I couldn't resist reading this when I saw it. Cho stories always interest me as I'm not really sure how I feel about her as a character and so I like to read stories that might sway me one way or another.
In this I felt so sorry for Cho. Even though she and Harry never worked it must be so so difficult for her to get through seeing them all over the castle together. You bring up so many good points too about her needed the extra time after Cedric dying and her feeling guilty etc.
The lyrics worked well within the story, they seemed really fitting. I think you definitely got Cho's pain through too!
Well done on a great song-fic!
Lauren :)Author's Response: I'm so glad that you read this story and reviewed :D I had never written a Cho story before, or even read one so it was a bit of a challenge for me.
Aww yeah I felt sorry for Cho as well, having to see Harry and Ginny together. And her thinking of missing Cedric :-(
I'm glad that you thought that the lyrics were fitting, to me it sounded like the perfect Cho song.
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Oh gosh. This is so heartbreaking.
But I loved it (:
Btw, this should be labeled Song-Fic :)
Great Writing :DAuthor's Response: We shall label it as a song fic now :-D thank you for your review. We're glad that you loved it. x Report Review
Hi there it's MissSpitfire, Estelle Black on here with the review from the challenge.
AWWW, that's not fair, I feel so sorry for Cho. *sniffles*
This was beautiful though I must say, I enjoyed reading it. very heart wrenching though.
I very much liked it, thank you for entering my challenge because I am so happy to have read this beautiful story which you have produced to one of my fav songs.
Estelle XOXAuthor's Response: hey, thanks for reviewing. The challenge was a lot of fun and I found it so enjoyable to write it. Thank you for saying that it was beautiful that has made my day :-D Thank you for letting me enter the challenge and thank you for reviewing.
Alicia and Anne xxx Report Review
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