Oh my god. There's so much fluff in this gorgeous, adorable story.
My teeth hurt from the sweetness and I LOVE it. Please keep going, it's gorgeous.

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Wow, I'm really impressed with the way that this story reads and the realistic-ness of it. It's wonderful and really builds Audrey's character beautifully.

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This Quidditch date was described so well.

And oh... she loves him. You've just tipped the sweetness scales. And I do hope that whatever it was that he was going to say matched her sentiments as well.

I have to say that your pace with these two is perfect as their relationship grows. You explain her feelings so well.

You are very skilled as a writer with your many characters and in keeping the story interesting and at a great pace. You should be very proud of yourself on a job well done.

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper

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Awe, they are holding hands. Sweet.

I really like that she feels so comfortable talking to him about anything. And really, I enjoy the conversation of why they are working in the Ministry. It gives some more insight into these two.

I am really enjoying your story and I'm happy to have tried it out.

Great job,
Dark Whisper

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Mettling souls. I hope everyone lets up on her soon. It can be frustrating when friends and family don't see what you do, poor dear.

Their little date was really cute and sweet. And Percy is as adorable as can be in taking things so slowly. It shows his respect for her and his sweet shyness as well. She will need to be patient with this one. Tee hee.

Hurray for the "fantastic amount of kissing."

Great job,
Dark Whisper

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Awe... their first kiss was so sweet! He was nervous... adorable! 'What's wrong with him?' Hahaha!

I LOVE her timing... "half second... 2 seconds, 5 tops." LOL! That had me laughing out loud, it was so cute!

I must say that I really like her father. He seems so patient and I see him as a big teddy bear type. He is wonderfully supportive. :)

Reading on...
Dark Whisper

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This chapter was so sweet with such an innocent evening. You described her nervousness throughout the day really well. And Percy is so backward, he is just adorable.

Your descriptions and characterizations are actually inspiring, you do it so well and so naturally. It seems you have a wonderful insight to human nature.

Reading on...
Dark Whisper

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This is really sweet. Victory Day would be hard on him, indeed. :(

I love how she is so hard on herself, but really, they are so alike. its amusing. I'm glad that he is coming around and finally asked her out for a drink. So sweet.

I loved her reaction to seeing the famous Harry Potter himself. Very cute.

This is a super sweet story written extremely well. Great job.

Dark Whisper

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Ah, we see Percy in a more shy characterization, which is what I would assume he would be like. He has such humble beginnings, being part of the Weasley's and all... and it seems to fit him. I'm so glad that he apologized to her.

And Cepheus, yikes. Was he a Slytherin? Seems like it. I loved how you described what he breathed and ate for breakfast. Hilarious and very creative.

You are doing an excellent job at characterizations for every character that you have introduced so far.

I'm liking your story more and more as I read along.

Great job!
Dark Whisper

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Wow... it really is a very different department from her last. It is good that these people can laugh and have some fun.

I liked how you created the first meeting with Percy. You describe him really well.

You also describe a perfect "first-day-on-the-job horror story" with the papers flying everywhere. It's a good thing Percy already knows how to remedy the situation.

Great second chap,
Dark Whisper

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Ronsgirl,

Well, you have really painted a great picture of Audrey in this wonderfully written first chapter.

Mr. Cornwall reminds me of my former boss that I could not stand. Moira is wonderful. Where was she when I needed her? :)

Her dad sounds really lovely and I really enjoyed your magical element... the color changing roses and the feelings that you gave them. Very creative.

Dark Whisper

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I read this about 6 months ago and I was really disappointed to find it hadn't been updated in ages as it was such a good story, and it was really believable. And Audrey was perfect, and Percy seemed likeable, and Audrey family's was awesome! So I'm back here as you've been nominated in the ship off in the hope this may spark your imagination into continuing writing it, as I really do love this story, and I would love to know the end! Kiana !

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I love this story! One of the best and most credible Percy/Audrey fics I've read! Thankyou!

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I justread thriught this ff, and i found it magniffecient!! This is so well written, and I love that Audrey is shy :P

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please please please write more! LOVE the story!!! update soon PLEASE!

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please please please write more! LOVE the story!!! update soon PLEASE!

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Please tell me you'll be updating soon. I'm going crazy waiting. PLEASE! :)

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What a fantastic read so far!

There isn't enough good Percy fanfiction out there. Which is a shame really because he's an interesting character.

I love your Percy and Audrey, just love them. They are believable and well rounded. I can see all of the characters you've introduced fitting right in the Harry Potter universe.

I also like your descriptions, enough to get the point across without the excess. If that makes any sense?

Your style is addictive, I couldn't stop reading. Normally I don't read WIPs but I couldn't help myself.
It's now 4:30 am, and I have to say that I'm so happy that I stumble across such a good fanfic.

I look forward to the next update ;)

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That was so sweet! I think I just developed an inner Percy fangirl

Author's Response: Excellent! I'm glad to hear it. :-) Very happy to hear you are enjoying this fic - I plan to update soon (finally!)

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Really great.! I'm looking forward to continuing

Author's Response: Thank you!

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I Love Harry. This chp was so sweet. ! You make Percy sound hot.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked Harry's appearance. :-)

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I really liked this chp. It was believable . . . no love at first sight!

Author's Response: Haha, that's right - they are both a little too grounded for that! Thank you for reading!

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This is not a by chapter review, I'm just going to go ahead and do an entire story review.

i'm not too much of a percy fan, to be honest..and I didnt think i would really enjoy reading about him or audrey so i figured i'd just read a chapter or two and go to bed...but after reading those first two chapters, i couldnt stop clicking next! i always pictured anyone percy would marry would be as bitchy and self absorbed as jkr made him out to be in her books. HOWEVER i really enjoyed your point of view! i wish you would continue this story, I'm totally addicted(: excellent work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts. I am glad you are enjoying this fic, especially not being a big fan of Percy in general.

I have read some Percy/Audrey fics before, and it seemed to me that most people have always pictured Audrey one of two ways - either as a clone of Percy or as his exact opposite (free-spirited and so forth). I have never thought that either of those personality types would go well with him.

I am hoping to get an update out in the next week or two (mid-September). Thank you so much for your review!

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Wonderful!

It's good to see Percy relax a little, please finish soon!

Author's Response: I am hoping to get an update out soon - thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Wait, you mean there is no more written. Sad day. I hope you continue it. It's very good. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I have been really busy but hope to have an update soon ('tis September as a write this - so sorry for the late reply!)

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