i really loike this story and cant wait for the next chapter!!!
keep up the good work (:
-- JLLshinystar xx Report Review
goood chapter, it was quick, but still good. I could see the whole natalie/harry thing happen, but obviously she likes percy. I really like your writing style, but it can seem alittle rused at times. nevertheless, you did a wonderful job (: Report Review
I like this chapter and it seems like a lovely story. Just make sure that Natalie doesn't turn into a Mary Sue, becauses shes a brilliant character!
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I absolutely love this story and I hope you will continue with this story. I love Percy and itís really hard to come across a good fic with him as a main character. At points this story makes me laugh especially with the Ron and Hermione relationship as it is exactly how I envisioned it. Did Ron actually dress up as a sheep for Halloween? Report Review
i really like this story! but i don't usually dig percy stories, why'd you pick him as her love interest? isn't he kinda old? ahah i hope she ends up with harry! or someone idk, good story reguardlessAuthor's Response: thanks! i'm really not sure why i chose percy! i wanted it to be one of ron's brothers and he just seemed the least obvious...and he's sort of nerdy too!! i'm trying to get another chapter up...there's not TOO too much left that i want to happen but school is consuming my life...i hope you do read it when it's finally up though! Report Review
I really like it, I hope you keep going with it Report Review
I like it, it's really different Report Review
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