love it :) this is amazing :) keeep it up! :)Author's Response: Thank you, im glad you think so. Hopefully the next chapter will be completed soon, and uploaded even sooner. Thanks for reading :) Report Review
Welcome back. I like this story. I hate the cutting stuff but i get why its in there.Author's Response: Thank you :)
Im glad you are enjoying the story, I think I will be toning down the cutting. I want to start concentrating on the characters and the story more, instead of just Hermiones depression. Hope with this change you will enjoy the story more, and not be so bothered by the cutting scenes. Report Review
I can relate to your struggles because of trying to keep it together when I was at uni. I had to do a lot of prison visiting which entailed leaving one day and getting back the following day without rest. I actually sat an exam after one such excursion! Sorry as it's not relevant to your story which is ace by the way. I'm looking forward to your next posting as I like the way it is going so far.Author's Response: Im sorry about what you had to go through. Its not easy, I understand. Im trying to balance uni with all the things going on at home and work, I will be working two jobs soon as well which makes me wonder when I'll have a moment to breathe. Thank you for reading my story and im glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully the next chapter will be finished and uploaded soon. Take care, thank you :) Report Review
Hey sorry to hear about the hard time you're going through, I hope it will get better soon.
I really like this story, and I think it's got a really good direction, I don't think it was rushed, maybe not alot of detail, but that's good because you don't want to be reading about who was wearing what and junk like that.
Anyway, I thought it was great, and I'm pretty sure people understand you're situation, so it's okay not to update so often, I mean we will be disappointed but we will faithfully remain here waiting for you, so it's okay :)
I hope everything goes well for you. :)Author's Response: Thank you for your support. Things are rough at the moment, but hopefully in the future they will get easier. Im glad that writing is a form of escape for me, always has been to be honest. Hopefully I can finish the next chapter soon and get that uploaded. Thank you, once again. Take care :) Report Review
I really like how malfoy is very similar to his character in the book. The ones where he is nice, don't really fit him.
I'm excited for you to keep writing. :DAuthor's Response: It makes me unbelievable glad to hear you say that. Im trying to keep him as canon as possible under the circumstances, which is proving to be quite a mission. Im glad you are enjoy the story. Take care xoxoxo Report Review
I think you need to add some drama. I'm kinda getting bored, to be truthful. Add some drama! Make something drastic happen. Hermione gets pregnant from her horrible raping. Harry or Ron or both catch her cutting herself and death is close...will she survive?! Draco kidnaps her for Voldy for a repeat incident when Ron and Harry save the day! Idk, make something happen! Otherwise, you've got a good story. Keep it up :)Author's Response: I promise that in the coming chapters things will pick up and it will get more exciting. Im glad you are enjoying the story, thanks for the review. Take care :) Report Review
Oh, wow, good . My hands became to hurt when i read the razor part :DAuthor's Response: Thank you. Im glad that you liked the chapter. I wasn't very sure whether it was any good. Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot to me. The next chapter will be up soon hopefully. Im writing it right now. Xoxoxo Report Review
Wow! Love this story! this is an amazing chapter! :)
hope to see more chapters soon!
JillianAuthor's Response: Yay, you like the story! It means the world to me to recieve such positive comments about what I write. I promise to have the next chapter up in a few days. Report Review
I love this story so far, I can't wait until the next chapter:)Author's Response: Dont worry you wont have to wait too long for chapter five. I am writing it as fast as I can. Report Review
I'm curious because this chapter doesn't give too much away so I'm glad the next one is up! lol No wait for me, haha. Good start, the story grabbed me and I want to know more. =)Author's Response: It makes me so happy to hear that you are enjoying the story. Hope you enjoy the next chapters as well. Report Review
sounds good... but poor Hermione! :(Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Hopefully things will improve for Hermione from now on... Report Review
Good story so far i look forward to the next chapter keep it up! :)Author's Response: Thank you, Im glad you are enjoying the story so far xoxo Report Review
Brilliant!! Cant wait for the next chapter !Author's Response: Thank you :) It means the world to me that you are enjoying the story so far xoxo Report Review
I really liked this !! Well done !Author's Response: Thanks you :) Report Review
Please update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next!
:)Author's Response: I will be updating very soon :) I just have a few school assignments that I need to complete first, then I will be posting chapter three xoxo Report Review
Great start! Can't wait to see what happeneds next.Author's Response: Thank you :) The next chapter is almost finished, so I will be updating shortly. Just waiting to finish some final exams at school first xoxo Report Review
wow is she dead? did she die???wow i like it:)
exited to keep reading:))
update asap:) or my hear will stop kust like 'Mione's!:(((
well maybe ot but i need to give a dramatic look dont i?/:)))
love it:)Author's Response: :D im glad to hear that you are enjoying it --As to what has happened to Hermione, well you are going to have to wait and see.Yes i know im mean, making you wait :p xoxo Report Review
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