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Review #1, by hpfan? All In The Morning Betime *

3rd May 2013:
6 months .please update it has been to long,you cant end it like that.

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Review #2, by hpfan! All In The Morning Betime *

28th April 2013:
you said its nearly the end,but you're taking so long ,it has been 5 months.please update!im dying!

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Review #3, by Serendipity1234 All In The Morning Betime *

15th February 2013:
They are so sweet ❤❤ I love James and Stac because they're both so courageous and stubborn and loving. The whole wedding scene was an interesting sort of subplot too. I especially loved Ron's advice about marriage, which was pretty funny. I really want to know how/if Stac is going to get away from her family's control. Also, I was wondering...this may be far-fetched, but...there probably aren't many death eaters around anymore. It's been a long time and with Harry and Ron and them bringing them to justice it seems like thre wouldn't be very many. But Harry and Ron are very busy aurors...so is it possible they know something about Stac's family and their business? Maybe that's what they've been working on. And Harry didn't recognize Stac as a Sangraal because they didn't use her full name. Just a wild guess.
Anyway, I love this! Update soon!!

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Review #4, by Serendipity1234 Best of the Bad Days *

13th February 2013:
I'm loving the mystery of all of this! And the characters are wonderful -they're all flawed and complex and endearing and amiable. I like seeing them change. Even if James is being a bit childish...I love him anyway.
I still have a few chapters to go before I catch up, but right now what I'm hoping for (probably unrealistically, but this is just for fun) is some big, glorious revolution where all the nicer, cooler, younger wizards just band together against the evil older people messing their lives up. (Yeah, probably not going to happen, but I don't know, thought I'd share where my thoughts are at this point in the story) I was thinking this would involve a lot of espionage, maybe a little reuniting of the remainder of the order of the Phoenix and Dimbledore's army, and Anastacia befriending her guard. I really have hope for Creeten, you see (as unfortunate as his name may be...), because unlike his brother, he still has some...feelings. And independent thought. Sure, he seems to like to boss Anastacia around a bit, and he's probably mostly doing it because one of his goals in life is probably to rise to his father's position, br I think he must also care about Anastacia, at least a little bit. Everything he does is to protect her. He sacrifices his life for hers and is unfailingly loyal to her. He doesn't trust her as far as he can throw her and he doesn't seem to like her all that much, but he has reason for feeling that way -she's made his stupid job kind of difficult at times. The same goes for the rest of her guard. Maybe not all of them as I don't really know much about most of them but the Farlows seem cool. Regardless of whether there's an actual uprising coming (I mean I do sort to expect one in some capacity, but you never know) I think it would be smart of Anastacia to beforend her guard. It may seem like it's too late for that but you can always try again to connect with someone. People change over time, so maybe they would get on a little better now. But why would she want to be enemies with him? It only makes her situation worse. She might gain a little leeway here and there if he actually likes her and trusts her. Not to mention more loyalty to her rather than mostly her father.
So I see them all banding together and a crazy, big battle or an escape and just all the good people taking over and putting an end to the evil rule. Because that would be fantastic. Maybe the guard would join in because they have their own friends and want their own lives, I don't know.
I just hope Anastacia is brave and gets out. It's really cool how Duardo did that, though he might just get killed for it...regardless it was brave and noble (at least assuming Celeste's story was accurate). At the moment he's kind of the Fortinbras to Anastacia's Hamlet.
Another thing I don't really get -did Anastacia's father ever really care for her? Does he now? I'm not sure if I should think that he never really cared, or her used to care but it's faded over the years, or if he still cares but it's never been a very significant amount of caring (meaning it's a lower priority to his plans for world domination or whatever).
This is so fun to read.
Update soon!

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Review #5, by Serendipity1234 Density

12th February 2013:
Owen is really cool. I like your twist on amortentia too -how the smells aren't the actual scents of the actual people they love but smells that remind them of the people they love. And the flashback was adorable and I feel like I now understand a lot better why Anastacia's always let James take the blame.

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Review #6, by Serendipity1234 Fall At Your Feet

9th February 2013:
This is a really cool idea, but I kind of hate Anastacia. I mean that's not a very honest or loyal thing to do is it? Not really characteristic of a good friend. She shouldn't drag him down and make him take the blame and punishments...why does she do that? Does she not care about him very much?

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Review #7, by Sqveege All In The Morning Betime *

11th January 2013:
Lovely luvey chapter! I loved the bit with Ted, Harry and James in the attic, and what romantic gesture in the Great Hall. Can't wait for the next!

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Review #8, by a rollerball Sticks and Stones

12th October 2012:
update soon. pretty please.

