Please finish this story! I love it so much, and I've been hoping you write more :) Report Review
Hi! I read this story a couple years ago, and I... Identified with it I guess. Anyways I just... This is going to sound weird but I just found out I have Synesthesia. I didn't know that feeling and seeing colors wasn't normal, so one day in speech class I said something about it and people got really confused. A couple days later I found out that I had it. I remembered this story and I went back to read it and... It was really comforting. So I wanted to thank you for writing this, because, as lame as it sounds, it's nice to know that other people like your friend and me exist haha. Please don't think I'm a poser or anything, that's definitely not my style.
10/10 and I hope you update this story again,
Clea Report Review
please please please update! Report Review
I. Need. More. I really, really hope you don't abandon this story, because I've read all of your fanfictions, and this is by far my favourite one. :) Keep going sweetie Report Review
WOW! this is the best story I've read in a while, and its killing me that you haven't updated this in ages. I love it so much I can't even express it in words. The ideas and the plot line are completely unique and unlike anything I've seen before. I'm seriously hoping and praying that you get over the writers block and get back to writing this story.
Loony xx :D Report Review
MORE PLEASE! Thanks...(: Report Review
"I feel like I can't remember why I'm dating Eva," he said unexpectedly.
"Maybe she confounded you," I guessed wisely.
"I mean - I like Eva. I really like Eva. She's beautiful," James said, sounding firm.
"Well, it really depends on the eye of the beholder - I personally think she's quite vile."
"And she's my girlfriend," he added.
"I'm truly very sorry for that."
BEST CONVERSATION EVER! Report Review
Okay. ERHMAHGEHRD THIS IS AWESOME.
Aurora is really realistic, and the fact that she has synesthesia makes her even more loveable than she already is. Jasmine and Eva? Blargh. Charlotte, James and Fred? Sigh... You've got an amazing characterisation here, and I'm rolling around in despair right now wondering why I haven't got your talent...
I hope you get past your writer's block and continue this story because I may or may not be stomping my foot at the computer as I review, asking for more. Then again, that's just a possibility.
&hearts Report Review
It's been months, but I still haven't given up on this story. If you think it's bad, at least wrote another chapter to convince me that you can't go anywhere with it. Honestly, I love your story. And I'll continue to check on its updates. Report Review
I really love your stories! The plots are always so nice. I'm not really good at writing reviews and all that, so yeah.
Anyway, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOMETHING.
ANYTHING. YOUR STORIES ARE THE FIRST THING I CHECK IN CASE THERE'S AN UPDATE OR SOMETHING.
Plus, reading your stories really beats doing my homework (like I'll be doing any if that any time soon) Report Review
Wow! I am actually in love with this story! What an original idea, I'm jelous I never thought of it first :)
I'm sure you hear this often but please carry on with this story! The characters you have created are fab & so believable so please, please, please let us find out what happens next!! Report Review
you are a gifted writer, you are talented funny and make my day by reading your stories! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I'm dying! (I am also insane)
My name is Sarah by the way Sarahxox on Hpff, I love you :) Report Review
I love this story! I have a slightly less vivid case of synesthesia (I mostly give numbers and letters personalities, not so much colors) so I can sort of relate.
Your characters always seem so real: They get real, big problems, not wimpy ones that aren't as believable. The hardships make them seem like someone I could relate too. That's my favorite part about your writing (And, that sucks in us readers so we just HAVE to know how they get out of that mess :)
Just a question: Who is the girl on the banner with the hat and the braid? I think she would work for one of my characters.
Thanks, and UPDATE SOON :) Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!
I'm already shipping James and aurora and char and Fred!!
it will work out great, I just know it. so anyway, as of reviews, THIS STORY IS GREAT. NUFF SAID. and Eva and Jasmine are bitches, this is an excellent story, I like how you put the chapter names as colors that aurora sees, I think Logan is an adorable name, James is smexy, I am IN LOVE with aurora and James's relationship, you are a really excellent author, and the synaesthesia is a very original (and not to mention brilliant idea)
now that that's said, KEEP WRITING.
and I feel like I should criticize or something to make it a real review, but there's really nothing to criticize so here I go:
um well I think that maybe you should meet more neighbors. And maybe tell more about how sometimes the synthesisa us hard to deal with and you should have aurora try harder to get char and Fred together. and let James help.
So I love your story. kaythanksbye Report Review
Are you nevveer going to update this story? Because especially after this chapter I'm desperate to know what happens :( I miss Aurora and Jamess (and even Eva a little bit...) xx Report Review
I know you haven't updated in a while, but I just had to tell you how much I love this story - as well as Deja Vu - and I think it's amazingly written and thought out - even though you say you haven't quite got your bearings yet.
I'm not really sure what to say to be honest, other than - don't give up! - this is too amazing to leave and I love to just read it, even though I've read it before, I just enjoy it that much.
Just had to let you know that :')
-Fallen x Report Review
Update soon please?!
I am ACTUALLY BEGGING you, to update super soon!!
I.C. Report Review
Ahh please get the next chapter up soon! I feel like I've waited years! I love the story though, Aurora is such a likable character, and her and James are so cute...although I'm predicting her heart being broken, from what we've got so far ;(. Yup, so everything is perfect except the wait between chapters...and that cyco cousin! Report Review
This story is so cool. Love the colors. And I like the James-Aurora-sort-of-awkward-but-not-quite interaction. And you can see the Eva-Aurora drama coming from miles. Write on, hun! Report Review
one word. UPDATE! Please! Report Review
This is greaaat, I love all the characters and the plot and everything, even if the whole 'go live with a random boy with a fake child in a house for 3 months to learn about Muggles' scenario is a little unlikely ;) I guess that makes it all the more entertaining though.
I wish I had synesthesia. It sounds amazing :)
Oh and I wish Aurora had more respect for Professor McG; she's such a bamf!
Hope inspiration strikes you soon :) *crosses fingers* Report Review
I'm reading this on my study leave (procrastination for the win!) and I really love it so please please please please please please times a million update soon! Report Review
UPDATE BEFORE I DIE!! Which will b in the following week.
but seriously. update Report Review
Please, please, please write more?! I love this story! Report Review
Thinking this lovely story is in need of some serious love :) Report Review
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