Hope you write the next chapter soon, have been waiting to long for it, great story. One of my all time
favorite. Report Review
So,is it abandoned or not ? Report Review
its defininitely one of my favorite stories !
I read all the series and its great , the plot is really good and different from all the harry/oc and harry/ginny that I've read.
well, anyway , the story gets really interesting..poor Ginny.
I look forward to the next chapter , please update soon (:
-Loren Report Review
its too bad that this story is abandonedAuthor's Response: It's not abandoned, I've just had school and track and have had to put this on hold. i promise you it will be updated. Report Review
what happened to updating?! Report Review
this chapter is the best one , it was really, really interesting.
I liked it !
so don't keep us so curious and update soon :) Report Review
please update son (: Report Review
Please please update soon!Author's Response: I've had midterms at school, so I've had trouble finding time to get to updating, but now that they're over, I'll be able to get back to writing. Thank you so much for reviewing, it means the world to me! Report Review
It just keeps getting better and better!Author's Response: I knew you'd say that. Thanks for reading! Report Review
wow, great story , especially this chapter , I liked it !
update soon (:Author's Response: Thanks very much, I really worked hard on this chapter, I'm glad you noticed! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Wow Great Story :) Please Update!Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I'll try and get the next chapter up ASAP. Thanks for reading! Report Review
yay for happiness to come!!!Author's Response: !!! hurray !!! XD Hope you enjoy this fic as much as the last two in the series! Report Review
Yeah of course I did !!
great series , you are doing a great job.
I am so curious to know what is going to happen next.
update soon :)Author's Response: Alright I've been inspired...well, I already was inspired by another reviewer, but I've been re-inspired :) I'll try to get the next chapter submitted sometime before the week is out. Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
Ha ! he loves her !
I can't wait for the next chapter :)
your writing is really great , I am very enjoying this storyAuthor's Response: Hey thanks! Oh man, I'm having a ball with the next chapter. I hope to have it up soon, but I'm not sure. Thanks for reading this! Have you read the others of this series? Report Review
Great fic !!!
I love this series, I read all three , I am really enjoying , I have to know what happen next !!
update soon :)Author's Response: I will, I really will try and get that up. Gosh, this took a popularity jump over the past month. I thought I would have to abandon it or something, but I had a feeling this chapter was special. It'll be nothing compared to what I have cooking next! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Please do! i would love to chat with u! Tell me when and im there (im checking a lot cus im reading other stories and i assume ur online) lol so yea tell me when and ill be there.Author's Response: That "meet the author" thing looks like too much for me to do at the time. I'm busy with other things, such as writing that chapter. But I'll try to let you know somehow if I find a way. Umm...thanks for reading again! :) Report Review
Your welcome :) And yes i have read other opinions and i cant say anything because its their thoughts. Again, this is one of the best stories that i have read so far on this site, and still think all 3 are amazing.
-apotterAuthor's Response: Wow, you really are checking every hour. I need to put up a meet the author feed or something so we can chat sometime. I've just started writing the next chapter now, if I'm in the zone, I won't go to sleep 'til it's done. It's around 10:30 right now. Again, thanks for the motivation, I can't tell you how much I needed it :) Report Review
Ugh!!! I love this series!!! I found it yesterday night and read all three! I stayed away until 3 am reading! One thing i must say is that the Ron and Hermione story is boring me a bit. I basically like to focus on Harry and Ginny! (big supported on that bit) Please keep writing! Dont listen to what people are saying. You are an amazing writer that keeps getting better and better. Love the twists your adding each chapter!
Please UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!
I find myself checking every hour for a new update.
Out of all the Fan Fictions that i have read this is the one that has hooked me for good. Truly amazing.
I like how u showed Ginny at her worst. In the book she always tough and we never learned whats going on in her head. If you read this and think about it from another persons point of view she still looks strong and brave.
Again please update soon!
-apotter.Author's Response: Oh my gosh, this is exactly what I needed to get me motivated! I mean, I know I should just be writing for enjoyment, but this is exactly what I needed to get back to this fic. I guess you read all the other reviews I got...weren't all too heart-warming, know what I mean? But, hey, those reviewers were just giving their advice and opinions. Exactly what I want and expect.
