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128 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LeT11 Revelation

10th May 2013:
Is the father Tyler's dad?.

Author's Response: No! Promise!

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Review #2, by Alex Lust

24th January 2013:
I love how the lyrics at the end always fit so perfectly :) And it doesn't hurt that I know and love all of the songs that you picked. Keep up the amazing work :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Review #3, by Meg Confession

22nd January 2013:
Love this story. Who is Alix's dad??? Daddy Dearest is on my list for reading, please post it soon! :D Thanks!

Author's Response: Daddy Dearest is up, love. :) Thank you!

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Review #4, by Hannah Reunion

18th January 2013:
Uh HEM HEM! (True Umbridge style, I know). You MAJORLY messed up during the proposal. You called Alix her correct name in the beginning of it, and right when he ACTUALLY asked her to marry him, he called her Alixzandra MACKENZIE Granger!!! THATS NOT RIGHT! AND you had it right in the beginning a few sentences before with Alixzandra DRACO Granger!!! Please fix it. Thank you! :)

Author's Response: You know, you don't need to be rude. Mackenzie was her middle name when I first wrote it (6 years ago) and I changed it sometime during that. It's awesome that you're reading my story. That's great. I'm surprised you've made it this far into the first. But there's absolutely NO NEED to be rude. If you don't like the story, I suggest you don't continue reading it. I will change the things as you suggested, but there's a nicer way to approach criticism. A simple "Hey, her middle name was changing during this chapter. You may want to fix that" would have sufficed perfectly. Who are you to tell me (RUDELY) what to fix or do in MY story? Thanks for reading and reviewing, but please grow up a bit. Thanks. :)

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Review #5, by Hannah Recklessness

18th January 2013:
Tiffany isn't the original version of that song. It was originally done by Tommy James and the Shondells, and personally I like that version better.

Author's Response: I liked the Tiffany version better so that's why I put her name down for it. Personally.

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Review #6, by Luckygurl102 Confession

28th July 2012:
And I loved every minute of this! I am on to the sequel now!
I'm getting antsy for some Snape! :D

Author's Response: Lolol. I love Snape!

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Review #7, by Luckygurl102 Desolation

28th July 2012:
Okay, so I haven't stopped reading this from chapter one. I don't know how long I've been reading, but it's been chapter after chapter with only breaks for ice cream. (:
I really like this story. I feel like a fifteen year old girl again falling in love with her first guy.
And I love Draco, as I always do in these fics. I love it when he loves Hermione but she loves someone else.
There's this one story, I think it's called The Present, and it's phenomenal and yours reminds me of it with this Draco.
Anways, I'm going to the next chapter and I probably won't stop reading until I'm done with this and the sequels! :D

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I absolutely love that fanfiction and for you to say mine reminds me of that is an amazing compliment!

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Review #8, by Luckygurl102 Introduction

28th July 2012:
AH! I loved it. I'm so glad I found this. I adore Hermione/Snape fics and when I saw all yours I was super excited! Also, Just the Girl by the Click Five is like my favorite song!
And now I sound like a fan girl. Anyway, brilliantly done! I'll be on to the next chapter!

Author's Response: So glad I've got a new reader!! Glad you like it! And thanks so much for reading & reviewing!

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Review #9, by Kezza Perfection

4th February 2012:
Ew. Its not snape is it? *puke* i was thinking draco but if her father left then it wouldnt be him.

Author's Response: Sure is! He comes back in the sequel too.

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Review #10, by Kezza Acceptance

4th February 2012:
Uhm at the end of this chapter the song chorus says its by 'my chemical romance'? I thought it was by mariah carey or something?

Author's Response: Theres different versions.

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Review #11, by Jakumo1 Confession

11th December 2011:
AH! I can't wait to read the sequel! :-3

Author's Response: :) Hope you like it!

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Review #12, by Mrs Longbottom Confession

20th September 2011:
I read the whole story last night, unable to stop! I love it. You have some great writing skills! I had a feeling early on about who both the dads where, very interesting choice by the way :) I cant wait for my break in work today so I can read daddy dearest :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for all the compliments! Im glad you liked them. I was pretty sure Id dropped enough hints but I think youre the 2nd to say you knew before i said. lol. Glad you liked it and looking forward to your reviews for daddy dearest and baby boom!!

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Review #13, by Me Confession

14th September 2011:
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE...

Author's Response: And I love how enthusiastic you are!

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Review #14, by Me Desolation

13th September 2011:
Aw, I feel so bad for Draco. Especially since I know what happens in the later stories. I kind of wish that he got Hermione instead.

Author's Response: secret : me too sometimes :P

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Review #15, by Me Compromises

13th September 2011:
Also a good song! You have good taste in music my friend. I've liked all the songs so far, I just haven't bothered to comment on every single one.
Another AW moment!!! YAY!!!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!! :)

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Review #16, by Me Secrets

13th September 2011:
I don't know why I love this part, but I do. I really, truly do:

"It's going to hurt."
"I know."
"I'll go slow, I promise."
She opened her eyes, reaching a hand to my cheek. "I know that too. Go ahead Ty."

It's just a major 'AWWW!!!' moment for me.

Author's Response: :) Thanks! I always thought it was a cute thing too. :D

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Review #17, by Me Innocence

13th September 2011:
I love drama, it's so dramatic! (You should know what movie that's from!)

Author's Response: It sounded really familiar so I googled it. One of my favorite movies!!

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Review #18, by Me Love

13th September 2011:
ALSO a very good song! YAY FOR THIS STORY!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :) :)

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Review #19, by Me Devotion

13th September 2011:
First of all, very good song, and second I LOVE THIS STORY! I especially love the quote: ' "She's just like every other teenager in love, everywhere in the world: Old enough to know better, too young to give a damn." ' So very true.

Author's Response: Why thank you! Youre so full of compliments!!

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Review #20, by Me Control

13th September 2011:
Me likey! I am reading this story for the second time and still love it! Keep it up with The Baby Boom!

Author's Response: Thanks! Ill be updating soon!

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Review #21, by Jade Hermione Potter Desolation

10th August 2011:
reat story! but, are draco and alix friends or something more than that?

Author's Response: theyre like brother and sister. Not biologically, but theyre just really close. Never anything more :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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Review #22, by msKuhlena Revelation

22nd July 2011:
Stupid snape anyway!!

Author's Response: ? Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Review #23, by Sairahi Love

20th July 2011:
Cute story. I'm left wanting more dracmione. Nice work though

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #24, by Me Recklessness

25th June 2011:
AWWW! I loved that scene. He totally gets her!

Author's Response: :) Thanks a bunch!

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Review #25, by anonymous Perfection

8th May 2011:
I absolutely love this story! sorry I didn't review before - I couldn't stop reading but... as dumbledore is still alive ... could it be snape?

Author's Response: Youll have to read the sequel deary :D Thanks so much for reviewing. It doesnt matter that you didnt before, Im just happy you are now! :P The sequel to this one is called Daddy Dearest, and thats where youll find your answer. Hope you like!

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