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Review #1, by Mlbuzz18 Just friends

17th July 2010:
Ookk, my dear.i feeel as if your chapters are tooo short...and quite bland i might add.there's nothing to captivate my hungry mind.i will say that you're not that bad of a writer i've seen worse...but liven your chapters up...make them longer.read some completed works that may help you give some ideas for writing...God knows that always helps me.also..i feel as if your original characters dont have enough emotions...AND draco and lin were going at it WAY to fast.thats just not typically realistic!

Author's Response: Oke, thanks, I know. It is only me first story and I had thought already about Draco/Lin... But it is written and read over a 1000 times, so it is hard to change. I do read a lot of other people's stuff.

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Review #2, by Maybe Someday A wonderful night falling apart

5th July 2010:
Heeheehee, love the story. :)
(But it's romance, & you know I'm not a big fan of romance. :3).
But, anyways, great job on your English, H. :)

Author's Response: Thank you...

I like your stories as well, I think...


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Review #3, by Leila A wonderful night falling apart

3rd July 2010:
well the story fints the title perfetly.
it is indeed a complicated love story.
lin with draco
lin with david
lin with blaise
david with ginny
harry with ginny
ron with hermione

i can wait to see how you make
the love between draco and hermione happen

keep on writing,
kisses
leila

Author's Response: Thank you, I will keep writing!

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Review #4, by Leila The other eyes

3rd July 2010:
it was a good chapter, but I dont see yet any connection between Draco and Hermione, and Draco id really mean to her, would she still like him if he treats her bad and call her names?
but still I like the characters that you brought
ggod work
and keep on writing.

Author's Response: Yeah, well the story isn't finished yet, is it...? ;)

Thank you!


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Review #5, by Me Again. ;D The Ball

22nd June 2010:
Yesh. It's me again. ;D
Heehee. (X, in case you still haven't figured it out. o_O).
Niiice. ^^
Heh heh. ^^

Author's Response: Oke, thanks for reviewing!

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Review #6, by Bloop The eyes

24th March 2010:
PWNsome story, XP.
Awesome. ;D

Author's Response: Hello Xue/Bloop,
thanks for your...weird... review!
Hope you'll join us.

-Xxx- SLG


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Review #7, by LunaGirl The eyes

22nd March 2010:
Interesting...very interesting...Can we have more description of Lin? I'd like to know what she looks like.
Great job so far,
LunaGirl

Author's Response: Thanks! I will tell some more about Lin in the next chapter.
This is my first story for HPFF.
I hope it will be very succesfull!

sweet_lovely_girl


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