OMG I love your story ! It is just perfect please please update and this may be abandoned but I hope with my whole heart it is not because it is amazing and I love it please update and give the story some love !

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hey this is super good. I really want Albus and Charlee to get back together :)

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So, now, I'm confused... did you srsly put yourself in to this story?

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I have enjoyed reading your story. It is an interesting twist and different than other Rose/Scorpius stories I have read and it's been fun to see how things develop. But I have to admit that I don't particularly like Charlee that much and I think that it is a little overdone to have every guy be in love with her to some degree as she doesn't really seem that great. I don't really respect her or Scorpius' decision to keep their past a secret. It just makes them selfish and disloyal and like they care about themselves and each other more than Rose or Albus. Secrets affect relationships and keeping their past romance a secret makes it seem like they aren't really ready to let go of each other and are being totally unfair and disloyal to Rose and Albus, especially since they still like to have their secret hangout days. I have to say that I side with Rose the most in all of this since she was the one who was used and cheated on, and if Charlee actually cared about her she would have warned her about what Scorpius was doing and how he didn't really care about her at first. I think that Scorpius and Charlee need to do a lot to prove that they are trustworthy as both friends and significant others and hope that they recognize how selfish they've been. I hope you continue this story as I would love to see how things progress.

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I love this story it's really good although you havn't updated since last year but still it's really good you should keep writing xX

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I love this story! Its really exciting, and I never know what's gonna happen next. I don't even know who i'm voting for charlie to end up with, there is too many options! Anyway, getting a bit off topic, lol, but i can't wait to read the rest posted!
oh and p.s.
when rose is talking to charlie during quiddich, she said Al hasn't seen the quaffle, when it should have been Al hasn't seen the snitch.


“Al hasn't seen the Quaffle yet.” Rose murmured, since Slytherin chasers were zooming around them.

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Okay finally reviewing! I feel awful for taking so long! I've had finals in school and I just haven't had anytime. Plus I now have a review thread on the forums, so anytime I do have I spend on that. Or writing, which I havne't been doing enough of either!

Rant over. On to the acutal chapter;

So I love that Charlee was helping Teddy over his nerves. She sucked up the fact that she didn't care for vic because she knew that was what was best for teddy. And then she helped vic get over her nerves as well! That made me smile :D Without charlee the wedding would have fallen apart it seems! haha

Now we just need Albus is forgive Charlee! I mean I know she should have told him, but common al, you love her for crying out loud! haha

Update soon! I want to know what happens (:
100/10 as usual

Author's Response: And I am finally responding, a month later :L I feel awful for taking so long to reply xD I've had homework and all that shiz - AND i'm moving house in a few weeks time, AND my internet is down - which means that i cannot update at the moment /: but i will as soon as i can.

Yeah (: I gthink Teddy is more like an older brother to Charlee now, in a way. And she is like his little sis. I know I said to someone before that their relationship was like mine and my best guy mates'. But now I think it's more like mine and my friends - he's like an older brother to me, and I trust him with everything. So I think their relationship has shifted slightly from friends who could be in love, to friends who love each other like family (:

I think everyone wants Albus and Charlee to make up xD I know I do. But we'll have to see what happens :L

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oh gosh, dont they know truth or dare is never the answer to boredom?
after this i kinda wanted them to get strippers or something, instead of this!
really good,cant wait for the wedding!

Author's Response: Nope xD They don't seem to have grasped that fact yet :P
Yeah xD I think everyone wanted any alternative than this xD

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AGH!!! Im so nervous!
will Victiore make it? 0_o who knows
i really love this story, it seems like it keeps getting better with every chapter!
i really hope Albus and Charlee make up, and the rest of the family too, but mostly Albus and Charlee
10/10

Author's Response: I know! I've only just realised it is a bit of a cliffhanger D: I will write more next week!
Awwh :) I'm glad you think so ^^

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Ahhh!! Did you have to end it there? lol. I guess it could have been worse. I do hope she and Al gets to talk...He owes her that. More soon please!

