OH MY GOD!!!

I Love you right now, it's been like forever since this was updated. YAY!

"When she spotted Sirius, her chubby arms reached up" - Emma is totally adorable and I love her so much. Sirius is such a great despite that he thinks he's doing a rubbish job.

Emma's one - oh my god I can't believe it, she's such a cutie.
I'm so happy for them, Sirius you are brilliant and I'm so glad Melora said yes.

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

P.s Four more chapter :( I'll be really sad to see this end.

Author's Response: Thanks!! I know, I actually had it finished a while ago, but HPFF was on holiday and then I forgot to upload it when they came back because I suck :p Anyway I'm glad you liked it so much! Hope the last couple chapters are worth it!

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omgomgomg ghjvfuijkycvjg; I LOVE YOUR STORY!I waited until I read it all before commenting. I hope you contiue thed story even though it's been awhile for u
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10/10

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Thanks!! haha

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This story is great! I love it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry I take so long between updates :p Real life sucks

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ok I LOVE you right now for updating!
I love Sirius and Melora and little Emma is adorable.

10/10
-Potterfan310

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it :)

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This has been a really enjoyable story. Can't wait for those last two chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think there will be a few more than two chapters, but I promise it will be worth it!

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Hi there!

This is a great first chapter and I am already in love with this story. Sirius is such a guy and I love how he can't remember a name. I don't even think that he would have remembered sober. I also really liked your OC. She was fun and relatable. I am intrigued to see what turns up between her and Sirius and to learn more about her.

The descriptions that you provided were awesome and I could totally invision what it is that you were telling. I really really loved the part where they are arguing with the suit of armor. I laughed. =) I thought that the story flowed well and had a balanced pace.

Keep up the awesome writing! I am adding this to my favorites!!

-SR17

Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm thrilled you liked it and hope the rest of the story is as good as the first chapter for you!

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great chapter! although, im a little confused as to how old Emily is because of the time jump... can't wait for more order action!

Author's Response: Thanks! This chapter takes place just after they left Hogwarts, so Emily is about one-two months old.

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Wow I lovelovelovelove this! I can't wait for the rest! By the way, could you maybe pop over to my story, Another Side? I'd much appreciate it :)
Anyways, I thought you should know I adore this story. AND Emma/Emily Black sounds amazing and so does Melora Black. It's brilliant.
-Anne

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'd love to read your story!

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Wow, this is getting so intense! I'm scared for Sirius. :/ And for Melora and Emma. I've got a bad feeling that this isn't going to end well.

But on a side note, yay! James and Lily are engaged! :D

Haha, can't wait until your next update!

Author's Response: Yeah, unfortunately for the gang, things are just going to get more difficult. But they do still have the wedding to look forward to! Haha, thanks for the review!

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yay,yay,yay :) it's been updated :D
I love it and could James be any more cuter, asking Lily to marry him aw.
I love it 10/10
-potterfan310

Author's Response: Hahaha sorry for taking so long! The James/Lily proposal was my favorite part of the chapter :)

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Please update! I love this story and you're an excellent writer!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'll try to update soon

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aww...
the scene was awesome!
no fake lovey dovey i-need-sirius and he's-making-things-easier crap. no siree.
proper scene with all the snapping and crankiness...
i loved it!
and i was so relieved that everything was alright with emily..
i was terribly afraid that you'd do a tragic and have melora get a miscarrige.
but everything was fine.. thank merlin.
can't wait to read more. and don't you even think about a break after all the time it took for this chapter to come, missy.
open up microsoft word and get typing or i'll avada kedavra you.
laughing loyally,
fanna

Author's Response: Haha, nope I don't think giving birth is a particularly pleasant experience, so I certainly didn't want to portray it as one lol.
And oh my god, if I wrote this entire story just to end it in a miscarriage, I'd feel like it was such a waste of time.
Sorry for the break, school's just more important right now, but I swear I'll be back soon!

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yay :D the baby's here, i can just see sirius and james in the middle of hogmeade,(trust them) before rushing back to the hospital
i love this story and i will be sad when it's over :(, your a really good writer and the characters all have their unique personalitites
-potterfan310

Author's Response: Haha, yeah they don't have the best timing...And aw thanks so much! I'll be sad when it's over too.

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y ipeee the babys born!!! yayayayayayayayayayay!

Author's Response: hahaha, I'm glad you liked it!

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This is one of my favourite stories and I've followed it from the beginning (or close to) and I'm really sad that it's nearly over. I thought it was typical of Sirius and James to be in Honeydukes while the baby was being born :) I think that the story is written amazingly and the canon characters are written perfectly and your characters slot right in with them. Like I said, I will be sad when this story stops coming up on my updated favourite stories feed :)

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! That means a lot to me :)

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How funny that she would go into labor in the middle of her last exam. I hope that Sirius will be able to make it to St. Mungos in time for the birth. Great chapter, I hope that you don't leave us hanging for too long.

Author's Response: Haha, I know, poor Melora. Sirius will be there in the end, but it might take him a while to get there...
Thanks for your review! The next chapter should be up soon

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omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

Author's Response: Hahaha, I hope those are good omgs!

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Oh good grief. I've been waiting and waiting and then you leave me hanging like this?! Another great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one! Thanks for posting :)

Author's Response: Haha, sorry! I try to keep the cliffhangers to a minimum but this one was too good to resist.

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asdhhucycujphbiggxlgc! CLIFFHANGER! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO?!?

Author's Response: lol sorrryyy :)

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oooh! what a steep cliffy you have their.. so what?
is it premature or just a fake alarm?
i hope everything goes well!
and i hope pads takes well to all this..
sincerely hoping that mel is gonna be alright,
fanna

Author's Response: It's not a false alarm, I can tell you that! But for everything else, you'll just have to wait ;)

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ohmygosh! ohmygosh! ohmygosh! ohmygosh!

Author's Response: haha I love getting these sort of reviews. Thanks!

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I can't believe you hate this chapter!! It's AWESOME!!! I's both serious and embarrassing at the same time, which makes me wanna read it moore!! You're really good, ya know.
XX Charlotte

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it!!

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dun dun dun... ahh what a cliffie, i cant wait for the next one :)
10/10
-potterfan310

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and update asap

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I LOVE this story! Please add a new chapter soon

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try and update asap

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oooh! they are officially joining the order of the pheonix!
ohhh... this is getting me worked up for some action (uh.. i didn't mean for it to come out in a bad way.. ;D)
i can't wait to read the next chapter... will pads tell mel? howz she gonna react? will this going-slow thing work out? i hope it does! update soon!
loyally,
fanna

Author's Response: I feel so bad because I want to answer your questions, but at the same time I can't ruin the story. So you'll just have to wait and see ;)

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