This is really beautiful, the way you use the lyrics to explore their relationship in a way that isn't cliche but entirely classical. Your formatting confuses me a bit, and I almost stopped reading because of it--but I'm glad I didn't. I love how this is short and sweet yet able to present the best of the english language.
Lovely job! (:Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the story. :) Report Review
I already read this, so i kind of just skimmed it. :) But i am your first review! How cool? haha, this really was a fabulous story, your fabulous. :)
Luv you, Gael.Author's Response: I luv you too, Louise. Thanks for the review, so far you are the only one. :( Report Review
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