Author's Response: Yup xD I thought it was a reasonable place to finish (: and I shall continue writing the next chapter soon - I've given it a break since I'm quite busy atm :/

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naw!!! how sweet :)
loved the chapter, and loved how everyone came together to give her a surprise party.
xxGW

Author's Response: Yeaaah xD I do believe this is the sweetest chapter I've got...I think xD
I'm glad you liked it (:

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good chapter:) i liked how you brought teddy into it.
but what made her come out of the coma?? i really hope it wasnt scorp or james or someone else. i really hope it was because of albus!
ps: YAY! charlee is awake XD
xxGW

Author's Response: Yeah (: There wasn't enough of Teddy xD
It was Albus (: Because on Valentines Day, he annonymously sent her a ring - and he only admitted it now.

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massive cliffhanfer!
good chapter but my review is short cos i wanna read the next chap :P
xxGW

Author's Response: xD I know! People are gonna start hitting me each time I do a cliffhanger xD

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oh my gosh! make out sesh to the max! hahaha
cant wait to find out who called his name :P
xx GW

Author's Response: Indeed :L I just thought everyone would like it, if I'm being honest. I mean, since everyone's wanted them together since, like, chapter 2 xD

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WO! yay! they are finally together!! ^_^
loved this chapter :D
XXGW

Author's Response: Heheh xD They areee ^^

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loveed that everything is going to be pink :D
i have a feeling that they might be told about the secret passage way between hog;s head and hogworts...
XXGW

Author's Response: Yeah? :L I thought it was a nice touch, since it kinda muses me when Victoire gets annoyed xD
Oooh...I didn't think of that, actually :P

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r! James is such a jerk!
i hope albus and charlee's relationship will stay strong when he finds out that she dated scorp..
all in all, good chapter :) i liked it
xxGW

Author's Response: Indeed :/
You'll have to read on to find out more (:

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you did the right thing!! :D
getting it all out in the open was good :) if you dragged it out any longer the story could have become boring :(
i love how scorpius has grown up and become good friends with charlee :D
now albus and charlee can be together :D but will he get angry with her for not telling him?
keep up the good work.
this is one of my favorite stories :D
xxGW

Author's Response: Awesome ^^ I'm glad you think so (: Some people say it was good that I stopped it there - but others wanted me to make it longer.
Yeah - I just didn't want everyone hating Scorp :/ Since I think he is quite a nice character, in some ways.

Awwh! I'm glad you like it so much (:

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r he is such a prick!
BUT now this means that albus and charlee can get together!!! :D woo !
XX GW

Author's Response: He is indeed :/ But some guys are unfortunately like that :/
It does...but will they? :P

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r melissa is so annoying!
hm what is the secret that everyone knows except for charlee?? i really wanna know! i think that it is that albus is in love with charlee.. but mot sure :P
xxGW

Author's Response: She is indeed :/ I want to hit her, tbh. It disgusts me that I created her xD
You'll have to read on to find out :P

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Author's Response: ? Review didn't come through? :P But don't worry - I get that >.

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oh my goodness... so may story lines to follow :P... it seems that charlee has just about every boy wrapped around her finger!
the chap wasnt bad :) it was insightful :D
xxGW

Author's Response: I know >.< So many guys, so many girls, so many different stories; it confuses me xD
She does - guys just seem to be attracted to her :P

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YAY! charlee is with james :D
i really hope he doesnt screw this up!... and what will happen to scorp??
very everntful chapter xD
xxGW

Author's Response: Yup (: She is indeedy. Aha - what will happen to Scorp is the big question :P

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o! someone's jealous :P
i love it how you have made her part of the family.
And best friends with teddy, love the tension between charlee and victoire :D
xxGW

Author's Response: Someone is, indeed, jealous ;)
Yeah - it's like how Harry was to the Weasley family (:
Yeah - Teddy and Charlee's friendship is based on a friendship I have with one of my male friends (:

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dah dah dah! the plot thickens :P
LOVED this chap.but i feel really sorry for charlee and rose.. what will rose say when she finds out? will there friendship last?? hate scorp for playing them round!
anddd. james potter :D i hope something happens there:D
well have to read on.
xxGW

Author's Response: It does indeed (:
I'm glad you loved this chapter :D I know - I hated doing that to both of them, honestly :/ Yup - Scorp is a bit of a jerk, tbh.
Aha - James Potter ;)

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