{reviewid: 2735594, reviewer: 'StormStone'}
28th August 2012:
This. Is. So. Freaking. CUTE.
personally, my favorite part was when they were holding hands and "james' heart was beating very fast."
10/10
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{reviewid: 2601455, reviewer: 'Free_Rhapsody'}
13th October 2011:
That was so adorable, unimaginably so. I utterly loved it. Plus, I loved all the (not so subtle) digs at Peter. :)
Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 2557233, reviewer: 'Anon'}
30th July 2011:
Wow. Sorry, i don't think that quite conveyed it. WOW!!!
That's better.
That was AMAZING. I laughed until pumpkin juice came out of my nose, but it also felt real too, way more touching and engrossing than any of James/Lily stories I've read. It was just so...good!
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{reviewid: 2519085, reviewer: 'emerald_princess'}
9th May 2011:
Haha. It was cute. Loved it. :)
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{reviewid: 2498758, reviewer: 'happy_person'}
25th March 2011:
aww! that was a really cute story! most definately my one of my fave james and lily hook-ups :D i loved it very much, as well as ur writing..its very good :) 11/10!
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{reviewid: 2482051, reviewer: 'Juliet'}
18th February 2011:
this is really cute, and i love the format.
:)
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{reviewid: 2469343, reviewer: 'tripping%20over%20isolines'}
23rd January 2011:
makes me feel warm and happy :)
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{reviewid: 2447774, reviewer: 'Jillian%20Ryn'}
9th December 2010:
Fabulous. I love the writing style. Very unique and extremely well written.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)
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{reviewid: 2433379, reviewer: 'jane%20pinkerton'}
9th November 2010:
awe i really liked this! it was really cute with its play by play set up. i also like how you played remus's part, who always seems to know everything, and the little hints that James is also falling for Lily. Great job! :)
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2405333, reviewer: 'jacks_angel2007'}
29th August 2010:
I really enjoyed that. It was cute. Really cute. Sadly on my part. my favorite part was sirius's mayonaise mustache. it was just funny. But i really the story. It was differant but in a great way.
Author's Response: :) Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 2394980, reviewer: 'GryffindorGirl153'}
14th August 2010:
this was really cute. :) it really made me laugh. especially when lily wrote 'cock' on james' forehead.
Author's Response: Haha, glad you liked it. :)
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{reviewid: 2381697, reviewer: 'silver%20ink'}
19th July 2010:
AWWW that is honestly one of the cutest things I've ever read. I adore absolutely everything about it :D The way you wrote it, with present tense and all the little dashes, was so perfect. Okay, I'm going to make a list of things I adore about this:
- present tense
- split apart into small and quirky paragraphs by dashes
- characterization of James (He's so cute and when you described how he was shaking before his date with Lily. Aww my goodness it was so completely adorable :3)
- how the story takes place over a long period of time but remains short and sweet
- reminiscent of Weetzie Bat by Francesca Lia Block in writing style (have you read that? It's an awesome book!)
Basically, I adore a lot of things in this story and once again it is sooo sweet and cute and lovely :) I rarely give ratings but this is for sure a 10/10 :)
-silver ink
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I was nervous about this one, as it's quite unlike anything else I've ever written. But it just seemed to flow that way when I wrote it. No, I haven't read that book, but I'll look into it! Thank you for such a lovely review. :)
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{reviewid: 2375803, reviewer: 'Musicbox'}
9th July 2010:
I love absolutely everything about this fic. The simplicity of your descriptions is so perfect, as are the characterizations of the Marauders (and Lily, of course). One of the best J/L stories I've ever read :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2358471, reviewer: 'Insert_Witty_Comment_Here'}
8th June 2010:
Awww! THis was so amazingly cute and wonderful. I loved the way you set it out, like three-or-four line scenes, I thought that was really well done. And it was just fantastic!
Author's Response: :) Glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 2354129, reviewer: 'edenvirg'}
31st May 2010:
I couldn't stop squealing! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2330632, reviewer: 'hpfreak22'}
11th April 2010:
i absolutely love this story! the format is great, its fun to reread it every once and a while and it just makes me smile :)
Author's Response: I'm so pleased. :) It was great fun to write, so I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 2324711, reviewer: 'Tiny%20Dancer'}
3rd April 2010:
I love this story. So quirky and cute!
"She likes good spells and mashed potato and a Muggle band called Eclectic Lamp Orchestra."
Hahaha, this amused the hell out of me. I love ELO. :)
Author's Response: ELO are wonderful, congratulations on your good music taste. :) Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2321616, reviewer: 'Jellyman'}
28th March 2010:
NAWWW THAT WAS ADORABLE. I loved it, seriously, like I adore most of your work. The jumpy sort of style worked wonders and...excuse me while I melt XD
10/10
xx
Author's Response: Haha, hello. Glad you liked it! Thank you for your review, I'm always amazed you read my stories. :)
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{reviewid: 2309164, reviewer: 'lime%20flavoured%20bertie%20bott'}
5th March 2010:
super love. i laughed out loud at so many points, im sure even my cat thinks im crazy haha. well written, great point of view, great way to span a lot of time in a different way than all the other stories i've read--just all around awesome :)
Author's Response: Haha, glad you liked it! :) And thank you for a lovely review. Hope your cat isn't too confused.
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{reviewid: 2300690, reviewer: 'gremlin'}
18th February 2010:
That was brilliant! lol, really good job!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. :)
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{reviewid: 2291552, reviewer: 'harry_is_da_bomb'}
28th January 2010:
That was wonderful. I don't even know where to start. The way it was written, the tense or point of view or whatever it is you call it was really good. It worked so well and made everything so interesting. Your characters were amazing too. Very honest and believable. James was wonderfuly awkward and sweet. And the plot too... i can find no faults. It was really truly amazing.
Author's Response: :) Thank you! Of all the things I've written I think this is my favourite, so to hear you liked it is so great. Thanks for a lovely review.
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{reviewid: 2290007, reviewer: 'LOLhaily'}
25th January 2010:
this is so cute!! i luv how u did like a summary on how the becam the JAMES AND LILY!
Author's Response: :) Thanks.
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{reviewid: 2284720, reviewer: 'Pixileanin'}
15th January 2010:
Wow! Wow. Wow. Loved the minimalist style. It was perfect. It had everything! Great great great!
So loved this!
Author's Response: :) Thanks. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2277984, reviewer: 'Zuzu'}
3rd January 2010:
Remus is smug, because he knows something James hasn't realized yet, and also because he is upwind of Peter today. --- BRILLIANT :)
Author's Response: Haha, glad you enjoyed it. :)
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{reviewid: 2272335, reviewer: 'readerr'}
23rd December 2009:
Wow, this has got to be one of the best Lily/James fanfictions I've read (and believe me, that's a lot). I love the simplicity of the story and the progress both James and Lily show from rivalry to love. I congratulate you on a brilliant job well done.
Will you be making another in Lily's point of view?
Author's Response: :) Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I've been toying with writing something similar to this, perhaps from later in their life together. Whether or not it'll be from Lily's perspective, I haven't decided yet. But it'll be in the same style. Anyway. Thanks!
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