ROLF! ADDS?
that's hilarious!
i like the start of the story..
i'll read on and see how things go..
interested,
fanna

Author's Response: Ha, thanks it was my first fanfiction ever, and my shit writing I was surprise how well it went. I am going to try my current work in progress this summer. Thank you for reading.

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LMFAO
oh my god YES!
i love this..please update relly fast :D

Author's Response: Ha. Thanks, but it is completed, so there are no more updates. You can catch up on Florence and Sirius life in my other fiction "Fear"
Thank you for the reveiw. I am glad you liked it! Please keep them coming. :))

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NO! Don't stop it there!!!
I love it btw and Florence is just a awesome charater :)

Author's Response: haha I already did. Infact I incorperated Florence into my other story called "Fear."
But Here was what was going to be going down in PART 2: Florence gets with Andrew, and they live in bliss until he decides he wants to fight.
Part 3: happens when florence is back for her 7th year of hogwarts, and she has a to pick between Sirius and Andrew. Andrew dies leaving Florence heartbroken, but then Sirius is there to pick her off the ground.
AND the end.
But I did not have the heart to write both part 2 and 3. I just wasn't feeling it. So. I incorperated in with "Fear". You should really check that story out. Its focus manly on Ophelia Lark who is the main character, but Sirius and Rence are in there.

Thank you for review this story, I am glad you liked it. Maybe someday I will write part 2 and 3 but for now, no. I am sorry, but I hope you read "Fear" I like that one better then this one.

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Wow. What was Sirius going to say? The chapter was excellent. I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: We will see in Part 2. Crazy stuff goes down in that part. I hope you read it. I am almost done writing all of it and then it will be up in a couple of weeks. Thank you for all the reviews, I seriously wouldnt have gone if I didn't get any. Thank you for being a loyal reader, no a royal loyal reader. Hee hee. Thank you once again. I probably could say it a hundred times and I still probably could express how thankful I am for all my reviewers.

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Haha! I loved it. The ending and the 'groovy' man haha, I really love your writing and it's getting better all the time! Please update soon! It's a great chapter! I really loved the ending.
10/10
Great writing!
Natalie

Author's Response: PART 1 is over! I am actually almost done writing Part 2, I just have 1 1/2 chapters to go. Thank you so much. I super excited to see what you think. It might be a couple of weeks before the first chapter is up, or more school is coming to close. Thank you so much once again. Without your reviews, I probably woundn't have gone on. Thank you thank you thank you!

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Wow. Poor Florence. The chapter was excellent. I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to make long just for you. The last chapter is really short but its setting up for part 2. I hope you read it.

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I loved this chapter, and I love how you update so quickly! I am dying to know what is going to happen between Sirius and Florence! Update soon, please?

Author's Response: Thank you so much and I will the chapter is already written I just need to type it out and submit it. I am already wrote two chapters for part 2 I am excited.

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i luv the bit with all the different letters. yay to the fact james and lily are going out

by the way us brits do say merry christmas a lot more than happy christmas

Author's Response: Really haha, everyone in America think all you guys say Happy Christmas. Well aren't I stereotyping a little bit. Thank you so much for reviewing again. It means a lot to me. I hope you keep reading.

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Whoa... I'm a quite speechless my friend, and that's a remarkable task within itself. I really must require that you update extremely fast. It was a wonderful chapter that has left me, unsure of what to say other than, 110 percent of awesomeness.
10/10
110 and percent, always.
Natalie

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much. I felt like I did good job on this chapter, I mean right aftewards I thought to myself "I think I am becoming a better writer because of this." Not like in a egostical way but in a good way. Thank you so much and the next chapter already has been written.

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It was an interesting chapter, and, no offense it was a bit slow but I liked the spin at the end of chapter. It was really good. To be honest, the first part of the chapter was slow but i think it marjorly picked up at the end here. Great job and i'm interested to see what will happen next!
10/10
Good work mate.
Natalie

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I knew it was, but I thought that I had to throw in some stuff. I am excited to say that I have finished with this story and already on Chapter 2 of the Part 2 of this whole saga thing.

