'm glad I did, because I really like this!

I liked your OC a lot, she seems very funny and such a great character, I really enjoyed reading her thoughts and all the witty comments.

The idea of this story seems very interesting, can't wait to see where you're taking this. And how you're planning on introducing James into this all.

I really liked the style you've chosen for this, the whole 'talking to the reader like they are there' thing, it's really nice when it's done well and I think you did a good job with it.

Keep up the good work, and thanks for the swap again! (:

~Elenia

Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you like it so far! And I am glad you like Sirrah and reading about her. The style is fun to write and I'm so happy you think I've done it well. Thanks so much for the review and hope you keep reading the story!

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Uh oh... This is just going to go horribly, I can feel it! :( I lovesy Jamesy so much, and I really don't want him to get hurty :( Sadsad. And I'm a littley hypery. Meeheeheey :D Ignore that bit.

Love this storyy (3 Update a little more often, yeah? ;)

Sorry, I didn't review earlier. Got a bit distracted by the shiny things. WHE SHIIINYYY...

(AKA SFCP... + I'm not ashamed to admit it :P)

Please updatey more!! I lovesy your story:) xx

Author's Response: Mwahahaha *evil laugh*. I can't tell you what's going to happen. But thanks so much for reviewing and for sticking with the story this far, it makes me SO SO HAPPY! I will try to update sooner.

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Scorpius just shook his head at me, “What would Father say if he heard about this?” when I read that I was like "like father like son" You know when Drafo is always like "Wait till my father hears about this."

Author's Response: Hahaha, I totally know what you mean. I don't think I was really thinking of that when I wrote it, but you're right, Scorp is a lot like Draco. Thank you so much for the reviews, I hope you keep reading!

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I'm starting to get shocked that you can always get a great chapter in. I really loved the whole fish breath thing

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the fish breath thing, I honestly thought it was sort of lame, even though it was kind of fun to write. Thank you so much for another review!

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SUPER MEGA FOXY AWESOME CHAPTER!! But what else could you expect from a SUPER MEGA FOXY AWESOME WRITER!! Lol so many favorite quotes that I will definately be using.

Author's Response: I LOVE your response to this one. Thank you so much, seriously, it does mean a lot to me.

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Great second chapter!! I would like to tel you all my favorite quotes but then I'd have to repost this story!! Okay cheesy and cliche I know but still, it's true.

Author's Response: Haha, well thank you for loving the story and for reviewing the chapter.

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LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! It's just the first chapter I read and I already love it! I really wish I had known of this story earlier!!!

Author's Response: Haha, aw. Thank you so much. I'm glad you love it because I love LOVE new readers.

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