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Review #9, by AKS Sticks and Stones

7th October 2012:
absolutely lovely chapter! I loved how clueless James was, typical! Please update soon this is by far my favourite story I have read, you are truly talented. Keep writing, I am always checking to see when you update!
-A

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Review #10, by Talia Sticks and Stones

6th October 2012:
So unbelievably glad you've updated - I'd all but lost hope and this is one of my all-time fav stories. Brilliant chapter, as always :)

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Review #11, by AKS21 Many Happy Returns *

17th September 2012:
Incredible story. I have been waiting for a very long time to find out what happens next but it was well worth the wait (but please don't make us wait that long again! haha)

Stac's birthday sounded magical and unique... i wish my birthday's were that special! Also, I love Stac and Jame's relationship

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Review #12, by Talia Many Happy Returns *

16th July 2012:
Loved it!! So glad you've updated, and it's such a cute chapter as well. Good work :)

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Review #13, by Hannah Many Happy Returns *

8th July 2012:
OMG I'm so excited this is back!I love it!I can't wait to read more,update soon please!:)

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Review #14, by Conflicted Density

24th April 2012:
I'm so upset it's taken this to get James to realize his feelings!I have no idea who to root for now.
Can I please have an Owen of my own though?That'd be nice.
Gotta keep reading!:)

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Review #15, by GerogeWeaseley Brave Heart

17th March 2012:
I sure hope its not abandoned. That would be a bummer. This was a decent story.

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Review #16, by Hpfan Brave Heart

16th March 2012:
Is this story abandoned?

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Review #17, by AKS21 Brave Heart

6th March 2012:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD THE NEXT CHAPTER. This is one of the best books I have read, truly!!! It is a crime not to post more chapters! Do you know when the next one will be up?

-AKS21

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Review #18, by g Brave Heart

26th February 2012:
Wow! That took a while, but it was worth it. I was wandering HPFF when I decided to check this story again and I was sooo happy! Cannot wait to see how this ends, this was one of the first fanfics I'd ever read.

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Review #19, by AKS21 Just An Ordinary Boy *

19th February 2012:
PLEASE SUBMIT THE NEXT CHAPTER (or five) I LOVE THIS STORY! do you know when the next chapter will be up? This is one of the best stories i have ever read...just sayin'

Also, i love the little parts of french, it is so nice because I speak french and I love how I can understand, what I would refer to more as the silent part of the text.

So...

S'il vous plait, s'il vous plait, s'il vous plait soumettre un autre chapitre bientot! J'aime (ou Jem ;) haha) cette histoire tellement et que vous etes l'ecrivain le plus incroyable

(desole les accents ne fonctionnent pas)

keeping writing!
-AKS21

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Review #20, by Stac+Jem Brave Heart

8th February 2012:
I absolutely adore your writing. For the past two years i've just been rereading harry potter over and over and over again and no matter what other books I try to read nothing is worth it. This is one of the best books that I have ever read aside from Harry Potter. J'adore (yes, i speak french and i love how you use different languages, I also speak german!). You are an amazing writer, you have a very powerful skill of completely capturing a character and situation so that the reader can paint a very vivid image in their mind. I have cried and laughed throughout the whole book. You should be so proud of yourself! I found this chapter particularly good. The rich description of the potion was very convincing. ah i just can't get enough of this story. PLease release the next chapter as soon as possible, i don't think i can survive for too long without. In regards to your muse, try Marchin' On (OneRepublic), pretty much any mumford & sons (i love them), bon over, ben howard, or ed sheeran. Good luck! When do you think the next chapter will be out?

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Review #21, by Ta!Fan Brave Heart

7th February 2012:
I need the next chapter! Please, please, please, please, please write it as soon as possible!

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Review #22, by AKSHPFF21 Partying Is Such Sweet Sorrow *

7th February 2012:
AMAZING CHAPTER! I adored it, I am completely addicted to this book. You are incredible

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Review #23, by HPFFFL21 A Family Reunion *

7th February 2012:
I absolutely adore your work. I feel you have really captured JK's voice and i'm completely addicted to your book!

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Review #24, by fairestofthemall Sacrificial Lamb

22nd November 2011:
hey there! i just started to read your story, which is quite excellent by the way, though i'd like point out that the insult-y thing 'dummer kopf' isn't actually correct german. you may wonder now, how i know that, but i happen to be german, so i can tell. 'dummkopf' would be a proper expression, maybe you want to change it. just saying.
however, i look forward to the rest of your story!

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Review #25, by Sqveege Brave Heart

26th October 2011:
Yay! I love how you've conveyed Stac's growth since starting to date James. She's all lit up and much stronger, and it's all right there in the writing. Nice job too coming up with a potion/process to rid herself of the bracelet; it was just gruesome enough to be believable. And yay, yay, yay! They're finally together. The fangirl in me went "Sque" when she ran through the door.
Now, I've read the chapter three times waiting for the next one. It's only been a week but I'm soo ready for the next chapter. Thanks for sticking with one of my favorite stories and sorry for not reviewing more!

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