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Wow. Hmm. The chapter was excellent. I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you Loyal reviewer. I almost but royal reviewer, though you probably woundn't mind.

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this is a really great start

ps. the horse and his boy is the third one in the seires

Author's Response: It is actually the second one. C.S. Lewis did not publish the magician Nephew until after he published The last Battle. Therefore making the horse and his boy the second in the series. I am aware that now a days in the box sets its The magician Nephew first then all the other books after that. I was just going in order in how they were published orginally. So in some ways you are right. :D We are both right. :D I love The Chronicles Of Narnia. First favorite series.

Thank you for reviewing and that means a lot that you gave me a heads up on things. I like constructive critisim. Please keep on reading. :D

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I'm glad Sirius was there to save her! I really enjoy this story and i cannot wait to see what happens next! Great work!
10/10
Natalie

Author's Response: He's always there. He still is a shitty friend. Chapter 10 is done and ready to type up. Thank you for reviewing and keeping up with this story.

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Cute! I think it was a little too fast paced though. The chapter was great. I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't know what you mean about fast pace but I will try to slow it down.

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I love this story! The chapters are fantastic. I can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And there will be. I am typing up chapter 8 and then I am rewriting chapter nine to be chapter ten and putting in an extra chapter. I think there will be 12 chapters in all of this story. Then there will be a second installment, then I third, and maybe even a fourth.

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How that's the best ending for this chapter! And I like how you put my name in th chapter thingy. Thanks for that. I really do enjoy your story, it's a lot of fun to read. I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. Good stuff.
10/10
Great Chapter, kido.
Natalie

Author's Response: Thank You and Your Welcome. I wanted to let you know I was thankful for you returning anbd reviewing. It helps me know that my story is good enough to go on.

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Wow... That was a really good chapter. I like the Sirius and Flo stuff. It's amazing so far! I really am enjoying this story and you're writing style is easy to read and a lot of fun. Please keep writing. It's really good.
10/10
Natalie

Author's Response: Thank you. Sirius and Florence need to work out their difference. I got an idea at where my story is headed and hopefully it will have a great ending. After this one I have an idea for another.

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Whoa! Wow. I really liked this chapter and i'm interested to see where you take it in these next few chapter. I like the Sirius and Florance stuff so far. Great work!
10/10
Natalie

Author's Response: thank you. Right now I trying to build up there relationship. I am going throw in some james/lily and Remus/other later in the story. Thank you for coming back and reading my stories. it means a lot.

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Whoa! That chapter was truly amazing! I loved it! Really great chpater!
10/10
I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Natalie

Author's Response: Thank You! Chapter 5 is written in the middle of chapter 6 right now.

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Whoa... That was really good. I really liked that chapter. It's my favortie so far. I cannot wait for you to update!
10/10
Wonderfully, wonderful, dearie.
Natalie

Author's Response: Thank you. The fourth chapter is validating as we speak, and I am in the middle of writing chapter 5 right now.

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Aww poor Florence. Her day just got worse and worse. Please update soon! This is really good!

Author's Response: Thank You. We will see what happens next.

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I like this story, I hope you have alot more to come.-MaggieP

Author's Response: I finally know where I am going to take this story. I think it will be an okay, story. I don't really know because this is my first fanfiction.

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It was good! It was a fun read and i am seriously interested to see where you take this story. The start was amazing! Really great job doll. Please update soon.
Natalie

Author's Response: Thank You! Chapter 3 has been fully typed and I have written chapter 4 and in the middle of chapter 5.

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I really like this! It's a good start! Please update ASAP!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your response is really important to me. Please fill free to give any constructive criticism. I will be greatful for it. Right now Chapter two is validating, Chapter three is half-typed and Chapter four is half-written.

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