A very good one shot. I like the way that you have Snape's guilt playing out in his head. 10/10.Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
This one-shot is simply poetic. I completely followed every emotion going through his mind. The picture was a dead give away to the time and I love to read that he is still thinking of her even after all those years. Great work.Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review - you made my day! :) Report Review
This is your first story??
It's so good. I love it.
Post more soon! :)Author's Response: Yeah, it is! Thanks very much :)
I am working on some other stories, so hopefully they'll be up soon!
Thanks again for the review :) Report Review
Great story, it made me really sad, great job! With the writing, I felt that I could feel Snape's pain and emotion.
Great job, you should create more stories!Author's Response: Ah, thanks very much!
I was nervous about posting this because I've never published any of my writing before so that really means a lot to me! :)
I'm working on a few other stories so keep an eye out! Report Review
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