But after awhile, I began to lose my motivation. But you just made my day (or night XD) I'm going to get writing right NOW! okay, I'll study for biology quiz first, but then i'll get writing NOW! Thank you so much! Please keep an eye out for my next chapter! I promise you it will be worth the wait! Report Review
Just get to the part where they kiss already! anticipation!Author's Response: Yeah, well...I love writing like this. It'll make the kiss so much better, if it ever happens...dun dun dun! Report Review
Great story , I like it :)
poor ginny , she doesn't diserve that , harry is such an idiot !
update soonAuthor's Response: Ha, yeah, but I'm sure Harry will come to his senses soon. I mean, he admitted he loved Ginny, right? Thanks for reading! Report Review
I really , really like this this story !!
I hate Eliza, she is annoying..
please update soon :)Author's Response: Eliza's my favorite character in this fic, since she's my own creation. I love having the freedom to do what I want with her. Thanks for reading! Report Review
love it and can't wait for moreAuthor's Response: Yep, I've been gathering up my ideas for the next chapter, I plan to begin writing it soon! Thanks for reading! Report Review
Hi HPFFAwesome: I've wanted to review many times as I read through your trilogy but I couldn't pinpoint what confused me about your storyline. Now I think I can give you a useful review and summarize my thoughts properly.
First, you have an engaging writing style and an energy that seems to ignite the flow of your story. I stayed with your stories because I liked the energy and the little interesting subplots you introduced us to, such as, Hermione's pregnancy and Ron's new job, their future as a married couple or maybe not, Elisa losing her job and her depression, Harry's irritability and indelicate way he handled that situation.
What had me so confused is that there wasn't much background or character development, especially for Elisa. I mean, who is she? Harry died with Ginny as the last thought in his mind. AU or not, it's hard for many of us to break away from that. Also, while I'm a huge H/G fan, I didn't have a problem with the introduction of a new love for Harry. Other than the fact that she's a blond beauty, I didn't learn anything more about why she captivated Harry's heart over Ginny. However, the way you portray Ginny, (manic depressive, bipolar come to mind), I could see Harry wanting to end the relationship. But, just saying that the relationship wasn't working for me was frustratingly tepid. Especially with their history fighting Voldemort, rescuing Harry from the Dursleys, etc. I guess what I'm trying to say is that it was hard to "like or love" either Harry or Ginny.
Then, Ginny used the Veritaserum and knows the truth. But she blew the doors off the place and terrorized everyone to get what she wanted to know. She also blatantly used someone to get to Harry. Hard to empathize with that person.
Now I'm sitting here without character development on Elisa and two main characters who I don't know anymore in Ginny and Harry.
Then the thought struck me. You're going to expose an elaborate plot to change Harry's and Ginny's personalities, break them apart and have a new love for Harry to keep him imperiused so that he never gets back with Ginny. Why? Because the remaining Deatheaters know that an H/G union would provide a magical bond and leadership for the wizarding world that would thwart the rise of the next evil wizard. When that is discovered, Harry and Ginny become themselves again and defeat the perpetrators and live "happily" ever after. Right? Just kidding...
It's been a fun read and I will stay with it because I believe that you will work your magic and it will end with us still in love with our flawed heroes. Well Done. PWAuthor's Response: Hey, thanks for the feedback! Also, it's great that you're able to look past some of the extreme OOC and just enjoy the plot of the story. It really means a lot to me. Yes, I know it can be a bit confusing in places, and I'll keep trying to iron out the kinks. Thanks for reading! Report Review
why is ginny so pitifull here? oh well, im really a ginny/harry fanAuthor's Response: Ha! Pitiful could be a word used for Ginny. I wanted to try something different, and it all depends on the reader for it. Some people liked the new Ginny. Some people hateed it. I thought it was something new! Thanks very much for reading! Report Review
pleaseee pleaseee please put up the next chapter!Author's Response: I don't know when I'll be able to get it up, but I know that I'll keep it in mind. I've began to write it, so keep an eye out for it. Thanks for reading! Report Review
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