Please update soon! This is bloody brilliant. I am absolutely in love with this stout. The plot is very original and unique. Please update! (: Report Review
please make the new chapter soon Report Review
Please update, please please please! i love this story so much Report Review
aw amazing job that was so cute Report Review
I really love this story...I can't wait until you write more to the story...It was awesome Report Review
Got so excited when I saw this updated! Anyway, loved that chapter and the introduction of Jasone was very smooth and like him. And I can't WAIT to see how the interaction with Draco goes! :) x Report Review
Hello there! This is a very well written story, and I appreciate your writing skills since a lot of the stories on here aren't written as well as they could be, so thank you! I love the take on this Dramione! One suggestion is to make sure when they are talking, they stay in character. I noticed Harry and Ron are a little too bullyish and such to Hermione, even when she was Hermione Granger. Just keep that in mind! Other than that, great work, I'm excited for the rest and to see where it goes! :) Report Review
Omg I love your story it is the best Hermionie Zabini story ever that I have read and can't wait to read more! Report Review
I love your book so much please update i want to know if hermione n draco get together and how christmas goes. Report Review
really want to know what happens next!!! brilliant writing with everything but it just seems a bit soon with the wedding perhaps?? the way you wrote it was great but seems a bit of a shock to me about all of that :P xxx Report Review
wow I absolutely lovew this story!!! Report Review
i really like it so far! i cant really think of a better way to say it! Report Review
i need the next chapter. like, immeadiately. seriously. now. .now. aww, just hurry up and write! Report Review
Just so everyone knows, I am waiting on my beta for chapters 14 and 15 Report Review
This is amazing! you are trueluu brilliant! Please update soon :D Keep up the good work (Y) rating it 9/10 because it is not done yet, and if possible can you please update more consistantly? Thanks :DAuthor's Response: Sorry for the inconsistency. I get writer's block real bad. Plus I am planning my wedding, working, and going to school. It's a little rough over here, but I am trying :) Report Review
i have read what there is of this story countless times. and I only just realised that the journal entry at the beginning might not be talking about Draco! And now I'm freaking out! :) Report Review
please finish im only giving a 9/10 cause its not finished but this is my favorite stories so far u write like u are a real author u brought me into the story like it was real life please finish Report Review
u really r bloody brilant!! :)
i literally cried reading abt hermione's story poor girl had to go through so much :'/
that painting she has done is awesome!!!
i did love to beta ur story but i hve never been a beta before
update soon! :)
~apurvaAuthor's Response: you are so nice to me! email me at "jareth sara fae@ yahoo .com" (no spaces) with subject line "HPFF BETA" and we'll talk. plus, i can send you photos of her room - sorta and dresses and anything else you may want to see
I love your story! It is proubably one of the best I have had the pleasure of reading. I hope you wright mote soon!Author's Response: thank you for the compliment, reading these reviews always makes me smile Report Review
Nightmare Revisited! god i think i m still in tht nightmare.
i really hope this dream doesnt come true both her brothers are soo sweet n protective
~ApurvaaAuthor's Response: message me on aim if you have it. esaperanafae
i need you as a beta Report Review
well first off u are a AWESOME writer!! really! i just love ur work
WOW Masquerade ball didnt disappoint me at all it was bloody awesome loved every bit of it
to forget a ball which was to happen tomo well its hermione! she forgets everything wen she is into a book
Tht journal entry was nice!! of course i saw the hint u hve been droping it everynow and then but i liked the way u played it to confuse us yes ur editor is right u r cruel but i know hu she means!!! YAY!! :)
The dance was brillant and the idea to disguise was cool and the use of middle names so noone will recoganise them was superb!!
I think after Hermione turned a Zabini she and drama go hand in hand lol :)
i think her nightmare will return but her knight in shining armour will save her!!
Brandon and Blaise are talking abt what i hve been guessing from the beginning!
I really hope tht the golden trio reunite will they??
i was thinking that u forgot about the Parkinson twins but no! u just had to bing them in full on like tht. they deserved wht they got i hoped they will be expeled :(
Hermione is gonna marry Draco :):)
am i right???
~ApurvaaAuthor's Response: you are so far ahead of everyone my friend! let me know if you want to be a beta, im looking for one Report Review
To fly. well the way u described hermiones feeling and thoughts i felt as if i was the one who was flying n not her it felt soo real!
tht dream was awefull poor girl!
draco is sweet and awesome as ever. can wait to read abt the ball!!Author's Response: i love writing deeper feelings, i think it helps draw readers in, so to hear you say its working makes me feel awesome! Report Review
Nice chap!! :) and u did justice to the girls as well as the chapter title :)
I loved the way draco asked hermione out!!! she doubts whether or not having strong emotions for draco!!! ohhh pls tht girl is head over heeel for him i just think she is hving a hard time just excepting it yet
ginny's dialogue was awesome everyone but u two knew
i loved everyones dress
as for the relationship between the lioness and the dragon its going to turn pretty well!! with the prophecy saying it and all ;)
~ApurvaaAuthor's Response: i love how you dissect my chapters, it really helps and makes me feel awesome. Report Review
Please hurry i cannot wait!Author's Response: chapter 13 is done, chapter 14 is nearly finished- when should i post? :) Report Review
This is a great story !! Cant wait to read more :) Report Review
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